Poll

What would you most like to read?

Mom the Vampire - (There's a vampire attacking teenage boys in son's neighborhood. Rumors swirl abound it's someone quite close to him...)
2 (1.4%)
Nightmare on Grove Street - (Son has reoccurring nightmares of his mom being a huge slut around his friends...A mom ntr parody of NOES)
17 (12.2%)
Dissolving Bonds - (Son's rival plays a prank on mom, stickyglueing himself to the mom. And thus an unwanted houseguest is created....)
7 (5%)
The Mask - (Son is blackmailed by rival to put a mask on his mom; not just any mask but one with "powers"....)
14 (10.1%)
Body Swap - (Son has bodies swapped with his perverted classmate. Said perverted classmate is also obsessed with his hot mom....)
10 (7.2%)
Mom's accident (Mom gets into a car accident, and her surgery mistakenly turns her into a perfect looking bimbo....)
17 (12.2%)
Mom smokes with the boys (Son is smoking weed with his good for nothing stoner white friends; his thick latina mom decides to join them...)
15 (10.8%)
Mom the porn addict (Son comes home with his friends while his mom is watching porn....)
12 (8.6%)
Mom's glasses (Son's rival visits; coincidentally his mom's glasses go missing. Mom can't see without her glasses....)
7 (5%)
Mom's Protein shake (Son's Rival ejaculates into mom's protein shake when she isn't looking)
14 (10.1%)
Sleepwalking Mom (Son spies on Mom sleepwalking as she somehow ends up in his rival's bedroom....)
3 (2.2%)
Fitness Mom (Gymcel son watches as his mom pays more attention to a better looking albeit scrawnier boy his age in the gym...)
1 (0.7%)
Mom tutors the retard (Son watches in disbelief as his mom teaches and then seduces an ugly fat mentally retarded boy from his school)
14 (10.1%)
SPH on Valentine's Day (On a snowy Valentine's day, son is humiliated in the shower by his mom and rival....)
6 (4.3%)

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bloox

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on: October 17, 2021, 06:12:19 PM
Hey guys as you know I've have commissions done, such as BTABOM, Cool Mom, and Winter Nightmare. I've found a new writer who really excels at shorter stories though, and I think for more outlandish/goofy mom netorare ideas this is the way to go. I think there are two great ways to approach stories, one where you spend a long time developing characters, backstory, motivations, etc, and the other where you pique the reader's imagination and leave a lot of what ifs. These will be in the latter group.

So you guys can vote for the ideas I've given or give your own but I want kind of unique/silly/out there ideas, not cliche mom catches son getting bullied by a Chad and then gives said Chad a "stern talking" to. I'd also like to focus more on the son's embarrassment/humiliation/jealousy than just outright explicit sex but there sometimes will still be intercourse. If you've read spankymcf's stories these will be similar to those.

Thanks and I hope this sparks the activity a bit on this kinda dead site. I will still be doing longer stories but these are quicker/cheaper for me to have written. I know there's another story voting thread I made back as uglyfucker and I will try to get to those eventually (The Good Son is being written as we speak) but for now I will be devoting my time to Brutal Bytes.
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Here are the two first chapters in the brutal bytes series:

https://archiveofourown.org/works/34406800

https://archiveofourown.org/works/34554826

It should take about a week or so to get these written, much quicker than longer stories, so I'll check the result every week and go with the highest vote getter; as well as add ideas from you guys I am into.


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Reply #1 on: October 17, 2021, 10:47:31 PM
These are all great story ideas. There's a lot of color and diversity here and they all have that air of tragedy that makes this fetish so great.

I'm still writing new stories at https://bluvelvet99.wixsite.com/website

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Reply #2 on: October 18, 2021, 01:15:59 AM
Went with "Life's a Beach". Sci-fi/magic/etc type stories are automatic non-starters with me, so that let me cross off a handful of your concepts.

Beyond that, I tend to prefer 'cruel betrayal' stories. So the mom getting off on her son being bullied (instead of, you know, helping him) is much more interesting to me than the others.


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Reply #3 on: October 18, 2021, 04:58:25 AM
Hot.


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Reply #4 on: October 18, 2021, 04:59:38 PM
Quote from: bluvelvet99 on October 17, 2021, 10:47:31 PM
These are all great story ideas. There's a lot of color and diversity here and they all have that air of tragedy that makes this fetish so great.

Thanks man that means alot coming from a legend like you  :)

AI anon yeah I'm not really big into scifi stuff but I hate how cliche alot of mom ntr stories are, son getting bullied by chad or black tyrones and then having the oh so "innocent and pure" huge breasted mom fuck them as a reward. Why not just have the annoying rival who happens to be a pretty boy twink and not some huge muscular brute steal the mom, or even a fat ugly nerd?

