Bully Fucks My Mom

GENERAL DISCUSSION => Fapping Materials => Topic started by: uglyfucker on December 23, 2022, 02:17:20 PM

Title: A Midnight Snack (Unfinished story written for me by the great Fearless Wretch)
Post by: uglyfucker on December 23, 2022, 02:17:20 PM
Merry Christmas guys.  8)

Here's the story I mentioned in the Brutal Bytes thread. It is not quite finished yet but is over 90 pages, has already hit major plot points, and I thought hell why not post it as an xmas gift for you guys. You guys are gonna have to download it as a pdf as I am not uploading it to archive of our own, I'm done with that site.

This story is sort of a mix of three of my favorite stories ever, Mrs.Campbell's Bunkmate, Mommy's Love Denied, and The Cool Mom. The bull in this story is more of a pesty bratty rival but Lawrence will eventually fear the hold he has over his mom as if he is a bully. It stars the Mckays from my other commissions, with the template of Danica Collins used as Monica Mckay, but you can fantasize about any woman you want, though she is explicitly written as an extremely voluptuous brown skinned latina woman. Be warned this story has elements of incest, Lawrence gets extremely close to his mom for the first 40 pages or so.


A Midnight Snack


Monica is suffering from insomnia/sleep problems and takes solace in her son Lawrence by letting him sleep in her room, to comfort her and try to help fix her sleep. Meanwhile, at school, Lawrence must contend with classmate Richard, a pesty brat who has a history of insulting Lawrence with his perversions towards Monica, as well as being just a general nuisance. Eventually, Monica sends Lawrence out to get some remedies for her insomnia; that's when he stumbles upon Richard's dad's office, who is a sleep issue-related doctor. Soon events lead to Richard spending time at the Mckay's home, and slowly replacing Lawrence as his mom's helper for her insomnia....

https://www.mediafire.com/file/ed1mo9dszary707/A_Midnight_Snack_1.pdf/file (Updated 1/20/2023)

I will update this post with every new chapter, but feel free to start reading it already as it's quite long as is and has lots of mom ntr already. I am not taking any ideas or suggestions for this story as FW has his own style of writing and I pretty much just give him the reins.

A bit of bad news, this will probably be my last commission ever. Since 2019 I've spent a shitload of money on commissions and feel like alot of my greatest perversions have been fulfilled already. I'm working less now but spending much more time working out and playing video games, two of my hobbies which I enjoy much more than fapping. ;D And these stories can be EXPENSIVE, so I'm gonna have to make sacrifices. I absolutely don't regret having these stories written but yeah I think it's going to be a thing of the past.

For everyone late to my old stories, here's a link-https://archiveofourown.org/users/uglyfucker739/works

I haven't decided if I'm going to finish The Good Son or not, that story was gonna be alot similar to AMS, but I might see it though, we'll see.
Title: Re: A Midnight Snack (Unfinished story written for me by the great Fearless Wretch)
Post by: Zack_back on December 23, 2022, 06:59:37 PM
It will be great to read, good luck in training, thanks for the huge amount of fap content
Title: Re: A Midnight Snack (Unfinished story written for me by the great Fearless Wretch)
Post by: Tritman on December 24, 2022, 02:06:37 AM
Respect Your decision man …you are right…some times change is beautiful
Title: Re: A Midnight Snack (Unfinished story written for me by the great Fearless Wretch)
Post by: zack on December 24, 2022, 08:40:24 AM
Very good, thanks uglyfucker
Title: Re: A Midnight Snack (Unfinished story written for me by the great Fearless Wretch)
Post by: Fenix on December 24, 2022, 11:53:34 AM
Does this story follow the events of the previous stories with these characters or just uses these characters?

Also, what site will you be using instead of Archive of Our Own?
Title: Re: A Midnight Snack (Unfinished story written for me by the great Fearless Wretch)
Post by: welcome007 on December 24, 2022, 01:26:00 PM
This story is so good. I love it. Any more stories like this?
Title: Re: A Midnight Snack (Unfinished story written for me by the great Fearless Wretch)
Post by: welcome007 on December 24, 2022, 01:27:04 PM
also i hope this story is completed . Take your time and if this is your last story author then thank you from me.
Title: Re: A Midnight Snack (Unfinished story written for me by the great Fearless Wretch)
Post by: uglyfucker on December 24, 2022, 03:19:35 PM
Does this story follow the events of the previous stories with these characters or just uses these characters?

