Page 4 is not saved properly so it's impossible to read the end. Too bad

I found this
https://subscribestar.adult/nebic

His patreon page is down. Does anyone know if he posts his story on a free website?

Use novel ai, no other ai service will be good for explicit mom ntr

But it is a paid service. To be honest, I just want to test things. You're right and it's much better with things going as I imagined or close. But once you're finished your free trial, there is no more possibilities? You have to pay or the free writings regenerate at some point?
I prefer writing myself (and with novel ai I write about half the story) so I'm not willing to pay because I feel that I'll end up writing all my story ideas with AI if I pay the service 

I created another account to write another story and I really described what I wanted in each chapter but the AI gave me crappy choices and I burned my diamond without writing anything.
I prefer writing myself even if I never finish my stories so far 
I'll keep testing the AI but it's not my thing.

The first chapter doesn't make sense. It skips from the mother being out to her son hearing them having sex "again" but there was never a fisrt time he hears them. And the last paragraph talks about tne same thing as the previous one.

You should edit the first chapter before generating a second one.

I'm looking for a story I read here (I think).
The story start with the son coming home, he gets taken by his bullies in their car and one of the bullies goes to the mom while the rest of them, with the son, listen to the bully, on a phone call, seducing the mom and have sex with her. I don't remember the name of the story and I tried, but failed, to look for it.

How can you read such a block of text? Space your story in shorter blocks to make it easy to read.

Quote from: Qwem on October 13, 2021, 08:14:59 AM

I'm loving this story. My only real complaint is how quickly the mother was seduced, but it's not a big deal.

That was an initial concern of mine.  I considered going back and adding a longer conversation and seduction scene, and I may return to that in the future, but for now I plan to just continue from where they are now.

It is a fairly brief encounter that leads to her submission.  The in-universe reason is that she's very weak-willed and suggestable, very liable to let herself be dominated, not to mention lonely and exceedingly sexually frustrated.  The real reason is that I was impatient to get to the more lurid details and didn't have as well conceived a plan for what happened that lead up to it.  Aside from that, I wasn't sure how much pre-sexual action and dialogue people would put up with before they either skipped ahead or quit reading.

I'm happy to hear any and all feedback and critiques you weirdos have.  Keep it coming, it can only improve the story for the future.

I don't have a problem with how quick the mother is seduced. Why can't a man seduce a lonely woman this fast? Even after she learns he is her son's bully, she would feel guilty for sure, but he is giving her something she crave, dominance. It is fucked up how quick she succumbed and it's great

The story works as it is so please don't change it. The mother and son are weak and that's just the way it is. It is hot in its own way.

I also like when the mother is a challenge so why not write another story after this one? You could do something with more resistance and reluctance. Really built the sex up with more teasing.