Bully Fucks My Mom

GENERAL DISCUSSION => Fapping Materials => Topic started by: uglyfucker on October 17, 2021, 06:12:19 PM

Title: Brutal Bytes- Weird Short Stories I'll be commissioning
Post by: uglyfucker on October 17, 2021, 06:12:19 PM
Hey guys as you know I've have commissions done, such as BTABOM, Cool Mom, and Winter Nightmare. I've found a new writer who really excels at shorter stories though, and I think for more outlandish/goofy mom netorare ideas this is the way to go. I think there are two great ways to approach stories, one where you spend a long time developing characters, backstory, motivations, etc, and the other where you pique the reader's imagination and leave a lot of what ifs. These will be in the latter group.

So you guys can vote for the ideas I've given or give your own but I want kind of unique/silly/out there ideas, not cliche mom catches son getting bullied by a Chad and then gives said Chad a "stern talking" to. I'd also like to focus more on the son's embarrassment/humiliation/jealousy than just outright explicit sex but there sometimes will still be intercourse. If you've read spankymcf's stories these will be similar to those.

Thanks and I hope this sparks the activity a bit on this kinda dead site. I will still be doing longer stories but these are quicker/cheaper for me to have written. I know there's another story voting thread I made back as uglyfucker and I will try to get to those eventually (The Good Son is being written as we speak) but for now I will be devoting my time to Brutal Bytes.
 :)

Here are the two first chapters in the brutal bytes series:

https://archiveofourown.org/works/34406800

https://archiveofourown.org/works/34554826

It should take about a week or so to get these written, much quicker than longer stories, so I'll check the result every week and go with the highest vote getter; as well as add ideas from you guys I am into.
Title: Re: Brutal Bytes- Weird Short Stories I'll be commissioning
Post by: bluvelvet99 on October 17, 2021, 10:47:31 PM
These are all great story ideas. There's a lot of color and diversity here and they all have that air of tragedy that makes this fetish so great.
Title: Re: Brutal Bytes- Weird Short Stories I'll be commissioning
Post by: Al_Anon on October 18, 2021, 01:15:59 AM
Went with "Life's a Beach". Sci-fi/magic/etc type stories are automatic non-starters with me, so that let me cross off a handful of your concepts.

Beyond that, I tend to prefer 'cruel betrayal' stories. So the mom getting off on her son being bullied (instead of, you know, helping him) is much more interesting to me than the others.
Title: Re: Brutal Bytes- Weird Short Stories I'll be commissioning
Post by: 2feetlong2inchsthick on October 18, 2021, 04:58:25 AM
Hot.
Title: Re: Brutal Bytes- Weird Short Stories I'll be commissioning
Post by: uglyfucker on October 18, 2021, 04:59:38 PM
These are all great story ideas. There's a lot of color and diversity here and they all have that air of tragedy that makes this fetish so great.

Thanks man that means alot coming from a legend like you  :)

AI anon yeah I'm not really big into scifi stuff but I hate how cliche alot of mom ntr stories are, son getting bullied by chad or black tyrones and then having the oh so "innocent and pure" huge breasted mom fuck them as a reward. Why not just have the annoying rival who happens to be a pretty boy twink and not some huge muscular brute steal the mom, or even a fat ugly nerd?

I know I'm kinda contradicting myself lol but these stories are quite unrealistic to begin with so why not approach them with some wacky ideas. I agree with sadistic and cruel moms, most of my stories will have them or at the very least have moms who don't give a fuck what their sons think about their sexuality. That's how my mom was and how most moms are in real life so that bit of realism will stick.

I will try to even out the more realistic stories with the more farfetched ideas. Also you'll notice the horror/Halloween themed plots, that's only because it's October I won't always do horror themed stories.


Looks like Life's a Beach is running away with the early votes but I will still leave it open until Friday. If that wins it will be based on the Sanchez Family, here's a preview of the video that inspired the idea...https://vimeo.com/635404455

Title: Re: Brutal Bytes- Weird Short Stories I'll be commissioning
Post by: veronica_fan on October 22, 2021, 02:20:08 AM
I've always gravitated to your stories because they flip the racial element from BBC to BWC. As a minority, I've always found that hotter. The sadistic mother is so hot too, and I think it always elevates the stories and scenarios when the mom gives in. Please make this next story a BWC bully/bullies on a spic or indian mom!
Title: Re: Brutal Bytes- Weird Short Stories I'll be commissioning
Post by: uglyfucker on October 22, 2021, 03:00:52 AM
Thanks veronica_fan. And your wish will be granted as the next story will be a brown latina with a white brat rival.

Yes I'm a minority myself and much more into ethnic moms and white bulls (not bullies particularly). So you will never see "bbc" in my stories. Just a preference. I may do some stories with white moms and nerdy asian or ugly indian/mexican guys or something but I'm not sure yet. I like being a bit of a contrarian lol bbc stuff is everywhere so I try to approach it a bit differently.

Okay it's pretty much Friday where I live so Life's A Beach wins this week's poll. Look forward to it sometime next week, along with another story I'm having written, a Halloween Haunted House comedy focused story about "Bishoujo Mom", I'm 100% positive all the coomers have heard of her before. ;D

Guys feel free to keep voting. I will be picking a story every Thursday night/Friday. Every 4 or 5 stories that get finished, I will add a few more ideas to the poll; until I run into a block at least. However I can't promise my writers will get them done as quickly. I will always post them here though so you'll know.
Title: Re: Brutal Bytes- Weird Short Stories I'll be commissioning
Post by: siri fan on October 22, 2021, 10:25:47 AM
Love your work you can add some sph in your stories
Title: Re: Brutal Bytes- Weird Short Stories I'll be commissioning
Post by: uglyfucker on October 23, 2021, 03:11:04 AM
Love your work you can add some sph in your stories

I can definitely do that in stories that have explicit sex; all my sons always have smaller dicks than the "bulls" but I usually don't have the mom make fun of them since she doesn't see the son in a sexual light to begin with, but I'll work it into some story.

Wow the Science Experiment is pulling in votes all of a sudden; if that were to be the next story, who would you guys prefer as the mom between these two women I've never had a story written about: Huge fake titted blonde Cristina Fox or bruntette bimbo Korina Kova? Should the bulls be bratty whites or maybe some perverted asian nerds?

