Bully Fucks My Mom

GENERAL DISCUSSION => Fapping Materials => Topic started by: uglyfucker on March 20, 2020, 11:38:07 AM

Title: Poll on commissions you'd like to read
Post by: uglyfucker on March 20, 2020, 11:38:07 AM
Hey guys if you'd noticed I post commissions her every once in a while. I have plenty of ideas but not sure in which order to have these done in. So if you will please vote for your favorite plots/models and I'll try to do them in the order of most popular. Also feel free to shoot me ideas when it comes to any of these stories.

I will look at the poll on the last day of every month and go with the highest vote getter. Thanks.
Title: Re: Poll on commissions you'd like to read
Post by: DarkMask on March 22, 2020, 01:15:32 AM
Mom Prom and Big Booty Dominican mamis

Also question, how come you're not publishing your stories on LitErotica?
Title: Re: Poll on commissions you'd like to read
Post by: uglyfucker on March 22, 2020, 02:47:01 PM
Well there's a few reason for that:

1. Literotica is quite anti netorare in general, especially mom ntr. Posting it there will do nothing but garner hate and mean spirited comments towards the hard work my writers have put into my commissions. So I post it here where I know it will be more appreciated.
2. When I asked the writers to do these stories they said I could post them on a forum but I'm not sure they'd want me posting it on bigger sites.

I'm just gonna keep posting them here for now. I can also post pdf links to all stories if it makes them easier to read.
Title: Re: Poll on commissions you'd like to read
Post by: livingwithhotmom on March 22, 2020, 02:55:31 PM
I can also post pdf links to all stories if it makes them easier to read.

Yes please.
Title: Re: Poll on commissions you'd like to read
Post by: spiky green cactus on March 22, 2020, 06:55:47 PM
Archive of Our Own is a good site to post taboo stories.
Title: Re: Poll on commissions you'd like to read
Post by: DarkMask on March 23, 2020, 09:03:46 AM
Makes sense, though I think you'll fine you'll get more positive feedback than negative. People always bitch and complain on stories they don't like but there's a real demand for these types of stories on Lit and we only see a few a month.
Title: Re: Poll on commissions you'd like to read
Post by: uglyfucker on March 31, 2020, 09:49:18 PM
Alright so the votes have been tallied for March 2020 and the story you guys most want to see is Quarantined. I will take it off the list and you guys can continue voting on what you'd like next. I may also add some new titles but I'd like to knock some of these out first.

You guys still have some time left to give me any ideas you'd like to see in the story, I'll be putting in the request on Friday, April 3rd. If not then I will go with my own ideas along with some of my writer on Fiverr. You can look forward to the story in the next few weeks in it's own thread. :)
Title: Re: Poll on commissions you'd like to read
Post by: uglyfucker on April 23, 2020, 04:08:25 PM
Alright it's looking like Mom Prom is going to be the winner so far. This is going to be quite a different story as the alpha male will be the one getting humiliated by his mom and the ugly beta. Please message me with any ideas if you have any or the story will be up to me and my writer.
Title: Re: Poll on commissions you'd like to read
Post by: stfe9 on April 23, 2020, 07:15:44 PM
Alright it's looking like Mom Prom is going to be the winner so far. This is going to be quite a different story as the alpha male will be the one getting humiliated by his mom and the ugly beta. Please message me with any ideas if you have any or the story will be up to me and my writer.

Why stop at the mom, let him have the girlfried too  ;), just saying.
Title: Re: Poll on commissions you'd like to read
Post by: uglyfucker on April 24, 2020, 12:35:31 AM
Alright I can definitely find a way to fit the alpha's girlfriend into the mix too. Also I was wondering if I should make it a mind control kind of story or just have the mom/gf just be super slutty and throw themselves at the nerd. I mean They're both unrealistic scenarios.
Title: Re: Poll on commissions you'd like to read
Post by: randomguy121 on April 24, 2020, 03:48:52 AM
Alright I can definitely find a way to fit the alpha's girlfriend into the mix too. Also I was wondering if I should make it a mind control kind of story or just have the mom/gf just be super slutty and throw themselves at the nerd. I mean They're both unrealistic scenarios.

This is just a suggestion, but sexual corruption via blackmail sounds more interesting and more realistic. Mind control isn't as appealing. And having the ugly nerd trick the MILF that he's a pathetic "nice" guy to go to prom with him, only to blackmail her through her son or some other revelation could lead to more exciting situations. Just my thoughts, though.
Title: Re: Poll on commissions you'd like to read
Post by: uglyfucker on April 25, 2020, 12:13:21 AM
Yeah that's the thing, I can't really over complicate things even if I wanted to. I like my stories to be around the 5000-7000 word mark so I can only have so much put into it. I'd rather have all these ideas written out in story form eventually than do huge 10000 plus word epics on a few stories.

