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on: October 09, 2019, 07:13:28 PM
Hello everyone!
I am looking for someone (possibly a confirmed writer) who could accept a commission for an erotic story about of a fragile and wimpy arab teenager with small cock who sees his arabian MILF mother get fucked, and then impregnated by his white best friend. I hope there will be someone here who will want to accept this work, which of course will be paid!

Here's a quick synopsis:
A mega curvy arabian babe confesses to her son that she is sexually frustrated by her sexually impotent husband (his father), and is looking for a lover. Since she and her son have always been very close, she asks him to find her a powerful and dominant lover.

The son is very disturbed by this news. In parallel, he helps a little white boy of his class who is bullied, and becomes his best friend.
In the locker room, the son realizes that the white boy is very hung, and since it is his best friend, and he has done him a favor, he asks him if he wants to satisfy the desires of his mother, thinking that his new best friend is nice enough not to take advantage of the situation.
The white boy accepts eagerly, being a virgin, but things quickly turn to hell ... Because the little white boy, who were bullied all his life, finds the way to release all his frustration, and starts to bully the son.
He totally hatefuck the arab mother who had 15 orgasms per sex session, and who is very satisfied with the dominant side of her new lover. The white boy get his revenge of his social outcast life on the innocent arab son and his mother, making him do his homework, threatens him by saying that he will impregnate the mother, etc ...
To the delight of the mother, and who is very sexually satisfied...
When will this end?


Details of the writing:
You have to focus on the mother thick and curvy physique, with her huge breasts and wide hips (it's even better you describe how her breasts and ass flutters with each of her step). Even when the mother betray her son, she must not be mean to him, she must stay very sweet.
If she betrays him with his bully, it's only because she's sexually frustrated. She can not do anything to help it, the bully attracts her too much, he awakens her huge sexual instinct. She apologizes to her son every time she gets fucked, promises it is the last time, but can not help but succumb soon after. Of course, her husband is as wimpy as his son, unable to satisfy the enormous sexual appetite of his wife, and unlike his son, he must never realize that his wife is cheating.
There must be a scene where the bully slips into the bedroom, and impregnates the mother while her husband is sleeping next to him, under the eyes of the son who was attracted by the sounds of crackling of the bed.
As for the bully, he must be white, Caucasian, and proud to be.
The family, including the wimpy teenager, the MILF and the ignorant father must be from the middle-east. I would like some brutal raceplay here (the whites are the superior race, the arabs have small cocks and its unable to satisfy their females, that kind of stuff)
The bully must have an absolutely huge cock, with a lot of description on it. In the sex scene, do not hesitate to emphasize his huge size in the little pussy of the mother, the fact that he crosses the cervix and he fucks the uterus. (But without hurting the mother)
Regarding the sex itself, I do not like the preliminaries. If possible avoid cunnilingus and others, (oral sex at the limit) and concentrate on the fucking itself. Regarding the sex position, I love missionary, especially the mating press (it is related to my impreg kink)
The only thing I like outside of sex are sloppy kisses, with tongue and everything. It must be a symbol of the betrayal of the mother, especially when she kisses the bully in front of her son.
 To know that the mother will never be nasty or contemptuous towards the son. It's just that the bully is an ultra-hung white male alpha, who gives her incredible orgasms, and she can not do without him.
   
I would like that there is only one sexual position: the missionary mating press

Finally, it is necessary that the "impregnation" is very marked. The bully wants to give a white baby to the MILF (a bit of raceplay here would not be too much).
The wimp in question should not be excited to see his mother get screwed, but horrified. (really important)

The text must be written either in the first person, through the eyes of the fragile teenager.
 
Do not hesitate to contact me for more details, or to communicate me the price.
Thank you very much, and good luck!




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Reply #1 on: October 09, 2019, 07:26:43 PM
Oh yeah, for it to be simple,  here's what I want in a nutshell:

-size and virility kink
- MILFs and bimbos
- older female/younger partner
- excessive semen
- cock cleaning/worship
- humiliation/degradation
- dirty talk
- netorare/cuckolding
- mind break/bad ends
- raceplay



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Reply #2 on: October 09, 2019, 09:25:13 PM
Someone that does these paid commissions is rainbowtouch. They are active on reddit and hentai foundry. They wrote Mother And Vice, it's pretty good: https://www.hentai-foundry.com/stories/user/rainbowtouch/36637/Mother-and-Vice

Contact them they will write an awesome story for you.



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Reply #3 on: October 09, 2019, 09:44:56 PM
Someone that does these paid commissions is rainbowtouch. They are active on reddit and hentai foundry. They wrote Mother And Vice, it's pretty good: https://www.hentai-foundry.com/stories/user/rainbowtouch/36637/Mother-and-Vice

Contact them they will write an awesome story for you.

