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What would you most like to read?

Mom the Vampire - (There's a vampire attacking teenage boys in son's neighborhood. Rumors swirl abound it's someone quite close to him...)
0 (0%)
Nightmare on Grove Street - (Son has reoccurring nightmares of his mom being a huge slut around his friends...A mom ntr parody of NOES)
3 (4.5%)
Dissolving Bonds - (Son's rival plays a prank on mom, stickyglueing himself to the mom. And thus an unwanted houseguest is created....)
1 (1.5%)
Mom's Ass Tattoo - ( Son goes with his enormous assed latina mom to a tattoo parlor, where his redneck rival works at...)
8 (11.9%)
Body Swap - (Son has bodies swapped with his perverted classmate. Said perverted classmate is also obsessed with his hot mom....)
2 (3%)
Mom's accident (Mom gets into a car accident, and her surgery mistakenly turns her into a perfect looking bimbo....)
3 (4.5%)
Mom smokes with the boys (Son is smoking weed with his good for nothing stoner white friends; his thick latina mom decides to join them...)
7 (10.4%)
Mom the porn addict (Son comes home with his friends while his mom is watching porn....)
5 (7.5%)
Turning Japanese (Bimbo Blonde Mom hypnotized and turned into a sex slave by her son's perverted Asian incel friend
3 (4.5%)
Mom the Tooth Fairy (Son's friend loses his tooth; Son spys on him from his window as a the "Tooth Fairy" pays him a loving visit...)
0 (0%)
Rest Stop (Son gets accosted by two boys who then turn their eyes toward his mom at a gas station bathroom....)
4 (6%)
Spanish Lessons (Son watches on as his thick latina mom gives his racist schoolmate spanish lessons... This has taken the place of that SJW mom story at least for now))
7 (10.4%)
Why is your Mom's butt so big (Son's new neighbor takes on an obsessive fascination with his mom's huge ass)
4 (6%)
Mom The Superhero (Son recalls the day he witnessed his superhero mom save his rival's life... A unique take on the genre that may someday become a much longer epic story...)
1 (1.5%)
Inner Beauty (Son and his friends make fun of an ugly loser classmate; his mom takes notice of it and punishes her son accordingly...)
7 (10.4%)
Just Be White (A son and his white friend consider themselves incels; his mom disagrees, at least when it comes to the white friend...)
2 (3%)
Turn A Blind Eye (Son's rival injures his eye with a slingshot; rival and mom get closer together while a naive yet somewhat aware son wonders what's going on..... Heavily influenced by Nebic's Lights Out)
7 (10.4%)
The Necklace Chapter 2(Lawrence's night goes from bad to worse as the necklace turns his mom into a horny degenerate...)
2 (3%)
Mom the Sex Ed Teacher (The ever horny Monica Mckay subs in as a sex ed teacher for Lawrence's class....)
1 (1.5%)

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Reply #45 on: January 23, 2022, 04:57:51 AM
I would love to read “Mom the Birthday Clown”, “The Mask”, “Mom smokes with the boys”, “Mom’s glasses”, “Mom’s protein shake”, and “Sleepwalking mom”.

Any chance you would write any of these?

Birthday Clown Mom is second in queue after my grocery store punks story.  After that I might try to get my commercial story or the mom's ass as drums story done. But you can bet I plan on having them all done eventually.

Guys I know I haven't really adhered to getting the stories out by order of votes and I apologize for that. There's just some stories I'd much rather get written before others. I'm getting alot of McKay Family stories done right now but will be back to basing moms on other women soon.



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Reply #46 on: January 30, 2022, 03:24:11 PM
Grocery Store Punks https://archiveofourown.org/works/36765550

Mom the Birthday Clown up next



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Reply #47 on: February 01, 2022, 02:54:22 AM
Is it possible to have any sort of Hypnosis or mind control in these stories?