Also, what site will you be using instead of Archive of Our Own?

Sorry for not mentioning it, this story has NOTHING to do with any previous McKay Family stories, even Monica's personality is a bit different in this one, stern and loving but with a very slutty side that she'll never show (or at least not want to) to her son.

Any future stories will be posted straight on here in pdf.

And as far as I know there will be a few more chapters but FW and I are gonna wrap things up pretty soon.
Title: Re: A Midnight Snack (Unfinished story written for me by the great Fearless Wretch)
Post by: Fenix on December 24, 2022, 10:57:00 PM
Ah, you might wanna look into posting them on Hentai-Foundry as well, so they don't get buried here.
Title: Re: A Midnight Snack (Unfinished story written for me by the great Fearless Wretch)
Post by: swagger383 on December 26, 2022, 04:08:44 AM
First of all thanks for sharing mate.

I toally respect your decision and i am sooo fucking greatful that you realised soo many good stories for this niche man.
I always came back for stories comissioned by you and re-read them so many times. you gave a lot for us depraved fiends and i love you for it.
Really sad to hear that you stop comissioning new stories. One of the biggest losses for this genre.. but as i said it is totally reasonable and i respect that.

i wish you the best with your new more important hobbies and again THANK YOU.

Title: Re: A Midnight Snack (Unfinished story written for me by the great Fearless Wretch)
Post by: devetak on December 27, 2022, 08:44:26 AM
That is a fantastic story.
Title: Re: A Midnight Snack (Unfinished story written for me by the great Fearless Wretch)
Post by: beholder on December 27, 2022, 09:57:52 AM
Another great story. I hope there will be a sequel.

I have a question for you guys. One part is unclear to me. I mean the one when Richard is locked in the bedroom with Monica for the first time. In your opinion, did they fuck or did she give him a blowjob ? :)
Title: Re: A Midnight Snack (Unfinished story written for me by the great Fearless Wretch)
Post by: Whocarez on December 27, 2022, 04:30:55 PM
Sorry for not mentioning it, this story has NOTHING to do with any previous McKay Family stories, even Monica's personality is a bit different in this one, stern and loving but with a very slutty side that she'll never show (or at least not want to) to her son.

Any future stories will be posted straight on here in pdf.

And as far as I know there will be a few more chapters but FW and I are gonna wrap things up pretty soon.

Do you know how much he charges for stories? I won’t mind a commission if he is open to
it. Specially continuing My Mom The Birthday Cake story.
Title: Re: A Midnight Snack (Unfinished story written for me by the great Fearless Wretch)
Post by: uglyfucker on December 27, 2022, 11:59:59 PM
Another great story. I hope there will be a sequel.

I have a question for you guys. One part is unclear to me. I mean the one when Richard is locked in the bedroom with Monica for the first time. In your opinion, did they fuck or did she give him a blowjob ? :)

Really its best left up to your imagination that's what makes the scene so hot to me, it could have been a titfuck, a bj, a handjob, etc.

@Whocarez he charges $80/5000 words. You can try to get in touch with him here, I'm not comfortable giving out his discord sorry.
https://bullyfucksmymom.com/profile/terribleguardian/

I've updated the story, new content begins on page 98.
Title: Re: A Midnight Snack (Unfinished story written for me by the great Fearless Wretch)
Post by: Whocarez on December 30, 2022, 06:42:04 AM
Thanks!! Ill see if he replies. Also cant wait for the remaining chapters!
Title: Re: A Midnight Snack (Unfinished story written for me by the great Fearless Wretch)
Post by: SnowStorm on January 02, 2023, 07:38:32 PM
Thanks for posting this. I appreciate that in these stories written by yourself/FW that there's just enough of a sexual intimacy between the mother and son that makes the betrayal all the sweeter. I'm interested to see how this concludes, especially with the last few pages that were recently added. The descriptions of the mom are so tantalizing, I love it.
Title: Re: A Midnight Snack (Unfinished story written for me by the great Fearless Wretch)
Post by: uglyfucker on January 08, 2023, 04:14:28 PM
Thanks for posting this. I appreciate that in these stories written by yourself/FW that there's just enough of a sexual intimacy between the mother and son that makes the betrayal all the sweeter. I'm interested to see how this concludes, especially with the last few pages that were recently added. The descriptions of the mom are so tantalizing, I love it.