Thank you very much for your answer, i'll contact him at once!



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Reply #4 on: October 10, 2019, 01:15:43 AM
Rainbow touch is a VERY GOOD writer but she's charges a steep fee; also is this story meant to be shota? Not sure if she'd write it. Not trying to sound negative, I hope you get it written, the idea sounds fantastic brother. Diamond Doll resembles the mom you've described if you haven't heard of her https://www.instagram.com/watchdiamonddoll/?hl=en



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Reply #5 on: October 13, 2019, 10:18:01 PM
I am taking commissions:
https://www.tumbex.com/momcucks.tumblr/posts?tag=mine

I have a specific Arab Mother cuckold rp that can be found under the posts tagged mine as well. Please get in touch with me if you would like me to write a story/caption for you.



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Reply #6 on: October 14, 2019, 04:01:17 PM
Rainbow touch is a VERY GOOD writer but she's charges a steep fee; also is this story meant to be shota? Not sure if she'd write it. Not trying to sound negative, I hope you get it written, the idea sounds fantastic brother. Diamond Doll resembles the mom you've described if you haven't heard of her https://www.instagram.com/watchdiamonddoll/?hl=en

Thank you very much, bro! I hope to!
I'm still open for all suggestions of that sort!



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Reply #7 on: October 16, 2019, 09:53:31 PM
Hi. Im interested in your story. I'll send you a message



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Reply #8 on: October 19, 2019, 08:02:09 PM
Hello everyone! I just wrote an introduction to my story, and I'd like to share it with you:

My name is Nabil, and I’m an eighteen-year-old at Central High. My family is Arab, we moved long ago, but people like us here, not like they all said they would back home. My father works in the city, with a good job to get us a big house, which we love, even if his work take the better of him.
Everything happened so fast ... I mean, I really do not know how we got there. Just thinking about it ... I do not know what to do or what to think ...
Maybe I should start again from the beginning.

My name is Nabil, I'm 17, and I'm in high school. My life has never been very exciting, I must say. A little cushy life all the same. A stable family, a wonderful girlfriend, etc. But I have to confess, these days ... Let's say that my existence has undergone some changes. Big change. Before that, I was a normal guy, and maybe a little more. Without boasting, I have always been complimented on my physique, and it's true that I'm pretty handsome. No the "manly" type, but the rather twink type. I have big caramel eyes, a little L shape nose, nicely plump cheeks ... In short, we can not say that I was once frustrated in regard of girl. Well, maybe, but not to take them to my bed... My problem was the fact that i've always been a poor lover.
 
This is where things get complicated ... It's not easy to confess, but… I have a small dick. But really small. A small impotent noodle, framed by tiny testicles with emptiness. It's sad, when you think about it ... Frankly, I do not care a bit. Well, I'm not lying, it makes me a little sad when my ex smiled at me with embarrassment when I lowered panties in front of her, but it's okay.
My family is of Algerian origin (arabian country), we moved here a long time ago, and we like it a lot. My father works in the city center, with a fairly well paid job that allows us to live in a big house that we love. My mother, meanwhile, does not work. ... Ah, my mother ... We are all models in the family, and my mother Fadela is no exception, far from it! I have to admit, even if it's my mother ... It's a damn hot sex bomb. I think all my friends have told me how much they would like to be in bed with her. I wonder about the reason for the strong smell of excitement exhaled from mom. Lack of sex maybe. It’s logic, since Daddy is not often there. Her huge breasts, her large hips and fleshy butt ... Mom is a sex goddess. I do not understand how my father can deliberately prefer his work to his wife! But no matter, I take care of her in his absence… I wouldn’t like my father be cuckolded! No, really, I do not worry about that, my mother is all that is most faithful.
I basically grew up knowing that my mother was pretty much the most beautiful person In town, with her extraodiary curves. She is stunning even she had gained a bit of weight in the early days after having my siblings and I. You must know that me and I mother share since the day of my birth a fusional relationship. She has always been there for me, and vice versa. Her gentleness and kindness have always been the most important things for me in this world. Of course, I always got on well with my father, but with my mother, it's always been special.

