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What would you most like to read?

Mom the Vampire - (There's a vampire attacking teenage boys in son's neighborhood. Rumors swirl abound it's someone quite close to him...)
4 (1.9%)
Nightmare on Grove Street - (Son has reoccurring nightmares of his mom being a huge slut around his friends...A mom ntr parody of NOES)
10 (4.6%)
Dissolving Bonds - (Son's rival plays a prank on mom, stickyglueing himself to the mom. And thus an unwanted houseguest is created....)
3 (1.4%)
Body Swap - (Son has bodies swapped with his perverted classmate. Said perverted classmate is also obsessed with his hot mom....)
7 (3.2%)
Mom's accident (Mom gets into a car accident, and her surgery mistakenly turns her into a perfect looking bimbo....)
6 (2.8%)
Mom smokes with the boys (Son is smoking weed with his good for nothing stoner white friends; his thick latina mom decides to join them...)
16 (7.4%)
Mom the porn addict (Son comes home with his friends while his mom is watching porn....)
28 (13%)
Turning Japanese (Bimbo Blonde Mom hypnotized and turned into a sex slave by her son's perverted Asian incel friend
10 (4.6%)
Mom the Tooth Fairy (Son's friend loses his tooth; Son spys on him from his window as a the "Tooth Fairy" pays him a loving visit...)
0 (0%)
Rest Stop (Son gets accosted by two boys who then turn their eyes toward his mom at a gas station bathroom....)
9 (4.2%)
Spanish Lessons (Son watches on as his thick latina mom gives his racist schoolmate spanish lessons... This has taken the place of that SJW mom story at least for now))
13 (6%)
Why is your Mom's butt so big (Son's new neighbor takes on an obsessive fascination with his mom's huge ass)
9 (4.2%)
Mom The Superhero (Son recalls the day he witnessed his superhero mom save his rival's life... A unique take on the genre that may someday become a much longer epic story...)
10 (4.6%)
Inner Beauty (Son and his friends make fun of an ugly loser classmate; his mom takes notice of it and punishes her son accordingly...)
15 (6.9%)
Just Be White (A son and his white friend consider themselves incels; his mom disagrees, at least when it comes to the white friend...)
4 (1.9%)
Turn A Blind Eye (Son's rival injures his eye with a slingshot; rival and mom get closer together while a naive yet somewhat aware son wonders what's going on..... Heavily influenced by Nebic's Lights Out)
38 (17.6%)
The Necklace Chapter 2(Lawrence's night goes from bad to worse as the necklace turns his mom into a horny degenerate...)
4 (1.9%)
Mom the Sex Ed Teacher (The ever horny Monica Mckay subs in as a sex ed teacher for Lawrence's class....)
5 (2.3%)
Safari Trip (Lawrence watches helplessly as his mom grows closer to one of his perverted ugly classmates on a class trip...)
25 (11.6%)

Total Members Voted: 198

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Reply #75 on: July 18, 2022, 01:10:55 AM
I love the idea from "Mom the Porn Addict" =)



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Reply #76 on: July 18, 2022, 04:15:27 PM
Wow the votes for Mom the Porn addict really came out of nowhere! That will be the next story after Mom's Ass Tattoo. That got ten votes first so it is next.

I have two slightly similar ideas: PM me or tell me in here which you'd prefer.

A) New Original Characters. The mom will be based on legendary porn star Ava Addams.

Stoner-type son brings his ugly/nerdy classmate home to play video games. He catches his retired huge-breasted porn star mom watching one of her older videos. Up until now his mom has done a good job of keeping her past a secret, although the son obviously knew from the internet. Now broke Mom has been badgering son to get a job recently but he's been locking himself in his room playing games all day. Mom sees son's classmate's huge erection through his pants and comes up with an idea; to film herself with his classmate on a streaming porn site and make some money off it since her lazy bum son won't bring any home....

B) Mckay Family. Mom based on Danica Collins. Her personality will be a little different in this story, more akin to BluVelvet's moms as she will get drunk and then have sex.

Son gets paired up with his rival to do a project. They walk in on her naked and masturbating to a porn video of a younger white male fucking a hot older Latina female. When mom catches them looking, she immediately runs up to her room ashamed. At school, rival threatens to tell everyone son's mom is a degenerate perverted porn addict unless he helps him score with his mom. Son invites rival over again to his house, where his former alcoholic mom has been depressed ever since the boys walked in on her masturbating. His mom locks herself in her room drinking the whole night, while rival eggs son to help him fuck her....

These will probably end up being on the longer side so it may take a while to get them done. So you guys have plenty of time to tell me which one you'd rather read.



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Reply #77 on: July 18, 2022, 07:09:41 PM
Hey =)

I would prefer the "B" Story, but not with one rival. Two would be better =)  and maybe later it will lead to a gangbang.
And i would prefer just Friends or best Friends. But Rivals are okay too :D

And of Course Ava Addams for both Storys =)  :-D

Well that would be my wishes but iam not sad if if you don't take them into.

The story will definitely be good because of you =)



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Reply #78 on: July 22, 2022, 03:35:18 AM
Wow the votes for Mom the Porn addict really came out of nowhere! That will be the next story after Mom's Ass Tattoo. That got ten votes first so it is next.

I have two slightly similar ideas: PM me or tell me in here which you'd prefer.

A) New Original Characters. The mom will be based on legendary porn star Ava Addams.