Title: Re: Brutal Bytes- Weird Short Stories I'll be commissioning
Post by: siri fan on October 23, 2021, 03:16:32 AM
Bishoujo Mom is perfect big tits and big ass slutty face perfect milf
Title: Re: Brutal Bytes- Weird Short Stories I'll be commissioning
Post by: uglyfucker on October 23, 2021, 02:27:17 PM
Mom Stolen at the Haunted House
https://archiveofourown.org/works/34672291
Title: Re: Brutal Bytes- Weird Short Stories I'll be commissioning
Post by: BimoBinny on October 23, 2021, 04:44:42 PM
For me, I don't care much about race but I think more about the social issues with being a mom, married or not. I care more about the woman who acts like a saint in public and make her kids act like saints, but inside she's a total whore.
Title: Re: Brutal Bytes- Weird Short Stories I'll be commissioning
Post by: uglyfucker on October 23, 2021, 07:11:19 PM
I don't care about race either but I'm most attracted to latinas and mixed women, though I will be doing some stories on white moms. For me the mom doesn't have to act like a saint but she wouldn't be a completely open whore either. I also like moms who treat their son's friends/rivals as if they were sons to her at the same time as seeing them in a sexual light; makes it extra brutal for the son as she will only ever see him as her baby boy but nothing more. For me the son's emotions/feelings are more important than just outright sex.
Title: Re: Brutal Bytes- Weird Short Stories I'll be commissioning
Post by: uglyfucker on October 25, 2021, 03:36:24 PM
It is what it is lol I'm gonna keep uploading them regardless of quality though  :P There are people who love it. Haunted House was meant to be more comedy focused with the twist being the nerd got the mom while Booty ghost was a straight-up cliché white brat prick steals big booty latina mom; like I said before I want a diverse set of stories here so there will be tales that float your boat and some that don't. For example the cucked commercial one won't have sex at all and instead will have the rival pulling pranks on the mom during the commercial, so it probably won't be as "good" and that's fine.

I have the Mom's a Beach one done but the quality on that one is admittedly a little low as it was done by another writer; I haven't decided if I want to post it yet or get it rewritten. I think I'll post it as I don't really want to respend money on the same story but I probably won't use that same writer again.
Title: Re: Brutal Bytes- Weird Short Stories I'll be commissioning
Post by: siri fan on October 26, 2021, 02:17:48 AM
It is what it is lol I'm gonna keep uploading them regardless of quality though  :P There are people who love it. Haunted House was meant to be more comedy focused with the twist being the nerd got the mom while Booty ghost was a straight-up cliché white brat prick steals big booty latina mom; like I said before I want a diverse set of stories here so there will be tales that float your boat and some that don't. For example the cucked commercial one won't have sex at all and instead will have the rival pulling pranks on the mom during the commercial, so it probably won't be as "good" and that's fine.

I have the Mom's a Beach one done but the quality on that one is admittedly a little low as it was done by another writer; I haven't decided if I want to post it yet or get it rewritten. I think I'll post it as I don't really want to respend money on the same story but I probably won't use that same writer again.
Waiting for it buddy
Title: Re: Brutal Bytes- Weird Short Stories I'll be commissioning
Post by: uglyfucker on October 26, 2021, 09:58:58 PM
Life's a beach....and so is Mom!
https://archiveofourown.org/works/34745179

Not completely satisfied with this story but it's not terrible and the author did what she could with 2500 words. May have it rewritten in the future but I'm going to focus on "The Good Son" when it comes to the Sanchez family and probably won't do as many one shots with them.

I will choose the next top-voted story Thursday Night.
Title: Re: Brutal Bytes- Weird Short Stories I'll be commissioning
Post by: devetak on October 28, 2021, 07:32:18 AM
Wow those are all such good prompts.
Title: Re: Brutal Bytes- Weird Short Stories I'll be commissioning
Post by: siri fan on October 29, 2021, 01:42:27 AM
Life's a beach....and so is Mom!
https://archiveofourown.org/works/34745179

Not completely satisfied with this story but it's not terrible and the author did what she could with 2500 words. May have it rewritten in the future but I'm going to focus on "The Good Son" when it comes to the Sanchez family and probably won't do as many one shots with them.

I will choose the next top-voted story Thursday Night.
I wish the science experiment contain sph and sex into them all love 💕
Title: Re: Brutal Bytes- Weird Short Stories I'll be commissioning
Post by: uglyfucker on October 29, 2021, 01:46:30 AM
Thanks Devetak!

Siri Fan I will put sph into the Good Son which will have incest (it will be my first story to have it)

The Science Experiment has edged out the Cucked Commercial by a vote. It will be very much a tit-focused story like mom the ghost was an ass one.

I just haven't decided who to base the mom on though, it's between Cristina Fox getting experimented on by her son's pervy Asian incel classmates or Hitomi Tanaka by her son's bratty dumb white rivals. So I'll wait until tomorrow night guys either pm me or post here what story you've rather read. If no one chimes in I'm probably gonna go with Hitomi and I'll do Fox/asian incel story another time.
Title: Re: Brutal Bytes- Weird Short Stories I'll be commissioning
Post by: mjone16 on October 29, 2021, 10:59:03 PM
Bloox, all of these prompts are great, the 3 that look the best to me in descending order are SJW, Drummer, Clown
Title: Re: Brutal Bytes- Weird Short Stories I'll be commissioning
Post by: uglyfucker on October 30, 2021, 12:33:00 AM
Thanks Mjone, yeah all the stories are great but the three you picked are definitely some of the more creative ones, they will all be written in due time  ;) along with others I have about 20 or so more ideas on my cell phone but I don't want to flood the poll up.

