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What would you most like to read?

Mom the Birthday Clown - (Son attends a his friend's birthday party and can't help thinking he's seen the busty clown before...)
12 (11.2%)
Mom the Vampire - (There's a vampire attacking teenage boys in son's neighborhood. Rumors swirl abound it's someone quite close to him...)
0 (0%)
Nightmare on Grove Street - (Son has reoccurring nightmares of his mom being a huge slut around his friends...A mom ntr parody of NOES)
12 (11.2%)
Dissolving Bonds - (Son's rival plays a prank on mom, stickyglueing himself to the mom. And thus an unwanted houseguest is created....)
5 (4.7%)
The Mask - (Son is blackmailed by rival to put a mask on his mom; not just any mask but one with "powers"....)
10 (9.3%)
Body Swap - (Son has bodies swapped with his perverted classmate. Said perverted classmate is also obsessed with his hot mom....)
8 (7.5%)
Mom's accident (Mom gets into a car accident, and her surgery mistakenly turns her into a perfect looking bimbo....)
12 (11.2%)
Mom smokes with the boys (Son is smoking weed with his good for nothing stoner white friends; his thick latina mom decides to join them...)
13 (12.1%)
Mom the porn addict (Son comes home with his friends while his mom is watching porn....)
7 (6.5%)
Mom's glasses (Son's rival visits; coincidentally his mom's glasses go missing. Mom can't see without her glasses....)
5 (4.7%)
Butt Creep Vs My Mom's Fat Brown Ass (Son's younger Rival is obsessed with huge asses, particularly his mom's....)
15 (14%)
Mom's Protein shake (Son's Rival ejaculates into mom's protein shake when she isn't looking)
6 (5.6%)
Sleepwalking Mom (Son spies on Mom sleepwalking as she somehow ends up in his rival's bedroom....)
1 (0.9%)
Fitness Mom (Gymcel son watches as his mom pays more attention to a better looking albeit scrawnier boy his age in the gym...)
1 (0.9%)
Mom tutors the retard (Son watches in disbelief as his mom teaches and then seduces an ugly fat mentally retarded boy from his school)
0 (0%)

Total Members Voted: 106

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Reply #30 on: October 30, 2021, 02:50:33 PM
yes analsex plz



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Reply #31 on: October 31, 2021, 02:41:09 AM
lol about the anal I'll see what I can do, never really focused on that in a story before. Just the mom's big ass in general. Also, SJW may have to be a longer story now that I think about it, 5000 words or less probably won't do it justice. The only problem is longer stories (obviously) take longer to write.



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Reply #32 on: October 31, 2021, 08:32:00 PM
that's a vote for me on the anal as well! also let us know if you need any help (monetary or otherwise).



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Reply #33 on: October 31, 2021, 11:38:06 PM
I cant ask for your guys money; all I ask is for you to vote, give me some unique ideas for the future and most of all patience because I can't control how long these will take to get written. Also if any of you guys do artwork I would like maybe some free art to go along with the stories of your choosing. pm me for that talk.

Mom the Science experiment is next; will be based on Hitomi Tanaka being defiled by two white brats, mostly tit focused. Should be done in the next two weeks.

After that looks like the cucked commercial is up; hope you guys don't mind but that won't be explicit, more so humor/humiliation focused. The mom and son's rival will be in a "wholesome" commercial and the rival will take advantage of the mom in multiple ways, all in front of the helpless embarrassed cuck son watching alongside the camera crew. It will definitely be different from most of my stories as the mom won't be a complete cock sleeve but instead ditzy, naive, easily taken advantage of.

« Last Edit: November 01, 2021, 09:06:53 PM by bloox »



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Reply #34 on: November 01, 2021, 07:10:57 PM
Would love to use my Japanese and Montblanc fountain pens to draw the female characters in your stories but been to busy with life.



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Reply #35 on: November 01, 2021, 08:55:46 PM
2feetlong2inchsthick Thanks, don't feel like you have to do it it was just a suggestion. Really Good artists are WAY too expensive for me so I'd rather put my money into written commissions. You can find some really good writers for decent prices.

I'm breaking my rule and adding a new idea/prompt to the poll since someone messaged me today wanting to see an Asian on white mom story. The mom will be based on the aforementioned Cristina Fox, about her being hypnotized and turned docile (i.e. into a cock loving whore) by her son's Asian "friend".  Feel free to vote on it "Turning Japanese"



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Reply #36 on: November 02, 2021, 12:03:53 AM
Bloox I really love your stories, I also love "bullies" that are more on the nerdy side, and absolutely love raceplay and ugly bastard netorare so your stories really hits all the kinks for me.

Quarantine was one of the hottest things I have ever read! Really looking forward to these stories as I personally enjoy the teasing, humiliation and buildup more than the actual sex scenes.



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Reply #37 on: November 02, 2021, 04:05:12 AM
My fetishes in porn stories are netorare or cuckold and mind control. Find stories with the two topics is really rare. I'll wish so hard read the stories of "Turnning japanise", "The mask" and "Bodyswap".
In literotica there is a bodyswap story call it "Ding" where the bully swapbodies with the mom (no sex for the wimp son of course), is a really hot story, recommended https://www.literotica.com/s/ding



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Reply #38 on: November 30, 2021, 04:19:15 AM
Hey bloox, I can't reply to your DM for some reason, and I can't add you on discord.

Here's my discord ID: MiracleMilk#5772



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Reply #39 on: January 06, 2022, 12:39:44 AM
I just saw you posted 2 new Stories :)

You are a fucking Saint for comissioning all these stories <3

for real, thank you man !



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Reply #40 on: January 06, 2022, 12:53:04 AM
Hi bloox thanks for the 2 new uploads! You got a gift from God dude. :)

I uploaded new erotica stories that I heard from other occult scholars with drawings to match'm onto my instagram.  Here's a link if you're interested bloox

https://www.instagram.com/2feetlong2inchsthick/



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Reply #41 on: January 08, 2022, 02:46:39 PM
Hey guys updated my page with a few new stories. https://archiveofourown.org/users/uglyfucker739

 Will also be adding new ideas for voting, but will probably just be doing one a month from now on. Cool Mom is taking priority right now.
« Last Edit: January 08, 2022, 03:00:48 PM by bloox »



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Reply #42 on: January 13, 2022, 06:18:35 PM
That's great, I've been really liking the shorts, especially the Zombie apocalypse and science class "experiment" but love the longer stories.



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Reply #43 on: January 14, 2022, 10:14:04 PM
Good stories, read for a long time, but was not registered here  :)



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Reply #44 on: January 18, 2022, 10:17:44 PM
Hey guys I know this idea didn't receive a lot of votes but here's the bus ride story. I wanted to try out a new writer on Fiverr so I thought this story would be perfect for its really short length. I think it came out really good.

https://archiveofourown.org/works/36512149

Added a few more ideas as well as removed some I plan on doing soon.