Since I was 12-years-old I was hounded by boys my age and older, saying how much they thought my mom was attractive. Whenever I brought friends over, I would see them stare and blush like they were lost in a dream, seeing the love of their lives for the first time, their first crush on a older woman. I remember specifically when an eleven-year-old friend of mine *(you can change his age if you want)*, a lil white boy named Nick said to me at the public pool "Can I be you're dad?" Nick said this assuming my father was an absent father because he never saw him around , when in fact I saw my father was always, it's just that "Because I think I'm in love with your mom and I want to be with her." What was so crazy was he wasn't saying it mockingly or as a joke in any way, he was legit serious with true emotion in his eyes as he said it with respected sincerity. The rational part of me respectfully told him she wasn't interested and that my father was very much around, it's just that he's very taken by his job. I remeber to this day the way that the piercing blue eyes of my friend stared at my Ample in breast and hip and thigh mom. Her dark yoga pants did as little to hide her bouncing bubble-butt as her blue spaghetti-strap top did did to conceal her heavy tits, which hung with natural perfection. Her massive breasts undulated up and down inside her cooking apron. Her nipples, so large and pronounced that they were detectable to the eye even through three layers of clothing, led the charge. From there, her arabian body narrowed at the waist and then exploded again, this time in the other direction. Not only would her ass not quit, as the old saying went, but on this 38-year-old mother, it was working unpaid overtime.

For the record, Nick and I knew each other because Nick used to be harassed and bullied until I intervened to stop it all. To tell the truth, I'm far from being a vigilante, and I hate arguing or confronting anyone, it's just that I'm a guy, to say it simply, that everyone appreciates. I think I'm pretty handsome, sociable, and it just took me a little gentle discussion with the bullies to make them stop bothering poor Nick, who apparently had been treated like this since his childhood. And from there, he and I have become, so to speak, the best friends in the world.
However, I sometimes wondered why he was the target of all these nasty things on the part of his comrades.
I mean, Nick was a nice boy, he was even cute with his big blue eyes and blond hair like honey. The only thing that was a bit weird about him was that he was still wearing pants that were way too big for him, and that he seemed to be scared to notice something about him. This thing, I finally understand the day when he and I went into the locker room to shower after a long session of sport.
Once past the locker room, Nick suddenly became anxious, and began to look at me as if he was afraid that I would suddenly make fun of him.
I assured him that I would never do such a thing, that he could tell me everything, that I was his best friend. After a long hesitation, Nick began to undress ...

The boy was wearing a pair of tight red briefs with white piping. Just below the boy's smooth midsection, the crotch was bulged out obscenely, stretching the folds of the fabric to a saggy semi-tautness. Beneath there seemed to be concealed something weighty and thick- a length of flesh folded over on itself several times. My hand went to my mouth to stifle further exclamations. There was no doubt about what i was looking at. Through the leg holes of the briefs i could see hints of a pair of massive, hairless testicles, each easily the size of a man's fist. As Nick pulled his shorts off over his feet, a smell assaulted my nose- the pungent copper odor of semen.
Nick clutched his hands around the waistband of his briefs, beginning to pull them down over his slim hips, white elastic dragging against hot, porcelain skin. He tugged them down, and what was revealed was more impressive, and more grotesque, than what had been hinted at by the bulging fabric. Though the boy's cock was completely flaccid, it still seemed to be engorged and wrist-thick, extending from his hairless pubis in a fleshy stalk and then bending back over on itself and travelling all the way to the other side of his pelvis before ending in a moist prick-helmet that was partially obscured by foreskin.
My minuscule arab dick cowerd in fear before that white monster... I couldn't compete.
My unbelieving eyes tried to calculate the length. Thirteen inches? Fourteen? Against the boy's angelic, pre-pubescent body, it looked even larger. All of this was in addition to a pair of heavy balls like two large apples in a sack of golden, hairless skin. The scent of sperm blasted me in the face, and a semi-transparent.

For a moment, the only sound was my sharp inhalation of breath. It was the biggest cock i had ever seen, medically or otherwise, and seemed to radiate foul virility. For the first time in my life, I felt emasculated before this demonstration of white manhood. I now understood why he was always harassed! I had noticed that all his bullies were Arabs like me, and it was probably out of jealousy, because of the comparison between their hairless Arabian mini dick, and Nick's huge virile white cock.
But as far as I was concerned, I did not feel jealousy. Only admiration.
So I did everything to reassure my friend, telling him he did not have to be ashamed of the size of his penis, on the contrary, we had to be proud! There was a lot of talk, and I felt that I had just taken a heavy weight off Nick's shoulders. To believe the brilliance of his blue eyes, he felt a lot of gratitude to me, and nothing but the idea of having helped my best friend to accept himself fills me with joy ...
Joy that did not take long to evaporate a few days later, when my mother asked if she could talk to me about something important ...





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Reply #9 on: October 20, 2019, 09:30:19 PM
Have you tried downloading the Fiverr app? There are some people on there who will write for cheap. You just gotta look for "erotica writer"



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Reply #10 on: November 03, 2019, 09:23:46 PM
Have you tried downloading the Fiverr app? There are some people on there who will write for cheap. You just gotta look for "erotica writer"

Thank you very much pal, i went on the Fiverr app, and i indeed found some people willing to write my story for a small price!
If someone know another platform like Fiverr where you can hire writters for those kind of stories,  do not hesitate to let me know!