Surprisingly the Vampire Mom has not one vote thought that one would actually be pretty popular should have said Mom the fat ass Vampire instead huh  ;D
Title: Re: Brutal Bytes- Weird Short Stories I'll be commissioning
Post by: mjone16 on October 30, 2021, 12:49:12 AM
Yeah Lol, Did you come up with all the ideas yourself? If so I like your way of thinking  ;D
Title: Re: Brutal Bytes- Weird Short Stories I'll be commissioning
Post by: NetterJ on October 30, 2021, 12:49:56 AM
I liked the Mom Accident one. Has the Mask one been done yet?
Title: Re: Brutal Bytes- Weird Short Stories I'll be commissioning
Post by: uglyfucker on October 30, 2021, 01:09:39 AM
Yeah Lol, Did you come up with all the ideas yourself? If so I like your way of thinking  ;D

Yep my man usually when I'm really bored at work lol I just jot down ideas that haven't been done before on my phone, and the moms are very important to me you'll notice they're always based on real women, generally stacked latinas. Alot of times I'll look at these women, imagine them as moms, and ideas just pop up out of nowhere :D

NetterJ hey man neither have been done yet but will be, Mom the Science Experiment is up next that's why I took it off the list.
Title: Re: Brutal Bytes- Weird Short Stories I'll be commissioning
Post by: mjone16 on October 30, 2021, 01:39:33 AM
If you don't mind me asking what will the SJW story be about, the key words just jumped up at me lol
Title: Re: Brutal Bytes- Weird Short Stories I'll be commissioning
Post by: uglyfucker on October 30, 2021, 01:50:05 AM
If you don't mind me asking what will the SJW story be about, the key words just jumped up at me lol

A rough synopsis so far, I mean I'm still hammering out the details:

Mom is a low level politician.
Very vocal about minority rights, particularly for latinos.
However her sex life is the complete opposite of what she preaches as she only dates and sleeps with white males.
Son goes in her room to find pictures of blonde haired blue eyed men, men she claims to hate in public.
At school son gets bullied for having a hot mom as well as her being an annoying goody two shoes bleeding heart liberal type.
One of his classmates in particular is a known "alt right" member who posts racist propaganda on the internet, including "bleached" memes
in which white guys fuck and conquer brown women.
As part of a youth outreach program the mom takes the "alt right" brat under her wing to "study" his radicalization.....

Yeah this could probably be a longer multiple chapter story, we'll see. Should be fun. All I know for sure is the mom's looks will be based on big booty puerto rican slut Stephanie Santiago and her personality will be based on Alexandria Ocasio Cortez
Title: Re: Brutal Bytes- Weird Short Stories I'll be commissioning
Post by: mjone16 on October 30, 2021, 01:54:30 AM
Great job dude, please put LOADS of ANAL in this
Title: Re: Brutal Bytes- Weird Short Stories I'll be commissioning
Post by: lasuite1 on October 30, 2021, 02:50:33 PM
yes analsex plz
Title: Re: Brutal Bytes- Weird Short Stories I'll be commissioning
Post by: uglyfucker on October 31, 2021, 02:41:09 AM
lol about the anal I'll see what I can do, never really focused on that in a story before. Just the mom's big ass in general. Also, SJW may have to be a longer story now that I think about it, 5000 words or less probably won't do it justice. The only problem is longer stories (obviously) take longer to write.
Title: Re: Brutal Bytes- Weird Short Stories I'll be commissioning
Post by: acidus80 on October 31, 2021, 08:32:00 PM
that's a vote for me on the anal as well! also let us know if you need any help (monetary or otherwise).
Title: Re: Brutal Bytes- Weird Short Stories I'll be commissioning
Post by: uglyfucker on October 31, 2021, 11:38:06 PM
I cant ask for your guys money; all I ask is for you to vote, give me some unique ideas for the future and most of all patience because I can't control how long these will take to get written. Also if any of you guys do artwork I would like maybe some free art to go along with the stories of your choosing. pm me for that talk.

Mom the Science experiment is next; will be based on Hitomi Tanaka being defiled by two white brats, mostly tit focused. Should be done in the next two weeks.

After that looks like the cucked commercial is up; hope you guys don't mind but that won't be explicit, more so humor/humiliation focused. The mom and son's rival will be in a "wholesome" commercial and the rival will take advantage of the mom in multiple ways, all in front of the helpless embarrassed cuck son watching alongside the camera crew. It will definitely be different from most of my stories as the mom won't be a complete cock sleeve but instead ditzy, naive, easily taken advantage of.

Title: Re: Brutal Bytes- Weird Short Stories I'll be commissioning
Post by: uglyfucker on November 01, 2021, 08:55:46 PM
2feetlong2inchsthick Thanks, don't feel like you have to do it it was just a suggestion. Really Good artists are WAY too expensive for me so I'd rather put my money into written commissions. You can find some really good writers for decent prices.

I'm breaking my rule and adding a new idea/prompt to the poll since someone messaged me today wanting to see an Asian on white mom story. The mom will be based on the aforementioned Cristina Fox, about her being hypnotized and turned docile (i.e. into a cock loving whore) by her son's Asian "friend".  Feel free to vote on it "Turning Japanese"
Title: Re: Brutal Bytes- Weird Short Stories I'll be commissioning
Post by: omgmomisthatyou on November 02, 2021, 12:03:53 AM
Bloox I really love your stories, I also love "bullies" that are more on the nerdy side, and absolutely love raceplay and ugly bastard netorare so your stories really hits all the kinks for me.

Quarantine was one of the hottest things I have ever read! Really looking forward to these stories as I personally enjoy the teasing, humiliation and buildup more than the actual sex scenes.
Title: Re: Brutal Bytes- Weird Short Stories I'll be commissioning
Post by: Bazalduahentai on November 02, 2021, 04:05:12 AM
My fetishes in porn stories are netorare or cuckold and mind control. Find stories with the two topics is really rare. I'll wish so hard read the stories of "Turnning japanise", "The mask" and "Bodyswap".
In literotica there is a bodyswap story call it "Ding" where the bully swapbodies with the mom (no sex for the wimp son of course), is a really hot story, recommended https://www.literotica.com/s/ding
Title: Re: Brutal Bytes- Weird Short Stories I'll be commissioning
Post by: MiracleMilk on November 30, 2021, 04:19:15 AM
Hey bloox, I can't reply to your DM for some reason, and I can't add you on discord.

