Author Topic: A Midnight Snack (Unfinished story written for me by the great Fearless Wretch)  (Read 14150 times)

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Thanks for posting this. I appreciate that in these stories written by yourself/FW that there's just enough of a sexual intimacy between the mother and son that makes the betrayal all the sweeter. I'm interested to see how this concludes, especially with the last few pages that were recently added. The descriptions of the mom are so tantalizing, I love it.



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Thanks for posting this. I appreciate that in these stories written by yourself/FW that there's just enough of a sexual intimacy between the mother and son that makes the betrayal all the sweeter. I'm interested to see how this concludes, especially with the last few pages that were recently added. The descriptions of the mom are so tantalizing, I love it.

Thanks, the looks of the mom is always so important to me. I love Danica Collins because her face reminds me of my mom when she was younger, and then that incredible voluptuous body of hers is so motherly, it doesn't get any better than her imo for mom ntr.

Updated the story; FW has another one or two chapters left and then it's a wrap. I haven't really discussed the ending with him, I'm not sure if he's gonna put Monica and Lawrence together at the end but if he does I'm not gonna have a problem with it; it's my last story with them so I don't mind if they end up together in the end. It will be like Tatoeba Haha Ga, a mom ntr/incest classic.

Hope you all enjoy/ed what will most likely be my last commission.
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The new pages were stellar! I'll be eagerly waiting for the conclusion, probably my favourite of the FW works I've read.



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i love this story, i like the latina Mom to be Colombian, like Sofia Vergara or Ariella Fererra



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i love this story, i like the latina Mom to be Colombian, like Sofia Vergara or Ariella Fererra

Awesome, like I said you guys can fantasize about any woman as Monica, that's what's great about erotic stories over porn videos.



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Updated post with new chapter; there will most likely be one more that may be a little longer in length.



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Updated post with new chapter; there will most likely be one more that may be a little longer in length.
Hey i just sent you a dm can you read it please? love your stories keep it up.



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Updated post with new chapter; there will most likely be one more that may be a little longer in length.

I'm amazed how much lewdness can be added with just a few extra pages, but then again we are at the point of payoff from dozens of pages of buildup. Looking forward to the conclusion!



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I felt like I needed to say a few words to you @uglyfucker
First of all thank you so much for all your contributions, your stories are excellent (and I hope you finish The Good Son) and the stories you commissioned are masterpieces.
Thank you very much for everything and enjoy your rest.

PS: waiting paitiently for A Midnight Snack ending.



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Made an account just to say the same thing as the dude above.



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Hey guys sorry I was late with posting the story, but since FW made his own thread I'm going to lock this one; feel free to air all your feelings and comments about this masterpiece in that thread though. Hope you all enjoy A Midnight Snack, the last adventure of the infamous McKay Family! :D