I do think I'll have the mom definitely be willing to cuck/humiliate her son while maybe the gf will be a bit more reluctant, kind of kill two birds with one stone. Keep the ideas coming though I haven't contacted my writer or really even put anything together yet. I do think I'm going to have the perspective be from the son's view especially since we don't see it from the Bully's POV as much.

How dirty should the story be? I was thinking we could have the nerd (think a fat ugly stereotypical loser like Carl from Jimmy Neutron) be a very sexually repressed individual who has some crazy fetishes like pissing on the mom and having her eat his ass in front of her cuck son lol. Of course this will be at the house after the night at school with the mom and nerd embarrassing the alpha cuck in front of his friends/gf all night.

Should the son be a big muscular douchebag on the outside but in reality be a tiny dicked loser who can't please his girl and makes his mom laugh whenever she thinks about his cock?

In the beginning of the story, how brutal should the alpha bully the nerd? How does the mom find out and start coming up with her plan to fully emasculate her no good asshole son?

I'm drawing inspiration from the Finch/Stifler rivalry from the American pie movies too. It'll be like a much darker version of it with a way hotter mom. Also all the hentai ntr where the MC is cucked by an uglyfucker ;D It's a good break from the alpha Chad stealing all the women cliche stories.
Title: Re: Poll on commissions you'd like to read
Post by: randomguy121 on April 25, 2020, 03:31:30 PM
Who is the Bully's GF modeled after? Also, most of your ideas sound interesting. Some rough or dominant/submissive scenes would be great towards the MILF. As a way for the ugly fat short nerd to vent out his frustration through proxy.
Title: Re: Poll on commissions you'd like to read
Post by: Enthusiast on April 26, 2020, 07:08:25 AM
How about getting her drunk? Not a lot, just enough to Let go off her sexual inhibitions, and scalate from there? The guy initially doesnt know how to react, but at the end he reveals the man he has inside
Title: Re: Poll on commissions you'd like to read
Post by: uglyfucker on April 27, 2020, 02:20:05 PM
Who is the Bully's GF modeled after? Also, most of your ideas sound interesting. Some rough or dominant/submissive scenes would be great towards the MILF. As a way for the ugly fat short nerd to vent out his frustration through proxy.

Didn't consider the gf at first, but I'd like to have her be a thick latina girl. This way the alpha can lose his smoking hot white mom and latina gf in the same night. How about Jailyne Ojeda?
https://www.instagram.com/jailyneojeda/?hl=en

Like I said in the poll the mom will be based on Lindsey Pelas who can kinda pass for a milf in her early 30s so it works for me.

The story will be focused on the mom's breasts and the gf's ass, the nerd will have his way with both of them to the alpha's humilation.

Title: Re: Poll on commissions you'd like to read
Post by: uglyfucker on April 27, 2020, 02:22:40 PM
How about getting her drunk? Not a lot, just enough to Let go off her sexual inhibitions, and scalate from there? The guy initially doesnt know how to react, but at the end he reveals the man he has inside

Man I hate to say it but I hate stories with drunk/drugged moms. It's the only reason I don't read bluvelvet's stuff although his writing is impeccable. Maybe I'll make her a bit tipsy or something to make her more horny but she's going to want the nerd's dick even when she's sober. Yeah it's less believable but so is the genre to begin with. Way more humiliating for the son to see his mom be a huge whore while she's sober.
Title: Re: Poll on commissions you'd like to read
Post by: uglyfucker on April 27, 2020, 02:28:13 PM
Another thing I have to consider is what's keeping the alpha jock from bashing the nerd's face in when he sees him with his mom. Now I'd like for this to be kinda a beliveable reason. Was thinking the mom knows that her son's on steroids/gear while he's been on the football team and if he interferes with her prom date she'll report him to the College admissions and he'll lose his athletic scholarship. That's both brutal and realistic at the same time, you know how serious jocks take their sports.
Title: Re: Poll on commissions you'd like to read
Post by: straw_bot on May 20, 2020, 01:25:17 PM
Another thing I have to consider is what's keeping the alpha jock from bashing the nerd's face in when he sees him with his mom. Now I'd like for this to be kinda a beliveable reason. Was thinking the mom knows that her son's on steroids/gear while he's been on the football team and if he interferes with her prom date she'll report him to the College admissions and he'll lose his athletic scholarship. That's both brutal and realistic at the same time, you know how serious jocks take their sports.
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Any updates? Is the chapter almost complete?
Title: Re: Poll on commissions you'd like to read
Post by: uglyfucker on May 20, 2020, 09:39:09 PM
Unfortunately both of my Fiverr writers areextremely busy with long queues right now, and I really don't want to give such an in depth story to a writer I haven't tried out yet. With a lot of people stuck home these days it's not surprising they're so busy though. I have both Mom Prom and Big booty Dominican Mommys ordered though, whichever gets done first will be posted first. I might also have some short stories posted from other writers but they won't be from the poll.