Here's my discord ID: MiracleMilk#5772
Title: Re: Brutal Bytes- Weird Short Stories I'll be commissioning
Post by: swagger383 on January 06, 2022, 12:39:44 AM
I just saw you posted 2 new Stories :)

You are a fucking Saint for comissioning all these stories <3

for real, thank you man !
Title: Re: Brutal Bytes- Weird Short Stories I'll be commissioning
Post by: uglyfucker on January 08, 2022, 02:46:39 PM
Hey guys updated my page with a few new stories. https://archiveofourown.org/users/uglyfucker739

 Will also be adding new ideas for voting, but will probably just be doing one a month from now on. Cool Mom is taking priority right now.
Title: Re: Brutal Bytes- Weird Short Stories I'll be commissioning
Post by: devetak on January 13, 2022, 06:18:35 PM
That's great, I've been really liking the shorts, especially the Zombie apocalypse and science class "experiment" but love the longer stories.
Title: Re: Brutal Bytes- Weird Short Stories I'll be commissioning
Post by: Gipsy10 on January 14, 2022, 10:14:04 PM
Good stories, read for a long time, but was not registered here  :)
Title: Re: Brutal Bytes- Weird Short Stories I'll be commissioning
Post by: uglyfucker on January 18, 2022, 10:17:44 PM
Hey guys I know this idea didn't receive a lot of votes but here's the bus ride story. I wanted to try out a new writer on Fiverr so I thought this story would be perfect for its really short length. I think it came out really good.

https://archiveofourown.org/works/36512149

Added a few more ideas as well as removed some I plan on doing soon.
Title: Re: Brutal Bytes- Weird Short Stories I'll be commissioning
Post by: please fuck my mom on January 19, 2022, 05:42:10 AM
Hi i would like to adapt one of your stories in particular "Welcome to america" into a comic using 3d renders are you ok with that?
Title: Re: Brutal Bytes- Weird Short Stories I'll be commissioning
Post by: slag10 on January 22, 2022, 11:56:31 PM
I would love to read “Mom the Birthday Clown”, “The Mask”, “Mom smokes with the boys”, “Mom’s glasses”, “Mom’s protein shake”, and “Sleepwalking mom”.

Any chance you would write any of these?
Title: Re: Brutal Bytes- Weird Short Stories I'll be commissioning
Post by: uglyfucker on January 23, 2022, 04:54:05 AM
Hi i would like to adapt one of your stories in particular "Welcome to america" into a comic using 3d renders are you ok with that?

You're more than welcome to do that for any of my stories. The mom in Welcome to America was based on Selena Adams but since you're doing it for free you can draw her however you like.
Title: Re: Brutal Bytes- Weird Short Stories I'll be commissioning
Post by: uglyfucker on January 23, 2022, 04:57:51 AM
I would love to read “Mom the Birthday Clown”, “The Mask”, “Mom smokes with the boys”, “Mom’s glasses”, “Mom’s protein shake”, and “Sleepwalking mom”.

Any chance you would write any of these?

Birthday Clown Mom is second in queue after my grocery store punks story.  After that I might try to get my commercial story or the mom's ass as drums story done. But you can bet I plan on having them all done eventually.

Guys I know I haven't really adhered to getting the stories out by order of votes and I apologize for that. There's just some stories I'd much rather get written before others. I'm getting alot of McKay Family stories done right now but will be back to basing moms on other women soon.
Title: Re: Brutal Bytes- Weird Short Stories I'll be commissioning
Post by: uglyfucker on January 30, 2022, 03:24:11 PM
Grocery Store Punks https://archiveofourown.org/works/36765550

Mom the Birthday Clown up next
Title: Re: Brutal Bytes- Weird Short Stories I'll be commissioning
Post by: TheStinger on February 01, 2022, 02:54:22 AM
Is it possible to have any sort of Hypnosis or mind control in these stories?

 Nightmare on Grove Street - (Son has reoccurring nightmares of his mom being a huge slut around his friends...A mom ntr parody of NOES)
 Mom the porn addict (Son comes home with his friends while his mom is watching porn....)
 Sleepwalking Mom (Son spies on Mom sleepwalking as she somehow ends up in his rival's bedroom....)


I really would love to read it in some of these stories and i feel that they could be a great idea for it, especially as sleepwalking mom is asleep already, or the porn videos could be hypnotizing the mom maybe a friend could be making them? the Nightmare mom could be invaded in her dreams, which would be cool if it changed her in real life, sort of astral projection.
i would be very grateful!
 
Title: Re: Brutal Bytes- Weird Short Stories I'll be commissioning
Post by: zurustru11 on February 01, 2022, 05:21:02 PM
Grocery Store Punks https://archiveofourown.org/works/36765550

Mom the Birthday Clown up next

hi, I'm a new user here.
thanks for all the things you do.
I can't send to you PM, I would like to share with you (and with all the forum) a few stories, if you don't mind.

let me know how I can contact you.

thanks in advance
Title: Re: Brutal Bytes- Weird Short Stories I'll be commissioning
Post by: uglyfucker on February 01, 2022, 10:16:07 PM
TheStinger I am open to putting hypnotism/mind control into my stories, (It's drugged/drunk mom stuff I don't really want, but the mom smokes with the boys story may come close to that) the mask was going to be about a mind control device (well a mask lol) Lawrence's ongoing rival Luke puts on Mrs.Mckay. I might change it to a magical pearl necklace though, busty milfs wearing pearl necklaces is hot!

Also the sleepwalking story was gonna have Monica being taken advantage of by Luke in her sleep, a departure from her being an open slut like in the rest of my stories. If she's asleep I'm not sure how hypnotism could work, I mean maybe I'll have her wake up and then Luke can use hypnosis on her to knock her out again lol We'll see.

The other two stories are already planned out and are a bit more of my usual plotlines but I may modify them a bit still so keep an eye out!



Title: Re: Brutal Bytes- Weird Short Stories I'll be commissioning
Post by: uglyfucker on February 12, 2022, 03:43:45 PM
Mom the Birthday Clown

https://archiveofourown.org/works/37056889

Mom vs the butt creep up next, here's who the mom will be based on Giselle Lynette https://www.tiktok.com/@gisellelynette?lang=en May not be until March

Also added a new story SPH on Valentine's day
Title: Re: Brutal Bytes- Weird Short Stories I'll be commissioning
Post by: uglyfucker on April 05, 2022, 09:34:59 PM
I had it written and will post it but it's not the best work. My writer just would not do what I wanted no matter how many times I asked for a revision. I wanted a story where the mom has ridiculous ass (she's based on Giselle Lynette) and the son's rival kind of makes a mockery of her, slapping her ass and sticking his fingers up it, running away like a true brat. Unfortunately it's very vanilla, but I still think you guys maybe will enjoy it, it's still pretty hot just not what I envisioned. I may someday have it rewritten perhaps.