 Nightmare on Grove Street - (Son has reoccurring nightmares of his mom being a huge slut around his friends...A mom ntr parody of NOES)
 Mom the porn addict (Son comes home with his friends while his mom is watching porn....)
 Sleepwalking Mom (Son spies on Mom sleepwalking as she somehow ends up in his rival's bedroom....)


I really would love to read it in some of these stories and i feel that they could be a great idea for it, especially as sleepwalking mom is asleep already, or the porn videos could be hypnotizing the mom maybe a friend could be making them? the Nightmare mom could be invaded in her dreams, which would be cool if it changed her in real life, sort of astral projection.
i would be very grateful!
 



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Reply #48 on: February 01, 2022, 05:21:02 PM
Grocery Store Punks https://archiveofourown.org/works/36765550

Mom the Birthday Clown up next

hi, I'm a new user here.
thanks for all the things you do.
I can't send to you PM, I would like to share with you (and with all the forum) a few stories, if you don't mind.

let me know how I can contact you.

thanks in advance



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Reply #49 on: February 01, 2022, 10:16:07 PM
TheStinger I am open to putting hypnotism/mind control into my stories, (It's drugged/drunk mom stuff I don't really want, but the mom smokes with the boys story may come close to that) the mask was going to be about a mind control device (well a mask lol) Lawrence's ongoing rival Luke puts on Mrs.Mckay. I might change it to a magical pearl necklace though, busty milfs wearing pearl necklaces is hot!

Also the sleepwalking story was gonna have Monica being taken advantage of by Luke in her sleep, a departure from her being an open slut like in the rest of my stories. If she's asleep I'm not sure how hypnotism could work, I mean maybe I'll have her wake up and then Luke can use hypnosis on her to knock her out again lol We'll see.

The other two stories are already planned out and are a bit more of my usual plotlines but I may modify them a bit still so keep an eye out!






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Reply #50 on: February 12, 2022, 03:43:45 PM
Mom the Birthday Clown

https://archiveofourown.org/works/37056889

Mom vs the butt creep up next, here's who the mom will be based on Giselle Lynette https://www.tiktok.com/@gisellelynette?lang=en May not be until March

Also added a new story SPH on Valentine's day
« Last Edit: February 12, 2022, 03:47:37 PM by bloox »



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Reply #51 on: April 05, 2022, 09:34:59 PM
I had it written and will post it but it's not the best work. My writer just would not do what I wanted no matter how many times I asked for a revision. I wanted a story where the mom has ridiculous ass (she's based on Giselle Lynette) and the son's rival kind of makes a mockery of her, slapping her ass and sticking his fingers up it, running away like a true brat. Unfortunately it's very vanilla, but I still think you guys maybe will enjoy it, it's still pretty hot just not what I envisioned. I may someday have it rewritten perhaps.

Also I am taking a break from getting commissions for right now as I play around with novelai. It's saving me quite a bit of money, which in turn is letting me work less and spend time on other hobbies I have. Sorry if this disappoints anyone.
But I will be posting short stories that I come up with in the other thread I made. I will try to do my own version of this story on NovelAI and post it but it won't be great as I"m not a writer. But it will definitely be for ass lovers I promise!


https://archiveofourown.org/works/38190307





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Reply #52 on: May 30, 2022, 04:08:11 PM
Hey guys sorry but I reset the poll; it was a bit confusing because every time I added a new idea it kept the votes from the last one. I am going to really try to get a commission done once a month from this list, with the Mask (changed into a special necklace that makes the mom horny) and Mom the Wrestler story coming soon.



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Reply #53 on: June 07, 2022, 03:03:42 AM
https://archiveofourown.org/works/39483909

The Necklace.

Lawrence's younger rival Luke visits his house with a mysterious pawn shop necklace. When Lawrence's smoking hot mom Monica puts on the necklace as a joke, all hell breaks loose...