Stoner-type son brings his ugly/nerdy classmate home to play video games. He catches his retired huge-breasted porn star mom watching one of her older videos. Up until now his mom has done a good job of keeping her past a secret, although the son obviously knew from the internet. Now broke Mom has been badgering son to get a job recently but he's been locking himself in his room playing games all day. Mom sees son's classmate's huge erection through his pants and comes up with an idea; to film herself with his classmate on a streaming porn site and make some money off it since her lazy bum son won't bring any home....

B) Mckay Family. Mom based on Danica Collins. Her personality will be a little different in this story, more akin to BluVelvet's moms as she will get drunk and then have sex.

Son gets paired up with his rival to do a project. They walk in on her naked and masturbating to a porn video of a younger white male fucking a hot older Latina female. When mom catches them looking, she immediately runs up to her room ashamed. At school, rival threatens to tell everyone son's mom is a degenerate perverted porn addict unless he helps him score with his mom. Son invites rival over again to his house, where his former alcoholic mom has been depressed ever since the boys walked in on her masturbating. His mom locks herself in her room drinking the whole night, while rival eggs son to help him fuck her....

These will probably end up being on the longer side so it may take a while to get them done. So you guys have plenty of time to tell me which one you'd rather read.

I like the B story but I think the part when the mom run ashamed doesn't work for my. May be if they spy on her by the window and she is so concentade in her porn video for even notice the boys, while the son sees the rival huge erection through his pants and his "I having a sinister plan" face. That way the mom get a good firts impression of the rival. Maybe also the rival obliges the son to filming them having sex just for kicks and giggles.



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Reply #79 on: July 23, 2022, 03:37:11 PM
I like the spy idea too =)  would be nice how they spy on his mother watching porn and the boys get very aroused by it and make a plan together how the other boys can fuck his mom while the son is watching and jerking to it =)



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Reply #80 on: July 24, 2022, 04:51:38 PM
I will take your ideas under advisement  ;D Though I'm not budging on the first story being based on Ava Addams and the second being Danica.

I can definitely add two boys to the second story instead of one; make it more like Mom's judo. It can be Luke and his friend/cousin or whatever. I want the first story to just be the one gross ugly guy, I know those are popular.

I wanted Monica's personality to be different in this story because I'm tired of having her be a huge slut in everything. Having her be a porn addict is shameful for her, so her being embarrassed that her son and his "friend" catch her masturbating would add more to the story. But again I'll take it under advisement. The mom would be very openly slutty in the first story.

Yeah these votes have taken off out of nowhere, someone must have pinned a link of this thread somewhere. I have on 4chan but I doubt that's where all the votes have come from. 





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Reply #81 on: September 19, 2022, 12:27:15 PM
How is the "mom porn addict" story going ? =)



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Reply #82 on: September 19, 2022, 07:03:31 PM
good  8)



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Reply #83 on: November 03, 2022, 05:04:15 PM
Any updates here ? =)



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Reply #84 on: November 05, 2022, 04:18:37 AM
Sorry guys I should have let you know but I kinda wanted to keep it a secret, Fearless Wretch is writing an epic long story for me right now and that's where all my time/money has been going. It will be done and posted here either this month or next, and brutal bytes are on hold for now.



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Reply #85 on: November 05, 2022, 08:52:21 AM
Still great to hear.



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Reply #86 on: November 16, 2022, 01:09:05 PM
Sorry guys I should have let you know but I kinda wanted to keep it a secret, Fearless Wretch is writing an epic long story for me right now and that's where all my time/money has been going. It will be done and posted here either this month or next, and brutal bytes are on hold for now.
  Wow, Fearless Wretch is my favorite author. Great to hear this. Could you please tell what would be the premise of this story?



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Reply #87 on: November 16, 2022, 04:14:27 PM
  Wow, Fearless Wretch is my favorite author. Great to hear this. Could you please tell what would be the premise of this story?

It will be based on the Mckay family (Lawrence and Monica) but Monica's personality will be a bit different from my other stories; also there will be a VERY close relationship between Monica and her son but not outright incest. It will be very similar to "Cool Mom', a bit longer.

Monica is suffering from insomnia/sleep problems and takes solace in her son Lawrence by letting him sleep in her room, to comfort her and try to help fix her sleep. Meanwhile, at school, Lawrence must contend with classmate Richard, a pesty brat who has a history of insulting Lawrence with his perversions towards Monica, as well as being just a general nuisance. Eventually Monica sends Lawrence out to get some remedies for her insomnia; that's when he's stumbles upon Richard's dad's office, who is a sleep issue related doctor. Soon events lead to Richard spending time at the Mckay's home, and slowly replacing Lawrence as his mom's helper for her insomnia....

Wretch is taking a really long time writing this story lol but I can't complain since no one writes quite like him. Here's a small taste of the story in pdf format but I'm not gonna post more until it's done, which will be next month hopefully. For fans of my story Cool Mom and also Remnick's Mrs. Campbell's Bunkmate, this will be kind of a mix of those two stories.
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Reply #88 on: November 16, 2022, 07:39:36 PM
Nice Setting and with the talent of wretch it will be an epic



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Reply #89 on: November 17, 2022, 04:12:56 AM
Sounds awesome. It's rarer, but stories where the bully establishes himself as a replacement to the son in some emotional way, serving a purpose or performing a service to her the son isn't capable of, is often hotter to me than the sex itself. Can't wait.