Also I am taking a break from getting commissions for right now as I play around with novelai. It's saving me quite a bit of money, which in turn is letting me work less and spend time on other hobbies I have. Sorry if this disappoints anyone.
But I will be posting short stories that I come up with in the other thread I made. I will try to do my own version of this story on NovelAI and post it but it won't be great as I"m not a writer. But it will definitely be for ass lovers I promise!


https://archiveofourown.org/works/38190307


Title: Re: Brutal Bytes- Weird Short Stories I'll be commissioning
Post by: uglyfucker on May 30, 2022, 04:08:11 PM
Hey guys sorry but I reset the poll; it was a bit confusing because every time I added a new idea it kept the votes from the last one. I am going to really try to get a commission done once a month from this list, with the Mask (changed into a special necklace that makes the mom horny) and Mom the Wrestler story coming soon.
Title: Re: Brutal Bytes- Weird Short Stories I'll be commissioning
Post by: uglyfucker on June 07, 2022, 03:03:42 AM
https://archiveofourown.org/works/39483909

The Necklace.

Lawrence's younger rival Luke visits his house with a mysterious pawn shop necklace. When Lawrence's smoking hot mom Monica puts on the necklace as a joke, all hell breaks loose...

This came out better than I thought for only 2500 words, short and sweet but not too rushed. May continue it in the future. I also didn't add a mind control tag because I actually want to leave it up to the reader whether the necklace has actual powers or Monica is just her true slutty self when she puts it on. I can expand upon more in a sequel.
Title: Re: Brutal Bytes- Weird Short Stories I'll be commissioning
Post by: Assfreak on June 08, 2022, 11:07:28 AM
https://archiveofourown.org/works/39483909

The Necklace.

Lawrence's younger rival Luke visits his house with a mysterious pawn shop necklace. When Lawrence's smoking hot mom Monica puts on the necklace as a joke, all hell breaks loose...

This came out better than I thought for only 2500 words, short and sweet but not too rushed. May continue it in the future. I also didn't add a mind control tag because I actually want to leave it up to the reader whether the necklace has actual powers or Monica is just her true slutty self when she puts it on. I can expand upon more in a sequel.
Mom stolen at the haunted house was hot. Some fat ugly nerd railing a hot mums ass in the final ride was amazing
Title: Re: Brutal Bytes- Weird Short Stories I'll be commissioning
Post by: uglyfucker on June 10, 2022, 04:11:21 PM
Mom The Wrestler

The top heavy Monica Mckay is a very popular and beautiful female wrestler. Her easily embarrassed son has to deal with the repercussions of his mom's stardom as a growing teen...

I posted a rough draft of this in the AI thread. Needless to say, this came out way way better  ;D This story was heavily influenced by this hentai set https://hitomi.la/cg/moto-joshi-pro-wrestler-mama-to-ijimekko-%7C-a-former-girl-professional-wrestler-mom-and-bullying-kid-english-789348.html#1

https://archiveofourown.org/works/39555363


Whatever story hits 10 votes first will be next
Title: Re: Brutal Bytes- Weird Short Stories I'll be commissioning
Post by: Assfreak on June 10, 2022, 07:48:01 PM
Mom The Wrestler

The top heavy Monica Mckay is a very popular and beautiful female wrestler. Her easily embarrassed son has to deal with the repercussions of his mom's stardom as a growing teen...

I posted a rough draft of this in the AI thread. Needless to say, this came out way way better  ;D This story was heavily influenced by this hentai set https://hitomi.la/cg/moto-joshi-pro-wrestler-mama-to-ijimekko-%7C-a-former-girl-professional-wrestler-mom-and-bullying-kid-english-789348.html#1

https://archiveofourown.org/works/39555363


Whatever story hits 10 votes first will be next
Moms tinder all the way
Title: Re: Brutal Bytes- Weird Short Stories I'll be commissioning
Post by: uglyfucker on June 11, 2022, 02:37:14 AM

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Moms tinder all the way
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It seems like it. It will be an ass-focused story based on the mom from BTABOM, this fat assed latina Selena Adams https://spankbang.com/5jcxf/video/selena+adams+tanga whom I haven't done a story in a while. I will try to make the bully as gross as possible for you ugly guy fans out there  ;D Maybe give me some characters to base the guy off of, it will make it easier for me. The only thing I won't change is his race which will be white, an ugly fat gross white guy ala comic book guy.
Title: Re: Brutal Bytes- Weird Short Stories I'll be commissioning
Post by: Assfreak on June 11, 2022, 11:07:33 AM

Moms tinder all the way
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It seems like it. It will be an ass-focused story based on the mom from BTABOM, this fat assed latina Selena Adams https://spankbang.com/5jcxf/video/selena+adams+tanga whom I haven't done a story in a while. I will try to make the bully as gross as possible for you ugly guy fans out there  ;D Maybe give me some characters to base the guy off of, it will make it easier for me. The only thing I won't change is his race which will be white, an ugly fat gross white guy ala comic book guy.
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Just a thought but maybe make him more of the creepy pervert of the main characters class? Less of the bully type but someone who makes him uncomfortable and he doesn't like
Title: Re: Brutal Bytes- Weird Short Stories I'll be commissioning
Post by: uglyfucker on June 11, 2022, 09:42:53 PM

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Just a thought but maybe make him more of the creepy pervert of the main characters class? Less of the bully type but someone who makes him uncomfortable and he doesn't like
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No problem I have no intention of making ugly characters bullies, they'll be more like Shawn from Cool Mom, annoying pests at worst but still stealing the mom away from the son.
Title: Re: Brutal Bytes- Weird Short Stories I'll be commissioning
Post by: foogo on June 13, 2022, 05:08:29 PM
The concept of the bully being ugly and socially not accepted is of great interest to me. Especially if he can corrupt the mother into being ugly or not accepted like him (weight gain, slob, other odd and niche fetishes)
Title: Re: Brutal Bytes- Weird Short Stories I'll be commissioning
Post by: uglyfucker on June 13, 2022, 05:53:35 PM
The concept of the bully being ugly and socially not accepted is of great interest to me. Especially if he can corrupt the mother into being ugly or not accepted like him (weight gain, slob, other odd and niche fetishes)

Totally with you on the first part; I like short pretty boy brats who steal the big breasted/fat assed moms away but yeah ugly hung bastards having 10/10 mommys lusting over them is hot too ;D The only thing I'm not into is 6'4 muscular jock chads fucking the moms, just way too cliche and there are more than enough stories to fit that I will never do one.