Thanks, the looks of the mom is always so important to me. I love Danica Collins because her face reminds me of my mom when she was younger, and then that incredible voluptuous body of hers is so motherly, it doesn't get any better than her imo for mom ntr.

Updated the story; FW has another one or two chapters left and then it's a wrap. I haven't really discussed the ending with him, I'm not sure if he's gonna put Monica and Lawrence together at the end but if he does I'm not gonna have a problem with it; it's my last story with them so I don't mind if they end up together in the end. It will be like Tatoeba Haha Ga, a mom ntr/incest classic.

Hope you all enjoy/ed what will most likely be my last commission.
Title: Re: A Midnight Snack (Unfinished story written for me by the great Fearless Wretch)
Post by: SnowStorm on January 08, 2023, 07:27:07 PM
The new pages were stellar! I'll be eagerly waiting for the conclusion, probably my favourite of the FW works I've read.
Title: Re: A Midnight Snack (Unfinished story written for me by the great Fearless Wretch)
Post by: veronica_fan on January 10, 2023, 06:02:04 AM
i love this story, i like the latina Mom to be Colombian, like Sofia Vergara or Ariella Fererra
Title: Re: A Midnight Snack (Unfinished story written for me by the great Fearless Wretch)
Post by: uglyfucker on January 10, 2023, 10:15:48 PM
i love this story, i like the latina Mom to be Colombian, like Sofia Vergara or Ariella Fererra

Awesome, like I said you guys can fantasize about any woman as Monica, that's what's great about erotic stories over porn videos.
Title: Re: A Midnight Snack (Unfinished story written for me by the great Fearless Wretch)
Post by: uglyfucker on January 20, 2023, 02:31:50 PM
Updated post with new chapter; there will most likely be one more that may be a little longer in length.
Title: Re: A Midnight Snack (Unfinished story written for me by the great Fearless Wretch)
Post by: ansens on January 20, 2023, 03:23:11 PM
Updated post with new chapter; there will most likely be one more that may be a little longer in length.
Hey i just sent you a dm can you read it please? love your stories keep it up.
Title: Re: A Midnight Snack (Unfinished story written for me by the great Fearless Wretch)
Post by: SnowStorm on January 20, 2023, 06:18:27 PM
Updated post with new chapter; there will most likely be one more that may be a little longer in length.

I'm amazed how much lewdness can be added with just a few extra pages, but then again we are at the point of payoff from dozens of pages of buildup. Looking forward to the conclusion!
Title: Re: A Midnight Snack (Unfinished story written for me by the great Fearless Wretch)
Post by: mightbehere on January 31, 2023, 02:25:10 PM
I felt like I needed to say a few words to you @uglyfucker
First of all thank you so much for all your contributions, your stories are excellent (and I hope you finish The Good Son) and the stories you commissioned are masterpieces.
Thank you very much for everything and enjoy your rest.

PS: waiting paitiently for A Midnight Snack ending.
Title: Re: A Midnight Snack (Unfinished story written for me by the great Fearless Wretch)
Post by: forsenLevel on January 31, 2023, 09:46:10 PM
Made an account just to say the same thing as the dude above.
Title: Re: A Midnight Snack (Unfinished story written for me by the great Fearless Wretch)
Post by: uglyfucker on February 10, 2023, 04:58:49 PM
Hey guys sorry I was late with posting the story, but since FW made his own thread I'm going to lock this one; feel free to air all your feelings and comments about this masterpiece in that thread though. Hope you all enjoy A Midnight Snack, the last adventure of the infamous McKay Family! :D