Author Topic: What would be your ideal plot for a bully story?  (Read 38422 times)

CowboyDude92

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on: November 27, 2019, 01:12:20 AM
So many of you here most likely have your own ideas of what you would like in terms of the general plot of a bully fucks my mom story to develop. This could be a sports player that bullies the son or a bully finds out who someones mum is and the story goes from there. Im interested in hearing what people would write if they were to sit down and write their own ideal story them self, maybe we could see a common theme develop between people on what we all like.



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Reply #1 on: November 27, 2019, 01:57:37 AM
One idea is that the son would have about more of a spine, as in he stands up to his bully, and wins, but of course, that doesn't stop him from fantasising about his bully fucking his mom his mom, but doesn't know that his fantasy is actually happening



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Reply #2 on: November 27, 2019, 06:04:17 AM
I"m not a good writer, so I can't articulate my version but hopefully it gets you guys going. My plot would Involve the innocent fat son as the protagonist, the innocent spanish mother and like 3 or four black bullies. It would take place in the winter during christmas recess and would involve the bullies forcing the son to violate his mothers trust by either taking pictures of her nude or drink drug her and let them into the house but not to fuck her immediately instead playing up a sort of psychological mind game of will they or won't they for the protagonist. Either way everything is normal goes on for a while until on christmas eve unbeknownst to the son the bullies confront the mother with the evidence and start fucking the shit out of her. The son comes home and is tied up and initially forced to watch the mother and then take part in the corrupting of the mother. this debauchery lasts until new years with the mother and son being willing slaves of the bullies. By the way I would have pictures in the story because that's always hot.



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Reply #3 on: November 27, 2019, 08:07:24 AM
A hung younger bully beating up a slightly older son and then fucking his mom. The mom should initially show her love for her son, and then witness him being humiliated by his younger bully. Bonus points for SPH and non-consent/reluctance on the mom's part.



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Reply #4 on: November 27, 2019, 12:26:34 PM
One idea is that the son would have about more of a spine, as in he stands up to his bully, and wins, but of course, that doesn't stop him from fantasising about his bully fucking his mom his mom, but doesn't know that his fantasy is actually happening

That would be a great plot for a story, I dont think ive read any that go along that path.



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Reply #5 on: November 27, 2019, 12:28:16 PM
A hung younger bully beating up a slightly older son and then fucking his mom. The mom should initially show her love for her son, and then witness him being humiliated by his younger bully. Bonus points for SPH and non-consent/reluctance on the mom's part.

The younger bully one doesnt seem to be that common of a theme but is certainly a good path to take. You could easily do the humiliation part with the bully being younger.



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Reply #6 on: November 27, 2019, 04:22:06 PM
I have plenty of ideas but there is one which I like most. When I read erotic stories, I want hot sex and with bullies' stories, if it's from the son's POV, the sex is indirect. It's hearing through the walls or from a phone.

So my idea is to have a son read his mother's diary. At the start, we learn the mother is gone with a message "I'm not coming back" left on the kitchen table. Parents are divorced (or the father is dead) so it was just the mother and son in the house. The son wants to know what happened to his mother. He noticed the changes from the past six months. She dressed more sexily, she was gone more often and the previous well kept house wasn't anymore. He goes through his mother's belonging and finds her diary.
At first it's all about the stress from work, raising a child on her own and her inability to find a good man. Then it changes. He reads how his mother scheduled an appointment with his bully's parents after her son came home with a bruise. The parents were there but the bully was. He talks to her how he is better than her son, how much of a real man he is and how hot she is. He half seduced and half forced himself into her. The son is shocked by this revelation and more shocked when he reads that his mother came duing the rough sexual encounter. She is horrified by the fact that her body enjoyed being brutally fucked while her mind denied the pleasure.
After that the diary goes about how she couldn't stop thinking about the bully and how she slowly submitted to him. The sex becomes nastier and nastier as she lost herself in the relationship. She even quitted her job to spend more time with the bully and used her savings and her son's college founds to pay for everything the bully wanted. As the son reads the diary, he also remembers some events of the diary from his POV. Like a discussion between his bully and his friends about his new bitch and the new watch she bought him. Or when his mother missed his birthday because of work but the diary read she was gangbanged by his bully and his friends.

With this setup, you have both POVs to have the best experience. The hot sex and the degradation thanks to the mother's POV and the son's humiliation thanks to his POVs.

You can even have the son read the diaries for weeks and jack off to it. You see how he is changing from this as he begins to imagine his crush and bullies fucking until he reads that it actually happened.



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Reply #7 on: November 27, 2019, 09:16:59 PM
One idea is that the son would have about more of a spine, as in he stands up to his bully, and wins, but of course, that doesn't stop him from fantasising about his bully fucking his mom his mom, but doesn't know that his fantasy is actually happening

That would be a great plot for a story, I dont think ive read any that go along that path.