On the second part I'm just not into it, the moms being hot and (relatively) in shape is extremely important to me. To each his own though I am attracted to some bbws.

The outline has been sent to my writer; I probably won't post again until the story is finished.
Title: Re: Brutal Bytes- Weird Short Stories I'll be commissioning
Post by: Zack_O_o on June 13, 2022, 07:10:19 PM
I love your stories buddy  :)
Title: Re: Brutal Bytes- Weird Short Stories I'll be commissioning
Post by: uglyfucker on June 22, 2022, 03:12:20 PM
Mom Tinder https://archiveofourown.org/works/39814365

Sergio Dominguez is a normal teenager at first sight; except his early 30s mom Maria is smoking hot, and her soft enormous latina ass is like an urban legend at his school. Sergio's perverted gross classmate Earl lets it be known he's a huge fan of his mom. Like his mom's fat ass, Earl's huge cock is an urban legend at his school as well. Will the jealous son be able to keep his hormone-driven creepy peer's hands off his equally horny mom, or will technology in the form of a degenerate "dating" site called Tinder get in his way?....

Mom based on Selena Adams https://spankbang.com/6c3lk/video/cooking+naked

Hope you ugly bastard fans enjoy this one; I promise there will be more like it in the future.

Next Story to ten votes looks like Mom smokes with the Boys; I'm probably going to have that be on Sam and Shanie, with Sam hanging out with his stoner white buddies, having a horny Shanie walk in on them, and having Sam get so high he doesn't know if her sexual exploits with them is his imagination or reality  ;D

But I will be focusing on The Good Son Chapter 5 next so that will come first.
Title: Re: Brutal Bytes- Weird Short Stories I'll be commissioning
Post by: slag10 on June 23, 2022, 05:20:53 AM
I love this!

Uglyfucker, could you send me the pic you use as your profile pic? Do you also happen to have it without the caption?
Title: Re: Brutal Bytes- Weird Short Stories I'll be commissioning
Post by: beholder on June 23, 2022, 12:11:12 PM
Great story (Mom Tinder). Probably the best short story so far. A good base for further development of the story.
Title: Re: Brutal Bytes- Weird Short Stories I'll be commissioning
Post by: uglyfucker on June 23, 2022, 09:31:33 PM
I love this!

Uglyfucker, could you send me the pic you use as your profile pic? Do you also happen to have it without the caption?

That's Shanie Gaviria, the base of Shanie Sanchez in my stories with her and her son Sam. Mom smokes with the boys and Inner Beauty will most likely feature them, not sure yet 8) Also I toyed around with an interconnected world before, I may go back to that by having Earl Coomer be the ugly bull in all my stories, probably fucking Shanie and Monica in their own tales too :P not sure yet. God I love getting commissions  ;D

just bing or google her, plenty of content will pop up
Title: Re: Brutal Bytes- Weird Short Stories I'll be commissioning
Post by: uglyfucker on June 23, 2022, 09:33:28 PM
Great story (Mom Tinder). Probably the best short story so far. A good base for further development of the story.

lol for right now man it's a one shot. Not saying it will never have a sequel. I actually paid for only 5000 words but this cool ass dude on Fiverr tossed in the extra for free. It took longer but was way worth it.  ;D I'm glad you guys like it, I wish all my stories were hits but my tastes/fetishes come first, and if others love it too it's only a plus.
Title: Re: Brutal Bytes- Weird Short Stories I'll be commissioning
Post by: Monkeycow on June 24, 2022, 03:45:56 PM
Mom Tinder https://archiveofourown.org/works/39814365

Sergio Dominguez is a normal teenager at first sight; except his early 30s mom Maria is smoking hot, and her soft enormous latina ass is like an urban legend at his school. Sergio's perverted gross classmate Earl lets it be known he's a huge fan of his mom. Like his mom's fat ass, Earl's huge cock is an urban legend at his school as well. Will the jealous son be able to keep his hormone-driven creepy peer's hands off his equally horny mom, or will technology in the form of a degenerate "dating" site called Tinder get in his way?....

Mom based on Selena Adams https://spankbang.com/6c3lk/video/cooking+naked

Hope you ugly bastard fans enjoy this one; I promise there will be more like it in the future.

Next Story to ten votes looks like Mom smokes with the Boys; I'm probably going to have that be on Sam and Shanie, with Sam hanging out with his stoner white buddies, having a horny Shanie walk in on them, and having Sam get so high he doesn't know if her sexual exploits with them is his imagination or reality  ;D

But I will be focusing on The Good Son Chapter 5 next so that will come first.

That was seriously hot! I would love for it to continue. Imagine Earl banging his mom in the school bathroom when she comes to pick him up.
Title: Re: Brutal Bytes- Weird Short Stories I'll be commissioning
Post by: omgmomisthatyou on June 29, 2022, 05:06:06 AM
I fucking love your stories Uglyfucker. I've always enjoyed stories with wimpy, ugly, or fat "bullies". It's so nice to see someone else with appreciation for this. Quarantined was one of my favorite stories EVER -- Mom Tinder and Grocery Punks are literally fantasy i've had ever since I got into this fetish. thanks for reading my mind!!!
Title: Re: Brutal Bytes- Weird Short Stories I'll be commissioning
Post by: uglyfucker on June 29, 2022, 10:49:02 PM
thanks for the praise man; Quarantined is an oldie damn forgot all about it, it's good but I think my stuff now is a bit better. I did that story on an asian mom, but I think I gotta stick to latinas because that's my background and I can relate to the sons more, which makes a better story. I can't relate to having a white or asian mom which is why I don't do stories on them as often. Still glad you like my stuff :)
Title: Re: Brutal Bytes- Weird Short Stories I'll be commissioning
Post by: uglyfucker on July 13, 2022, 05:15:14 PM
While I wait for the next story to hit 10 votes I went ahead and got that Castle Whorehouse inspired story written. If you guys liked that story or Winter Nightmare (the white boy who "steals" Monica is very similar to Huey) I think you'll like this one. Beware there is a small amount of mom/son anal incest, but it's quite short.