I'm going to take Mom Prom and BBDM off the list though and I'm adding a few new stories you guys can vote for, The Good Son and Mom's Appetite.

Whoever wants the outlines for Mom Prom and BBDM can message me but they're full of spoilers and I'm not changing anything since I've already ordered them. Hopefully it'll tide you over but I'm waiting just like you guys are.
Title: Re: Poll on commissions you'd like to read
Post by: randomguy121 on May 22, 2020, 03:20:15 PM
Unfortunately both of my Fiverr writers areextremely busy with long queues right now, and I really don't want to give such an in depth story to a writer I haven't tried out yet. With a lot of people stuck home these days it's not surprising they're so busy though. I have both Mom Prom and Big booty Dominican Mommys ordered though, whichever gets done first will be posted first.

Whoever wants the outlines for Mom Prom and BBDM can message me but they're full of spoilers and I'm not changing anything since I've already ordered them. Hopefully it'll tide you over but I'm waiting just like you guys are.

Well, that's a shame. I can only hope the chapter you requested gets completed before the end of the month. When your story is finally released,  it would be great if you accompanied the Mom Prom story with some images that connects to the plot. The female characters you modeled them after are popular instragram models, so you have a lot of material to work with, with their images providing a good summary or glimpse of what's happening in the story.
Title: Re: Poll on commissions you'd like to read
Post by: uglyfucker on May 22, 2020, 09:30:50 PM
Yeah I can do that and I've been working with an artist on Fiverr who does anime type drawings who might do some pictures connecting to the story.  Like I said it's just a matter of waiting now but the stories are coming.
Title: Re: Poll on commissions you'd like to read
Post by: uglyfucker on June 01, 2020, 04:51:58 PM
Mom Prom is finally finished and posted. Hope you guys like it. Big booty Dominican mamis is next. After that it looks like either Mom's Rising Suns or Wheel of Misfortune will be the highest vote getter, so I'm accepting ideas for those two as I make outlines for them.
Title: Re: Poll on commissions you'd like to read
Post by: uglyfucker on July 19, 2021, 03:46:25 PM
Hey guys it's uglyfucker if enough interest is still shown in the stories in this thread I may still have them written. Let me know here or in a pm.
Title: Re: Poll on commissions you'd like to read
Post by: MilfLover3245 on July 23, 2021, 04:04:50 PM
Hey guys it's uglyfucker if enough interest is still shown in the stories in this thread I may still have them written. Let me know here or in a pm.

Would love to see you do the "The Good Son" idea
Title: Re: Poll on commissions you'd like to read
Post by: tyler0durden3380 on July 23, 2021, 10:46:45 PM
I'm a huge fan of Cousin from Hell.
It would be great to read the sequel (mom and cousins make like nothing happen and tease son,..mmmhhh)
Title: Re: Poll on commissions you'd like to read
Post by: lasuite1 on July 23, 2021, 10:52:19 PM
The Good Son
Title: Re: Poll on commissions you'd like to read
Post by: beholder on July 25, 2021, 02:06:10 PM
I vote for  The Good Son, but long story with many chapters  :)
Title: Re: Poll on commissions you'd like to read
Post by: uglyfucker on July 25, 2021, 03:29:20 PM
Alright I'll be moving on with the Good Son then sometime in the future. I may change the mom I picked and have it be apart of the Sam/Shanie saga though. Though I guess that doesn't matter so much you can fantasize about any woman you want reading my stories :)

I'll keep you guys updated.
Title: Re: Poll on commissions you'd like to read
Post by: devetak on July 27, 2021, 08:54:07 AM
I loved the horror ideas. Voted for Catching the Booty Monster, seemed a little more fun. Mom's Appetite was good concept too but not a vore fan. I'm sure the Good Son will turn out hot.
Title: Re: Poll on commissions you'd like to read
Post by: uglyfucker on July 31, 2021, 02:11:53 AM
Alright guys I think I'm gonna go with ariyanastories with the "Good Son". She's good value, has hardly any limits, and will let me post the stories anywhere. Of course I have no idea when the story will be finished but chapter 1 should at least be out sometime in august. Winter Nightmare is my primary focus right now and that's with another writer who I've done quite a bit of stories with.

https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=5476817
Title: Re: Poll on commissions you'd like to read
Post by: Fakker007 on August 02, 2021, 07:38:54 AM
Alright guys I think I'm gonna go with ariyanastories with the "Good Son". She's good value, has hardly any limits, and will let me post the stories anywhere. Of course I have no idea when the story will be finished but chapter 1 should at least be out sometime in august. Winter Nightmare is my primary focus right now and that's with another writer who I've done quite a bit of stories with.

https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=5476817

Appreciate your work man