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What would you most like to read?

Mom the Birthday Clown - (Son attends a his friend's birthday party and can't help thinking he's seen the busty clown before...)
12 (11.2%)
Mom the Vampire - (There's a vampire attacking teenage boys in son's neighborhood. Rumors swirl abound it's someone quite close to him...)
0 (0%)
Nightmare on Grove Street - (Son has reoccurring nightmares of his mom being a huge slut around his friends...A mom ntr parody of NOES)
12 (11.2%)
Dissolving Bonds - (Son's rival plays a prank on mom, stickyglueing himself to the mom. And thus an unwanted houseguest is created....)
5 (4.7%)
The Mask - (Son is blackmailed by rival to put a mask on his mom; not just any mask but one with "powers"....)
10 (9.3%)
Body Swap - (Son has bodies swapped with his perverted classmate. Said perverted classmate is also obsessed with his hot mom....)
8 (7.5%)
Mom's accident (Mom gets into a car accident, and her surgery mistakenly turns her into a perfect looking bimbo....)
12 (11.2%)
Mom smokes with the boys (Son is smoking weed with his good for nothing stoner white friends; his thick latina mom decides to join them...)
13 (12.1%)
Mom the porn addict (Son comes home with his friends while his mom is watching porn....)
7 (6.5%)
Mom's glasses (Son's rival visits; coincidentally his mom's glasses go missing. Mom can't see without her glasses....)
5 (4.7%)
Butt Creep Vs My Mom's Fat Brown Ass (Son's younger Rival is obsessed with huge asses, particularly his mom's....)
15 (14%)
Mom's Protein shake (Son's Rival ejaculates into mom's protein shake when she isn't looking)
6 (5.6%)
Sleepwalking Mom (Son spies on Mom sleepwalking as she somehow ends up in his rival's bedroom....)
1 (0.9%)
Fitness Mom (Gymcel son watches as his mom pays more attention to a better looking albeit scrawnier boy his age in the gym...)
1 (0.9%)
Mom tutors the retard (Son watches in disbelief as his mom teaches and then seduces an ugly fat mentally retarded boy from his school)
0 (0%)

Total Members Voted: 106

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Reply #15 on: October 25, 2021, 03:24:41 PM
Mom Stolen at the Haunted House
https://archiveofourown.org/works/34672291

It's not your level this is bad

Its from the same writer who did the first two; I thought it was fine albeit the first two stories were better.

Naah bro the ghost ome is great this isn't



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Reply #16 on: October 25, 2021, 03:36:24 PM
It is what it is lol I'm gonna keep uploading them regardless of quality though  :P There are people who love it. Haunted House was meant to be more comedy focused with the twist being the nerd got the mom while Booty ghost was a straight-up cliché white brat prick steals big booty latina mom; like I said before I want a diverse set of stories here so there will be tales that float your boat and some that don't. For example the cucked commercial one won't have sex at all and instead will have the rival pulling pranks on the mom during the commercial, so it probably won't be as "good" and that's fine.

I have the Mom's a Beach one done but the quality on that one is admittedly a little low as it was done by another writer; I haven't decided if I want to post it yet or get it rewritten. I think I'll post it as I don't really want to respend money on the same story but I probably won't use that same writer again.
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Reply #17 on: October 26, 2021, 02:17:48 AM
It is what it is lol I'm gonna keep uploading them regardless of quality though  :P There are people who love it. Haunted House was meant to be more comedy focused with the twist being the nerd got the mom while Booty ghost was a straight-up cliché white brat prick steals big booty latina mom; like I said before I want a diverse set of stories here so there will be tales that float your boat and some that don't. For example the cucked commercial one won't have sex at all and instead will have the rival pulling pranks on the mom during the commercial, so it probably won't be as "good" and that's fine.

I have the Mom's a Beach one done but the quality on that one is admittedly a little low as it was done by another writer; I haven't decided if I want to post it yet or get it rewritten. I think I'll post it as I don't really want to respend money on the same story but I probably won't use that same writer again.
Waiting for it buddy



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Reply #18 on: October 26, 2021, 09:58:58 PM
Life's a beach....and so is Mom!
https://archiveofourown.org/works/34745179

Not completely satisfied with this story but it's not terrible and the author did what she could with 2500 words. May have it rewritten in the future but I'm going to focus on "The Good Son" when it comes to the Sanchez family and probably won't do as many one shots with them.