Chapter 1 https://archiveofourown.org/works/40277391/chapters/100886826

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Title: Re: Brutal Bytes- Weird Short Stories I'll be commissioning
Post by: uglyfucker on July 15, 2022, 02:59:07 PM
Mom's Ass Tattoo will be the next story and will be based on the Perez family from Mom the Big Booty Ghost.
Title: Re: Brutal Bytes- Weird Short Stories I'll be commissioning
Post by: mndhanson017 on July 15, 2022, 05:06:03 PM
While I wait for the next story to hit 10 votes I went ahead and got that Castle Whorehouse inspired story written. If you guys liked that story or Winter Nightmare (the white boy who "steals" Monica is very similar to Huey) I think you'll like this one. Beware there is a small amount of mom/son anal incest, but it's quite short.

Chapter 1 https://archiveofourown.org/works/40277391/chapters/100886826

Chapter 2 placeholder

Will Winter Nightmare ever be completed, it had like two chapters left, why not finish it off?
Title: Re: Brutal Bytes- Weird Short Stories I'll be commissioning
Post by: uglyfucker on July 15, 2022, 05:55:08 PM
While I wait for the next story to hit 10 votes I went ahead and got that Castle Whorehouse inspired story written. If you guys liked that story or Winter Nightmare (the white boy who "steals" Monica is very similar to Huey) I think you'll like this one. Beware there is a small amount of mom/son anal incest, but it's quite short.

Chapter 1 https://archiveofourown.org/works/40277391/chapters/100886826

Chapter 2 placeholder

Will Winter Nightmare ever be completed, it had like two chapters left, why not finish it off?

Noted, I definitely need to try to finish off that story. I've kinda lost contact with the writer, however. We shall see but I'm having alot of fun getting these short stories done.

I think you're from AOO right? You're one of the few people who always leave negative comments on my work. I'm surprised you made an account here ???
Title: Re: Brutal Bytes- Weird Short Stories I'll be commissioning
Post by: LooksLikeCookie on July 18, 2022, 01:10:55 AM
I love the idea from "Mom the Porn Addict" =)
Title: Re: Brutal Bytes- Weird Short Stories I'll be commissioning
Post by: uglyfucker on July 18, 2022, 04:15:27 PM
Wow the votes for Mom the Porn addict really came out of nowhere! That will be the next story after Mom's Ass Tattoo. That got ten votes first so it is next.

I have two slightly similar ideas: PM me or tell me in here which you'd prefer.

A) New Original Characters. The mom will be based on legendary porn star Ava Addams.

Stoner-type son brings his ugly/nerdy classmate home to play video games. He catches his retired huge-breasted porn star mom watching one of her older videos. Up until now his mom has done a good job of keeping her past a secret, although the son obviously knew from the internet. Now broke Mom has been badgering son to get a job recently but he's been locking himself in his room playing games all day. Mom sees son's classmate's huge erection through his pants and comes up with an idea; to film herself with his classmate on a streaming porn site and make some money off it since her lazy bum son won't bring any home....

B) Mckay Family. Mom based on Danica Collins. Her personality will be a little different in this story, more akin to BluVelvet's moms as she will get drunk and then have sex.

Son gets paired up with his rival to do a project. They walk in on her naked and masturbating to a porn video of a younger white male fucking a hot older Latina female. When mom catches them looking, she immediately runs up to her room ashamed. At school, rival threatens to tell everyone son's mom is a degenerate perverted porn addict unless he helps him score with his mom. Son invites rival over again to his house, where his former alcoholic mom has been depressed ever since the boys walked in on her masturbating. His mom locks herself in her room drinking the whole night, while rival eggs son to help him fuck her....

These will probably end up being on the longer side so it may take a while to get them done. So you guys have plenty of time to tell me which one you'd rather read.



Title: Re: Brutal Bytes- Weird Short Stories I'll be commissioning
Post by: LooksLikeCookie on July 18, 2022, 07:09:41 PM
Hey =)

I would prefer the "B" Story, but not with one rival. Two would be better =)  and maybe later it will lead to a gangbang.
And i would prefer just Friends or best Friends. But Rivals are okay too :D

And of Course Ava Addams for both Storys =)  :-D

Well that would be my wishes but iam not sad if if you don't take them into.

The story will definitely be good because of you =)
Title: Re: Brutal Bytes- Weird Short Stories I'll be commissioning
Post by: Bazalduahentai on July 22, 2022, 03:35:18 AM
Wow the votes for Mom the Porn addict really came out of nowhere! That will be the next story after Mom's Ass Tattoo. That got ten votes first so it is next.

I have two slightly similar ideas: PM me or tell me in here which you'd prefer.

A) New Original Characters. The mom will be based on legendary porn star Ava Addams.

Stoner-type son brings his ugly/nerdy classmate home to play video games. He catches his retired huge-breasted porn star mom watching one of her older videos. Up until now his mom has done a good job of keeping her past a secret, although the son obviously knew from the internet. Now broke Mom has been badgering son to get a job recently but he's been locking himself in his room playing games all day. Mom sees son's classmate's huge erection through his pants and comes up with an idea; to film herself with his classmate on a streaming porn site and make some money off it since her lazy bum son won't bring any home....

B) Mckay Family. Mom based on Danica Collins. Her personality will be a little different in this story, more akin to BluVelvet's moms as she will get drunk and then have sex.

Son gets paired up with his rival to do a project. They walk in on her naked and masturbating to a porn video of a younger white male fucking a hot older Latina female. When mom catches them looking, she immediately runs up to her room ashamed. At school, rival threatens to tell everyone son's mom is a degenerate perverted porn addict unless he helps him score with his mom. Son invites rival over again to his house, where his former alcoholic mom has been depressed ever since the boys walked in on her masturbating. His mom locks herself in her room drinking the whole night, while rival eggs son to help him fuck her....

These will probably end up being on the longer side so it may take a while to get them done. So you guys have plenty of time to tell me which one you'd rather read.

