Author Topic: Need author for this INSANELY HOT story  (Read 8130 times)

CuckSon20

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on: July 11, 2020, 02:56:30 PM
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Reply #1 on: July 12, 2020, 01:56:25 AM
Mom couldn't refuse because she was so horny at that time.

I get that this is fiction and largely produced by amateurs, but what do you expect someone to do with the above quoted other than remove it? also yes I recognize that this is a writing prompt but still,. Instead of that, perhaps

"Mom had trouble refusing on the count of remembering all of the frustrations with [X], realizing that this was a chance to unwind from all of that she acted against her better judgment and did what the primal instinct of every woman, of every mother always commands [Breed/sex/submit/etc.]."

Yeah that's not good but I'm not a writer. You know what I mean.



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Reply #2 on: July 12, 2020, 02:14:26 AM
I'm having more time off from work to focus on my hobbies and be more psychologically happy.

The outline you described is something I would love to delve deeply into by writing a detailed one-shot short story. Though what you outlined is a pretty common fantasy within the niche 'son-cuckold' community; its also a very powerful one. The idea for the situation to end in a feeling of comfort and security is titillating as well.

Though I do have a few questions and ask if I take a few liberties with the idea.

-Firstly, why 'Brad'? Is he a significant person in your life? Or someone you made up? Would you like me to describe him as some alpha male in real life? Or would you prefer him to be a completely made up character?

-Secondly, you said both you and your mom would be forced to walk around nude. What are both your body types? That's important.

I may have more questions later. But I'm very interested in writing this story. Happy to chat more.



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Reply #3 on: July 12, 2020, 04:56:34 AM
I'm having more time off from work to focus on my hobbies and be more psychologically happy.

The outline you described is something I would love to delve deeply into by writing a detailed one-shot short story. Though what you outlined is a pretty common fantasy within the niche 'son-cuckold' community; its also a very powerful one. The idea for the situation to end in a feeling of comfort and security is titillating as well.

Though I do have a few questions and ask if I take a few liberties with the idea.

-Firstly, why 'Brad'? Is he a significant person in your life? Or someone you made up? Would you like me to describe him as some alpha male in real life? Or would you prefer him to be a completely made up character?

-Secondly, you said both you and your mom would be forced to walk around nude. What are both your body types? That's important.

I may have more questions later. But I'm very interested in writing this story. Happy to chat more.

Thank you for your interest. We can chat happily whenever you want. I am sending you a message right away.

Answer of first question: I used to have fights with this dude Brad when I was in junior high school. He was not my bully, in fact we were good friends but sometimes we used to fight and things used to get pretty rough and quarreling sometimes. He used to be more masculine and manly than most guys in school and I was jealous of him getting most girls where I got none. Guess it had a psychological impact on me. So, ye, he is an alpha male.

Answer of second question: My mom has a good physique, not at all shaggy. She is a working mom and works hard. So she has to stay fit. On the other hand I am sort of an average guy. Nothing special nothing very ordinary. But although I am 19 I look younger because of a slightly poor health. Both European.

PS: Ask me all you need in my inbox. Make this your masterpiece. Looking forward to hear from you.  :)



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Reply #4 on: July 12, 2020, 06:03:44 AM
Mom couldn't refuse because she was so horny at that time.

I get that this is fiction and largely produced by amateurs, but what do you expect someone to do with the above quoted other than remove it? also yes I recognize that this is a writing prompt but still,. Instead of that, perhaps

"Mom had trouble refusing on the count of remembering all of the frustrations with [X], realizing that this was a chance to unwind from all of that she acted against her better judgment and did what the primal instinct of every woman, of every mother always commands [Breed/sex/submit/etc.]."

Yeah that's not good but I'm not a writer. You know what I mean.

I am not a good writer either. I have tried my best to express my idea. Rest is up to the writer



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Reply #5 on: July 28, 2020, 01:11:32 AM
I am not a good writer either. I have tried my best to express my idea. Rest is up to the writer

I tried to be diplomatic about it but you leave me no choice.

Your idea is shit and the premise is clichéd, incomplete and just plain dumb.  You need a new premise, or well, an actual premise. Best of luck to you.