I will choose the next top-voted story Thursday Night.
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Reply #19 on: October 28, 2021, 07:32:18 AM
Wow those are all such good prompts.



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Reply #20 on: October 29, 2021, 01:42:27 AM
Life's a beach....and so is Mom!
https://archiveofourown.org/works/34745179

Not completely satisfied with this story but it's not terrible and the author did what she could with 2500 words. May have it rewritten in the future but I'm going to focus on "The Good Son" when it comes to the Sanchez family and probably won't do as many one shots with them.

I will choose the next top-voted story Thursday Night.
I wish the science experiment contain sph and sex into them all love 💕



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Reply #21 on: October 29, 2021, 01:46:30 AM
Thanks Devetak!

Siri Fan I will put sph into the Good Son which will have incest (it will be my first story to have it)

The Science Experiment has edged out the Cucked Commercial by a vote. It will be very much a tit-focused story like mom the ghost was an ass one.

I just haven't decided who to base the mom on though, it's between Cristina Fox getting experimented on by her son's pervy Asian incel classmates or Hitomi Tanaka by her son's bratty dumb white rivals. So I'll wait until tomorrow night guys either pm me or post here what story you've rather read. If no one chimes in I'm probably gonna go with Hitomi and I'll do Fox/asian incel story another time.



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Reply #22 on: October 29, 2021, 10:59:03 PM
Bloox, all of these prompts are great, the 3 that look the best to me in descending order are SJW, Drummer, Clown



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Reply #23 on: October 30, 2021, 12:33:00 AM
Thanks Mjone, yeah all the stories are great but the three you picked are definitely some of the more creative ones, they will all be written in due time  ;) along with others I have about 20 or so more ideas on my cell phone but I don't want to flood the poll up.

Surprisingly the Vampire Mom has not one vote thought that one would actually be pretty popular should have said Mom the fat ass Vampire instead huh  ;D
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Reply #24 on: October 30, 2021, 12:49:12 AM
Yeah Lol, Did you come up with all the ideas yourself? If so I like your way of thinking  ;D



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Reply #25 on: October 30, 2021, 12:49:56 AM
I liked the Mom Accident one. Has the Mask one been done yet?



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Reply #26 on: October 30, 2021, 01:09:39 AM
Yeah Lol, Did you come up with all the ideas yourself? If so I like your way of thinking  ;D

Yep my man usually when I'm really bored at work lol I just jot down ideas that haven't been done before on my phone, and the moms are very important to me you'll notice they're always based on real women, generally stacked latinas. Alot of times I'll look at these women, imagine them as moms, and ideas just pop up out of nowhere :D

NetterJ hey man neither have been done yet but will be, Mom the Science Experiment is up next that's why I took it off the list.



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Reply #27 on: October 30, 2021, 01:39:33 AM
If you don't mind me asking what will the SJW story be about, the key words just jumped up at me lol



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Reply #28 on: October 30, 2021, 01:50:05 AM
If you don't mind me asking what will the SJW story be about, the key words just jumped up at me lol

A rough synopsis so far, I mean I'm still hammering out the details:

Mom is a low level politician.
Very vocal about minority rights, particularly for latinos.
However her sex life is the complete opposite of what she preaches as she only dates and sleeps with white males.
Son goes in her room to find pictures of blonde haired blue eyed men, men she claims to hate in public.
At school son gets bullied for having a hot mom as well as her being an annoying goody two shoes bleeding heart liberal type.
One of his classmates in particular is a known "alt right" member who posts racist propaganda on the internet, including "bleached" memes
in which white guys fuck and conquer brown women.
As part of a youth outreach program the mom takes the "alt right" brat under her wing to "study" his radicalization.....

Yeah this could probably be a longer multiple chapter story, we'll see. Should be fun. All I know for sure is the mom's looks will be based on big booty puerto rican slut Stephanie Santiago and her personality will be based on Alexandria Ocasio Cortez



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Reply #29 on: October 30, 2021, 01:54:30 AM
Great job dude, please put LOADS of ANAL in this