I like the B story but I think the part when the mom run ashamed doesn't work for my. May be if they spy on her by the window and she is so concentade in her porn video for even notice the boys, while the son sees the rival huge erection through his pants and his "I having a sinister plan" face. That way the mom get a good firts impression of the rival. Maybe also the rival obliges the son to filming them having sex just for kicks and giggles.
Title: Re: Brutal Bytes- Weird Short Stories I'll be commissioning
Post by: LooksLikeCookie on July 23, 2022, 03:37:11 PM
I like the spy idea too =)  would be nice how they spy on his mother watching porn and the boys get very aroused by it and make a plan together how the other boys can fuck his mom while the son is watching and jerking to it =)
Title: Re: Brutal Bytes- Weird Short Stories I'll be commissioning
Post by: uglyfucker on July 24, 2022, 04:51:38 PM
I will take your ideas under advisement  ;D Though I'm not budging on the first story being based on Ava Addams and the second being Danica.

I can definitely add two boys to the second story instead of one; make it more like Mom's judo. It can be Luke and his friend/cousin or whatever. I want the first story to just be the one gross ugly guy, I know those are popular.

I wanted Monica's personality to be different in this story because I'm tired of having her be a huge slut in everything. Having her be a porn addict is shameful for her, so her being embarrassed that her son and his "friend" catch her masturbating would add more to the story. But again I'll take it under advisement. The mom would be very openly slutty in the first story.

Yeah these votes have taken off out of nowhere, someone must have pinned a link of this thread somewhere. I have on 4chan but I doubt that's where all the votes have come from. 


Title: Re: Brutal Bytes- Weird Short Stories I'll be commissioning
Post by: LooksLikeCookie on September 19, 2022, 12:27:15 PM
How is the "mom porn addict" story going ? =)
Title: Re: Brutal Bytes- Weird Short Stories I'll be commissioning
Post by: Zack_Zack on September 19, 2022, 07:03:31 PM
good  8)
Title: Re: Brutal Bytes- Weird Short Stories I'll be commissioning
Post by: LooksLikeCookie on November 03, 2022, 05:04:15 PM
Any updates here ? =)
Title: Re: Brutal Bytes- Weird Short Stories I'll be commissioning
Post by: uglyfucker on November 05, 2022, 04:18:37 AM
Sorry guys I should have let you know but I kinda wanted to keep it a secret, Fearless Wretch is writing an epic long story for me right now and that's where all my time/money has been going. It will be done and posted here either this month or next, and brutal bytes are on hold for now.
Title: Re: Brutal Bytes- Weird Short Stories I'll be commissioning
Post by: devetak on November 05, 2022, 08:52:21 AM
Still great to hear.
Title: Re: Brutal Bytes- Weird Short Stories I'll be commissioning
Post by: newboy on November 16, 2022, 01:09:05 PM
Sorry guys I should have let you know but I kinda wanted to keep it a secret, Fearless Wretch is writing an epic long story for me right now and that's where all my time/money has been going. It will be done and posted here either this month or next, and brutal bytes are on hold for now.
  Wow, Fearless Wretch is my favorite author. Great to hear this. Could you please tell what would be the premise of this story?
Title: Re: Brutal Bytes- Weird Short Stories I'll be commissioning
Post by: uglyfucker on November 16, 2022, 04:14:27 PM
  Wow, Fearless Wretch is my favorite author. Great to hear this. Could you please tell what would be the premise of this story?

It will be based on the Mckay family (Lawrence and Monica) but Monica's personality will be a bit different from my other stories; also there will be a VERY close relationship between Monica and her son but not outright incest. It will be very similar to "Cool Mom', a bit longer.

Monica is suffering from insomnia/sleep problems and takes solace in her son Lawrence by letting him sleep in her room, to comfort her and try to help fix her sleep. Meanwhile, at school, Lawrence must contend with classmate Richard, a pesty brat who has a history of insulting Lawrence with his perversions towards Monica, as well as being just a general nuisance. Eventually Monica sends Lawrence out to get some remedies for her insomnia; that's when he's stumbles upon Richard's dad's office, who is a sleep issue related doctor. Soon events lead to Richard spending time at the Mckay's home, and slowly replacing Lawrence as his mom's helper for her insomnia....

Wretch is taking a really long time writing this story lol but I can't complain since no one writes quite like him. Here's a small taste of the story in pdf format but I'm not gonna post more until it's done, which will be next month hopefully. For fans of my story Cool Mom and also Remnick's Mrs. Campbell's Bunkmate, this will be kind of a mix of those two stories.
Title: Re: Brutal Bytes- Weird Short Stories I'll be commissioning
Post by: newboy on November 16, 2022, 07:39:36 PM
Nice Setting and with the talent of wretch it will be an epic
Title: Re: Brutal Bytes- Weird Short Stories I'll be commissioning
Post by: adamingleww on November 17, 2022, 04:12:56 AM
Sounds awesome. It's rarer, but stories where the bully establishes himself as a replacement to the son in some emotional way, serving a purpose or performing a service to her the son isn't capable of, is often hotter to me than the sex itself. Can't wait.
Title: Re: Brutal Bytes- Weird Short Stories I'll be commissioning
Post by: newboy on November 30, 2022, 08:26:19 AM
Did you get any updates from Wretch ? Waiting for his story is torture.
Title: Re: Brutal Bytes- Weird Short Stories I'll be commissioning
Post by: beholder on December 13, 2022, 05:26:42 PM
Wow!!! Great news. I can't wait because Cool Mom and Bully Takes a Bite out of Mom were great stories. However, I hope The Good Son and maybe your old story Winter Nightmare will also be completed :)
Title: Re: Brutal Bytes- Weird Short Stories I'll be commissioning
Post by: ansens on December 15, 2022, 10:58:28 PM
God damnn youre a G, did you wrote the ''Why is your Mom's butt so big'' story? i didnt see that story. Also can you do a Mom-swapping based on story please?
Title: Re: Brutal Bytes- Weird Short Stories I'll be commissioning
Post by: LooksLikeCookie on January 27, 2023, 06:39:37 PM
I guess the Story with mom watching porn will never come ? :D
Title: Re: Brutal Bytes- Weird Short Stories I'll be commissioning
Post by: uglyfucker on March 06, 2023, 05:52:44 PM
As of now no, sorry. Locking this thread until I decide to post more stories. Once again sorry guys but I'm taking a break from commissions for the moment.