This came out better than I thought for only 2500 words, short and sweet but not too rushed. May continue it in the future. I also didn't add a mind control tag because I actually want to leave it up to the reader whether the necklace has actual powers or Monica is just her true slutty self when she puts it on. I can expand upon more in a sequel.
« Last Edit: June 10, 2022, 05:44:45 PM by bloox »



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Reply #54 on: June 08, 2022, 11:07:28 AM
https://archiveofourown.org/works/39483909

The Necklace.

Lawrence's younger rival Luke visits his house with a mysterious pawn shop necklace. When Lawrence's smoking hot mom Monica puts on the necklace as a joke, all hell breaks loose...

This came out better than I thought for only 2500 words, short and sweet but not too rushed. May continue it in the future. I also didn't add a mind control tag because I actually want to leave it up to the reader whether the necklace has actual powers or Monica is just her true slutty self when she puts it on. I can expand upon more in a sequel.
Mom stolen at the haunted house was hot. Some fat ugly nerd railing a hot mums ass in the final ride was amazing



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Reply #55 on: June 10, 2022, 04:11:21 PM
Mom The Wrestler

The top heavy Monica Mckay is a very popular and beautiful female wrestler. Her easily embarrassed son has to deal with the repercussions of his mom's stardom as a growing teen...

I posted a rough draft of this in the AI thread. Needless to say, this came out way way better  ;D This story was heavily influenced by this hentai set https://hitomi.la/cg/moto-joshi-pro-wrestler-mama-to-ijimekko-%7C-a-former-girl-professional-wrestler-mom-and-bullying-kid-english-789348.html#1

https://archiveofourown.org/works/39555363


Whatever story hits 10 votes first will be next
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Reply #56 on: June 10, 2022, 07:48:01 PM
Mom The Wrestler

The top heavy Monica Mckay is a very popular and beautiful female wrestler. Her easily embarrassed son has to deal with the repercussions of his mom's stardom as a growing teen...

I posted a rough draft of this in the AI thread. Needless to say, this came out way way better  ;D This story was heavily influenced by this hentai set https://hitomi.la/cg/moto-joshi-pro-wrestler-mama-to-ijimekko-%7C-a-former-girl-professional-wrestler-mom-and-bullying-kid-english-789348.html#1

https://archiveofourown.org/works/39555363


Whatever story hits 10 votes first will be next
Moms tinder all the way



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Reply #57 on: June 11, 2022, 02:37:14 AM

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Moms tinder all the way
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It seems like it. It will be an ass-focused story based on the mom from BTABOM, this fat assed latina Selena Adams https://spankbang.com/5jcxf/video/selena+adams+tanga whom I haven't done a story in a while. I will try to make the bully as gross as possible for you ugly guy fans out there  ;D Maybe give me some characters to base the guy off of, it will make it easier for me. The only thing I won't change is his race which will be white, an ugly fat gross white guy ala comic book guy.



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Reply #58 on: June 11, 2022, 11:07:33 AM

Moms tinder all the way
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It seems like it. It will be an ass-focused story based on the mom from BTABOM, this fat assed latina Selena Adams https://spankbang.com/5jcxf/video/selena+adams+tanga whom I haven't done a story in a while. I will try to make the bully as gross as possible for you ugly guy fans out there  ;D Maybe give me some characters to base the guy off of, it will make it easier for me. The only thing I won't change is his race which will be white, an ugly fat gross white guy ala comic book guy.
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Just a thought but maybe make him more of the creepy pervert of the main characters class? Less of the bully type but someone who makes him uncomfortable and he doesn't like



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Reply #59 on: June 11, 2022, 09:42:53 PM

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Just a thought but maybe make him more of the creepy pervert of the main characters class? Less of the bully type but someone who makes him uncomfortable and he doesn't like
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No problem I have no intention of making ugly characters bullies, they'll be more like Shawn from Cool Mom, annoying pests at worst but still stealing the mom away from the son.