Mhmm, another idea that I came up with, that I don't think has been done, is thehe the mom is still married to her husband, and cucks him with the son's bully, maybe the husband is into it, or had to be forced to accept it, either way he has to watch as his wife gets pounded by the guy that bullies their son




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Reply #8 on: November 27, 2019, 10:45:12 PM
Mhmm, another idea that I came up with, that I don't think has been done, is thehe the mom is still married to her husband, and cucks him with the son's bully, maybe the husband is into it, or had to be forced to accept it, either way he has to watch as his wife gets pounded by the guy that bullies their son

I think that would work quite well in a story, could do an open marriage for the parents, something along those lines.

For me it would be something along the likes of the mother falling sleeping with the bully without her knowing who he was and the bully could be a popular sports figure in the school and their paths cross together. One of my favourite stories is "Watching My Mum Go Jack" the build up and development of the story was great with a good ending to the chapter but the author only ever did one part which really sucked as there was a lot of potential.



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Reply #9 on: November 27, 2019, 11:11:04 PM
Mhmm, another idea that I came up with, that I don't think has been done, is thehe the mom is still married to her husband, and cucks him with the son's bully, maybe the husband is into it, or had to be forced to accept it, either way he has to watch as his wife gets pounded by the guy that bullies their son

I think that would work quite well in a story, could do an open marriage for the parents, something along those lines.

For me it would be something along the likes of the mother falling sleeping with the bully without her knowing who he was and the bully could be a popular sports figure in the school and their paths cross together. One of my favourite stories is "Watching My Mum Go Jack" the build up and development of the story was great with a good ending to the chapter but the author only ever did one part which really sucked as there was a lot of potential.

Aye, it's a pretty good piece of work, hope the author writes another chapter at some point, but with the slow updates to conflicted, it might take a loooooog time



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Reply #10 on: November 27, 2019, 11:50:32 PM
I’m a fan of the hardcore snuff stories myself but I like to see the son tortured and beaten first



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Reply #11 on: November 28, 2019, 03:02:45 AM
My plot ideally involves a conservative mom with a happy family, husband is good at sex etc. Son should be a senior with age of 20+ and son's bully who is his junior in college should be ideally 18 years old.

1) Bully would beat the shit out of son in the college insulting son in-front of his girl friend
2) Son's girl friend would cheat on son with the bully
3) Son cribs about this to mom , when mom finally decide to get to help son. But the more mom hears about the bully, the more she gets impressed with bully's nature
4) My daughter also hear the story about bully and she go in search of the bully and finally become his cock addict
5) when son tells mom about her daughter also falling for bully, mom cannot control herself , she ask son to arrange meeting with bully to make things straight

the rest is the story... i would also like to see son finally becoming a sissy, who loves to get bullys cum from mom/gf/daughter's cunt..



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Reply #12 on: November 28, 2019, 02:23:26 PM
All of my ideas pretty much involve raceplay, thick latina moms with hung white bullies or son's friends. Either tits or ass will be a huge focus of the story, sometimes both, and I ALWAYS base the mom off of a real woman, usually an instagram model or porn star. I suck at writing so I just come up with plots and relay them to actual writers in commissions.

A very important thing too is that the mom is always cruel/naive/sneaky, and wants sex never coerced or forced against her will. That shit is a huge turn off.
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Reply #13 on: November 28, 2019, 06:52:35 PM
I think its different with everyone to be honest, some people like the physical bullying parts in stories but some prefer the mental bully you could say like name calling or something along those lines.



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Reply #14 on: November 30, 2019, 09:34:14 AM
I like the stories where the son is a wimp (nerd,gets bullied,virgin,small dick,etc) and has the hots for his mom and tries to peek in on her and goes through her clothes and masturbates to her. I like when the mom is consensually having sex im not into her being raped or forced against her will. The most against her will type thing im ok with would be agreeing to sex as a bargain (like to stop a bully from picking on the son) but she quickly enjoys it and is a willing participant. As for the partner obviously the sons bully is one option but I also like the sons friends or even his teacher or boss. The son would eventually witness his mother with the male and be aroused and jealous but continue to watch and masturbate. I like stories where the son gets involved instead of just watching or not even being aware of whats going on. Something I dont see much of but I really like is for the mother to catch the son and confront him but still be motherly and loving (lots of stories have the mother become very abusive and sometimes even disown the son and make him move out and im not really big on that). The mother would take a mother/cuckold relationship with the son where everyday life she is a sweet mother to him but privately she treats him like a cuckold lover where she has him help her get ready for her lover or lovers and has him watch then help clean her up. She could even give him rewards like getting to touch her or getting a handjob.