Author Topic: Brad The Bully Story  (Read 230825 times)

barsk

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Reply #75 on: November 21, 2019, 07:52:52 PM
@assketchem

Pretty shitty stealing the hard work of one of the only authors constantly producing quality content in this genre. That's how you end up with 0 new quality  content being produced because people stop or don't see the point starting with people like you stealing their stuff. Sad...
he is not stealing this.he is paying.it is we that read this that are steailing
he did not steal it.he paid for it.its the people who read it here that are stealing
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Reply #76 on: November 21, 2019, 09:39:49 PM
and to be honest,i hope he post more



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Reply #77 on: November 24, 2019, 02:23:36 PM
and to be honest,i hope he post more

Yes, me too. Thanks a lot for sharing here



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Reply #78 on: November 25, 2019, 07:02:09 PM
@assketchem

Pretty shitty stealing the hard work of one of the only authors constantly producing quality content in this genre. That's how you end up with 0 new quality  content being produced because people stop or don't see the point starting with people like you stealing their stuff. Sad...
fuck off



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Reply #79 on: November 25, 2019, 07:08:24 PM
i search a lot for stories about this theme.i dont find anything good :( but thank tou so mucj for sharing what you got :)



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Reply #80 on: November 26, 2019, 10:57:20 PM
Yes clearly the reason for the lack of "quality” content is because everyone is stealing each other’s material.

I just want everyone to know that I  thought about it and weighed my opinions on this for a very long time before I decided go out of my way to “STEAL” every last chapter of this retarded story and share it here. I don’t know if anyone remembers when Bottom originally posted the first book on literotica, but everything was there and it was FREE. He took it off and started a patreon where he would start posting chapters 1 or 2 at a time, when I asked him why he said it was to motivate him to keep writing the story. Sick. Since then not much has changed only I have to pay for it now and the content is released a whole lot less frequently and the QUALITY of the content is significantly disappointing after what I’ve come to expect of authors in this genre especially bottom. His patrons are writing the story for him at this point and if you call that quality then by all means keep paying for it. The ONLY reason I "stole” it to share here is because if the lack of content, it’s dry as hell out there for this genre especially if you guys don’t know where to look. I’ve been with this community for a long time; Since before this forum, before the forum before this one, and even before the forum that Bluvelvet started before that. I saw a frequently asked question in the topics and I saw something that I could provide for the community I care about. If you ask me, the reason for the lack of quality content isn’t because people are stealing or people don’t know how to make it. It’s because people take something good and then turn it into bullshit and want to charge you for it.

@Volkona and if you had a guts to speak up on this then why don’t you have the guts to create your own "quality content”. My response to you is fuck the system, fuck your equal lack of effort, and fuck your dumbass waste of a reply to this topic.

*furthermore I want everyone who reads this to know that for the reasons listed above and before, That I don’t like this story anymore and am no longer supporting it and as such will no longer be able to "steal” this “quality” content for you.

I hate Patreon. I find the concept of having to pay a subscription to some unknown guy who doesn't have any obligation to actually go through his promises aberrant. A lot of people creating their patreon do it to have a monthly pay check doing half assed work. I understand Bottom, he wants to make money of his work. He should sell his books when they are finished just like he did when he wrote book 1. It's amazing how you can buy a book for 20$ with everything edited nice and clean but with patreon you'll pay twice as much (if not more) for less content and it might never be finished.

So thank you for sharing this story. I like parts of it but I honestly skip 80% of it. I don't care for Pissmoap's humiliations and it's becoming harsher and harsher. I wonder how long it took for book 1 to be finished and since when book 2 began. I feel like book 1 was done quickly but it's been forever since book 2 started.



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Reply #81 on: November 27, 2019, 12:32:12 AM
I have to agree with the quality of bully stories does seem to go down hill as you go more into the story, ive read so many stories on literotica over the years for this genre and very few of them are good in terms of writing from start to finish, they always go down unrealistic paths that either sound stupid, ruin the flow of the story or throw away good plot development to feed horny readers.



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Reply #82 on: November 27, 2019, 02:01:06 AM
I have to agree with the quality of bully stories does seem to go down hill as you go more into the story, ive read so many stories on literotica over the years for this genre and very few of them are good in terms of writing from start to finish, they always go down unrealistic paths that either sound stupid, ruin the flow of the story or throw away good plot development to feed horny readers.

This tbh, about the only ones that I consider an exception to that is conflicted (Pity the updates are slow as shit though, but can't rush art I guess), and a soccer mom and a bully, although admittedly I thought the ending wasn't all that great



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Reply #83 on: November 28, 2019, 09:56:19 PM
Just to weigh in, I think the issue with the story going kind of downhill is ultimately that the most paraphilic people out of the audience are those that give the most money. The story is clearly gravitating away from the sexual dominance of brad and more to the sexual submission and humiliation of milksop. I still support the Patreon for the occasional regular, straight content that originally attracted me to the story, but I can't help but admit it seems to be slowly being phased out.
Ultimately, the issue is that the only people willing to really throw money at the author are the people who are very deeply into things that the original story wasn't quite about. I have a feeling this is how many, many Patreons go. I've heard a lot of artists are actually sickened by the furry porn they themselves draw, and do such paraphilic content only because it pays more.

Trying to be non-judgemental and politically correct about the whole thing, though. If it really goes even further downhill then I'll probably just silently retract my patronage and look elsewhere. There's not much else to do at this point.



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Reply #84 on: December 31, 2019, 08:59:44 PM
gonna bump this up as there is a new chapter out



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Reply #85 on: February 01, 2020, 12:23:41 AM
I Really enjoyed this story my favourite part was the seduction of Mrs Hunter hopefully instead of continuing with the same characters we see new seductions of teachers and moms.

I would have changed some scenes around though with mrs hunter and I would have liked more talking with her.



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Reply #86 on: February 04, 2020, 06:56:14 PM
It seems a lot of us here agree that it's going in a different direction. As this is a free market, it's ultimately a democracy. We should make it clear in his comments on Patreon (which you can do without pledging) that we liked the original feel of the story. If it's loud enough, he will end up pivoting his writing. What may be true is that none of us are willing to pay extra (I'm not, frankly) just to support the story, while the people who urge him to take the story in the current direction are probably the only ones paying extra. I'm one of the only people in the comments on Patreon who say I'm not into the gay/sissy stuff, which there is an increasing amount of. If there's only one person complaining on Patreon, nobody is going to pay much attention.



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Reply #87 on: February 19, 2020, 07:09:59 PM
I'm not sure if you need to pledge to see it, but he announced that he's ending the story. He posted the ending on Amazon. It felt a little rushed, but it ultimately wasn't too bad.

I have mixed feelings, but looks like it's over. If anyone has any suggestions for similar content (albeit with a little less gay/sissy stuff), I've love to hear about it. Doesn't have to be in written form, either.

There are a few people (maybe just 2 or 3) that have tried writing spin offs, they are frankly of lower quality, both in terms of content and just use of English.



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Reply #88 on: February 19, 2020, 07:17:38 PM
please post ending for people less fortunate, thanks



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Reply #89 on: March 05, 2020, 05:02:29 AM
ok here is the last parts of the story which is better than the last few ones but is not as good as when he started writing and it also shows it was kind of a rush job