Author Topic: Conflicted - Best ever mom and bully story?  (Read 4480 times)

clutterbuck52

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on: September 28, 2018, 12:25:02 AM
I'm sure many people here are familiar with the story. I discovered "Conflicted" by Cuckoldson on Literrotica a couple of weeks ago, and I find myself going back and rereading it all the time. Like I want to spend time with Leslie and her Bully Boy lover. I have read a LOT of erotic stories, but never been struck like this with any other story. Any others had this reaction? Can anyone recommend any so well written stories?

Looks like Cuckoldson takes his time writing new chapters, but he seems very committed to this story, so I trust more chapters will come. Anyone have any thoughts about possible outcomes?

Edit: I should of course have included a link, so here it is: https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=2148359&page=submissions. Go ahead and read all of them. They're all good.
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Reply #1 on: September 30, 2018, 10:07:41 AM
It's the only story I follow apart from DizzyDean's, most of the rest are unsatisfying and derivative NTR stuff. Gotta appreciate an author that takes their time and builds the characters. Still, even for Cuckson, the next instalment is taking too long. It might be dead just as it was getting really good.



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Reply #2 on: September 30, 2018, 11:40:13 AM
Gotta appreciate an author that takes their time and builds the characters. Still, even for Cuckson, the next instalment is taking too long. It might be dead just as it was getting really good.


I don't know ... If you look at the publishing dates for his stories, he has been working on this story from 2014, some years publishing numerous chapters and other stories, some years only one or two. So I still have hope there will be more.

Also, with the next chapter, I think he's facing his toughest writing challenges yet. Handling the inevitable confrontations between the protagonists, Leslie and Stuart, and their antagonists, Lewis and Malcolm, will take a lot of thinking, planning, writing and probably rewriting. So I still have high hopes.



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Reply #3 on: October 01, 2018, 01:42:59 AM
I agree, it's the best there is in the genre. I love how its from Leslie's perspective, it adds so much to the story. Cuckoldson used to post semi frequently on the old forum, I wonder is anyone in contact with him?



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Reply #4 on: October 01, 2018, 10:13:58 AM
That would be really brilliant, if Cuckoldson would be willing to communicate with his readers.

He has an intriguing statement on his profile page on Literotica: "Son to a slutty mum. Step-son to his once-upon-a-time school-yard bully. Here are my twisted stories and creations inspired by my life." I know it's the Internet, and people can say anything, but it may be the truth. And it would be really brilliant if he would talk about that.



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Reply #5 on: October 03, 2018, 12:38:18 AM
That would be really brilliant, if Cuckoldson would be willing to communicate with his readers.

He has an intriguing statement on his profile page on Literotica: "Son to a slutty mum. Step-son to his once-upon-a-time school-yard bully. Here are my twisted stories and creations inspired by my life." I know it's the Internet, and people can say anything, but it may be the truth. And it would be really brilliant if he would talk about that.
If that is true, it would be great if Cuckoldson told us his experiences with his mother and his bully (stepfather) in the forum



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Reply #6 on: October 03, 2018, 03:34:25 PM
It's my favorite story of this genre! On the old forum that got shut down Cuckoldson also wrote a revised version of the first chapter that isn't on literotica: https://web.archive.org/web/20180120100155/http://bullyrebuild.forumotion.com:80/t70-conflicted

On another forum that closed before that he was a bit more active. He for example posted this thread where he answered a few questions in Leslie's character (unfortunately the formatting seems to be broken in the archive so it's a bit hard to read): https://web.archive.org/web/20160909004404/http://bluvelvet.canadian-forum.com:80/t29-leslie-watkins-qa




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Reply #7 on: October 03, 2018, 06:27:24 PM
UCNT, you are a prince (or princess?) among men! Very interesting to read the rewritten Chapter 1. And the Leslie Watkins Q&A is a brilliant idea, just too bad Cuckson didn't have time to answer more questions, or make a Q&A for Stuart or Lewis.

Also, looks like there may be other nuggets to mine on the old site.




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Reply #8 on: October 05, 2018, 09:41:47 AM
I guess I'm sort of a Johnny-Come-Lately here, discovering things most of the other forum members know already, but I hope there are others like me, exploring and making thrilling new descoveries related to this hot fetish.

Anyway, I found a new gem yesterday, Amanda's Path to Discovery by Dee_Purple: https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=2395283&page=submissions. Very well written story of a mother's erotic adventures, and her son's confrontation with his mother's sexuality. No Bully involved though, but the son is thoughroughly put in his place. Interestingly it is written by a woman, but she only has two stories, and hasn't added anything since 2017.

It still can't compete with Conflicted, however, mainly because of Leslie's character development through eleven chapters, and the promise of new chapters to come.



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Reply #9 on: October 05, 2018, 08:58:12 PM
Loserson and Forever316 made the same rather interesting observation i the thread about Conflicted in the old forum (link in UCNT's post above) regarding the conversation between Coleen, Stuat's mom, and Leslie. That Coleen, by knowing about Stuart's bullying of Lewis and not seeming to be the least bit concerned about it, in a way is condoning it, and thus is revealing a rather cruel streak in her personality.

I can imagine that Leslie's visit to dinner in the Warren houshold will be rather exciting. Explaining her thoughts and feelings to Coleen is a great opportunity for Leslie to become more aware of her own desires related to humiliating and bullying Lewis, and Coleen may be an important accomplice for the two protagonists. I can imagine the three of them, relaxing at the dinner table, giggling and laughing while Stuart entertains them with stories about the creative ways he has bullied Lewis ...




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Reply #10 on: October 10, 2018, 03:41:21 AM
That would be really brilliant, if Cuckoldson would be willing to communicate with his readers.

He has an intriguing statement on his profile page on Literotica: "Son to a slutty mum. Step-son to his once-upon-a-time school-yard bully. Here are my twisted stories and creations inspired by my life." I know it's the Internet, and people can say anything, but it may be the truth. And it would be really brilliant if he would talk about that.
If that is true, it would be great if Cuckoldson told us his experiences with his mother and his bully (stepfather) in the forum

Definitely, would be interesting to know the story behind that.



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Reply #11 on: October 10, 2018, 10:42:30 PM
In the old old forum, when Cuckson first published "Conflicted", the story is introduced with: "This is fiction but there are bits that are based in truth." Make of that what you want, but I think "Conflicted" is very important to Cuckson/Cuckoldson. And perhaps that is why he takes his time with each new chapter; it must be told the right way.



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Reply #12 on: November 12, 2018, 02:49:18 AM
I'm sure many people here are familiar with the story. I discovered "Conflicted" by Cuckoldson on Literrotica a couple of weeks ago, and I find myself going back and rereading it all the time. Like I want to spend time with Leslie and her Bully Boy lover. I have read a LOT of erotic stories, but never been struck like this with any other story. Any others had this reaction? Can anyone recommend any so well written stories?

Looks like Cuckoldson takes his time writing new chapters, but he seems very committed to this story, so I trust more chapters will come. Anyone have any thoughts about possible outcomes?

Edit: I should of course have included a link, so here it is: https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=2148359&page=submissions. Go ahead and read all of them. They're all good.

To this date, I think brad the bully is the best cuckson/bully story ever... it almost has all elements of such story and it would be always good if such kinds of stories are in view of son more than anyone else...