Author Topic: A Midnight Snack (Unfinished story written for me by the great Fearless Wretch)  (Read 7284 times)

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Merry Christmas guys.  8)

Here's the story I mentioned in the Brutal Bytes thread. It is not quite finished yet but is over 90 pages, has already hit major plot points, and I thought hell why not post it as an xmas gift for you guys. You guys are gonna have to download it as a pdf as I am not uploading it to archive of our own, I'm done with that site.

This story is sort of a mix of three of my favorite stories ever, Mrs.Campbell's Bunkmate, Mommy's Love Denied, and The Cool Mom. The bull in this story is more of a pesty bratty rival but Lawrence will eventually fear the hold he has over his mom as if he is a bully. It stars the Mckays from my other commissions, with the template of Danica Collins used as Monica Mckay, but you can fantasize about any woman you want, though she is explicitly written as an extremely voluptuous brown skinned latina woman. Be warned this story has elements of incest, Lawrence gets extremely close to his mom for the first 40 pages or so.


A Midnight Snack


Monica is suffering from insomnia/sleep problems and takes solace in her son Lawrence by letting him sleep in her room, to comfort her and try to help fix her sleep. Meanwhile, at school, Lawrence must contend with classmate Richard, a pesty brat who has a history of insulting Lawrence with his perversions towards Monica, as well as being just a general nuisance. Eventually, Monica sends Lawrence out to get some remedies for her insomnia; that's when he stumbles upon Richard's dad's office, who is a sleep issue-related doctor. Soon events lead to Richard spending time at the Mckay's home, and slowly replacing Lawrence as his mom's helper for her insomnia....

https://www.mediafire.com/file/ed1mo9dszary707/A_Midnight_Snack_1.pdf/file (Updated 1/20/2023)

I will update this post with every new chapter, but feel free to start reading it already as it's quite long as is and has lots of mom ntr already. I am not taking any ideas or suggestions for this story as FW has his own style of writing and I pretty much just give him the reins.

A bit of bad news, this will probably be my last commission ever. Since 2019 I've spent a shitload of money on commissions and feel like alot of my greatest perversions have been fulfilled already. I'm working less now but spending much more time working out and playing video games, two of my hobbies which I enjoy much more than fapping. ;D And these stories can be EXPENSIVE, so I'm gonna have to make sacrifices. I absolutely don't regret having these stories written but yeah I think it's going to be a thing of the past.

For everyone late to my old stories, here's a link-https://archiveofourown.org/users/uglyfucker739/works

I haven't decided if I'm going to finish The Good Son or not, that story was gonna be alot similar to AMS, but I might see it though, we'll see.
« Last Edit: January 20, 2023, 02:32:11 PM by uglyfucker »



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It will be great to read, good luck in training, thanks for the huge amount of fap content



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Respect Your decision man …you are right…some times change is beautiful



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Very good, thanks uglyfucker



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Does this story follow the events of the previous stories with these characters or just uses these characters?

Also, what site will you be using instead of Archive of Our Own?



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This story is so good. I love it. Any more stories like this?



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also i hope this story is completed . Take your time and if this is your last story author then thank you from me.



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Does this story follow the events of the previous stories with these characters or just uses these characters?

Also, what site will you be using instead of Archive of Our Own?

Sorry for not mentioning it, this story has NOTHING to do with any previous McKay Family stories, even Monica's personality is a bit different in this one, stern and loving but with a very slutty side that she'll never show (or at least not want to) to her son.

Any future stories will be posted straight on here in pdf.

And as far as I know there will be a few more chapters but FW and I are gonna wrap things up pretty soon.



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Ah, you might wanna look into posting them on Hentai-Foundry as well, so they don't get buried here.



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First of all thanks for sharing mate.

I toally respect your decision and i am sooo fucking greatful that you realised soo many good stories for this niche man.
I always came back for stories comissioned by you and re-read them so many times. you gave a lot for us depraved fiends and i love you for it.
Really sad to hear that you stop comissioning new stories. One of the biggest losses for this genre.. but as i said it is totally reasonable and i respect that.

i wish you the best with your new more important hobbies and again THANK YOU.




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That is a fantastic story.



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Another great story. I hope there will be a sequel.

I have a question for you guys. One part is unclear to me. I mean the one when Richard is locked in the bedroom with Monica for the first time. In your opinion, did they fuck or did she give him a blowjob ? :)
« Last Edit: December 27, 2022, 12:44:45 PM by beholder »



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Sorry for not mentioning it, this story has NOTHING to do with any previous McKay Family stories, even Monica's personality is a bit different in this one, stern and loving but with a very slutty side that she'll never show (or at least not want to) to her son.

Any future stories will be posted straight on here in pdf.

And as far as I know there will be a few more chapters but FW and I are gonna wrap things up pretty soon.

Do you know how much he charges for stories? I won’t mind a commission if he is open to
it. Specially continuing My Mom The Birthday Cake story.



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Another great story. I hope there will be a sequel.

I have a question for you guys. One part is unclear to me. I mean the one when Richard is locked in the bedroom with Monica for the first time. In your opinion, did they fuck or did she give him a blowjob ? :)

Really its best left up to your imagination that's what makes the scene so hot to me, it could have been a titfuck, a bj, a handjob, etc.

@Whocarez he charges $80/5000 words. You can try to get in touch with him here, I'm not comfortable giving out his discord sorry.
https://bullyfucksmymom.com/profile/terribleguardian/

I've updated the story, new content begins on page 98.
« Last Edit: December 28, 2022, 04:32:30 PM by uglyfucker »



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Thanks!! Ill see if he replies. Also cant wait for the remaining chapters!