I know I'm kinda contradicting myself lol but these stories are quite unrealistic to begin with so why not approach them with some wacky ideas. I agree with sadistic and cruel moms, most of my stories will have them or at the very least have moms who don't give a fuck what their sons think about their sexuality. That's how my mom was and how most moms are in real life so that bit of realism will stick.

I will try to even out the more realistic stories with the more farfetched ideas. Also you'll notice the horror/Halloween themed plots, that's only because it's October I won't always do horror themed stories.


Looks like Life's a Beach is running away with the early votes but I will still leave it open until Friday. If that wins it will be based on the Sanchez Family, here's a preview of the video that inspired the idea...https://vimeo.com/635404455

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Reply #5 on: October 22, 2021, 02:20:08 AM
I've always gravitated to your stories because they flip the racial element from BBC to BWC. As a minority, I've always found that hotter. The sadistic mother is so hot too, and I think it always elevates the stories and scenarios when the mom gives in. Please make this next story a BWC bully/bullies on a spic or indian mom!


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Reply #6 on: October 22, 2021, 03:00:52 AM
Thanks veronica_fan. And your wish will be granted as the next story will be a brown latina with a white brat rival.

Yes I'm a minority myself and much more into ethnic moms and white bulls (not bullies particularly). So you will never see "bbc" in my stories. Just a preference. I may do some stories with white moms and nerdy asian or ugly indian/mexican guys or something but I'm not sure yet. I like being a bit of a contrarian lol bbc stuff is everywhere so I try to approach it a bit differently.

Okay it's pretty much Friday where I live so Life's A Beach wins this week's poll. Look forward to it sometime next week, along with another story I'm having written, a Halloween Haunted House comedy focused story about "Bishoujo Mom", I'm 100% positive all the coomers have heard of her before. ;D

Guys feel free to keep voting. I will be picking a story every Thursday night/Friday. Every 4 or 5 stories that get finished, I will add a few more ideas to the poll; until I run into a block at least. However I can't promise my writers will get them done as quickly. I will always post them here though so you'll know.


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Reply #7 on: October 22, 2021, 10:25:47 AM
Love your work you can add some sph in your stories


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Reply #8 on: October 23, 2021, 03:11:04 AM
Quote from: siri fan on October 22, 2021, 10:25:47 AM
Love your work you can add some sph in your stories

I can definitely do that in stories that have explicit sex; all my sons always have smaller dicks than the "bulls" but I usually don't have the mom make fun of them since she doesn't see the son in a sexual light to begin with, but I'll work it into some story.

Wow the Science Experiment is pulling in votes all of a sudden; if that were to be the next story, who would you guys prefer as the mom between these two women I've never had a story written about: Huge fake titted blonde Cristina Fox or bruntette bimbo Korina Kova? Should the bulls be bratty whites or maybe some perverted asian nerds?



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Reply #9 on: October 23, 2021, 03:16:32 AM
Bishoujo Mom is perfect big tits and big ass slutty face perfect milf


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Reply #10 on: October 23, 2021, 02:27:17 PM
Mom Stolen at the Haunted House
https://archiveofourown.org/works/34672291


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Reply #11 on: October 23, 2021, 04:44:42 PM
For me, I don't care much about race but I think more about the social issues with being a mom, married or not. I care more about the woman who acts like a saint in public and make her kids act like saints, but inside she's a total whore.


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Reply #12 on: October 23, 2021, 07:11:19 PM
I don't care about race either but I'm most attracted to latinas and mixed women, though I will be doing some stories on white moms. For me the mom doesn't have to act like a saint but she wouldn't be a completely open whore either. I also like moms who treat their son's friends/rivals as if they were sons to her at the same time as seeing them in a sexual light; makes it extra brutal for the son as she will only ever see him as her baby boy but nothing more. For me the son's emotions/feelings are more important than just outright sex.


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Reply #13 on: October 25, 2021, 03:36:24 PM
It is what it is lol I'm gonna keep uploading them regardless of quality though  :P There are people who love it. Haunted House was meant to be more comedy focused with the twist being the nerd got the mom while Booty ghost was a straight-up cliché white brat prick steals big booty latina mom; like I said before I want a diverse set of stories here so there will be tales that float your boat and some that don't. For example the cucked commercial one won't have sex at all and instead will have the rival pulling pranks on the mom during the commercial, so it probably won't be as "good" and that's fine.

I have the Mom's a Beach one done but the quality on that one is admittedly a little low as it was done by another writer; I haven't decided if I want to post it yet or get it rewritten. I think I'll post it as I don't really want to respend money on the same story but I probably won't use that same writer again.
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Reply #14 on: October 26, 2021, 02:17:48 AM
Quote from: bloox on October 25, 2021, 03:36:24 PM
It is what it is lol I'm gonna keep uploading them regardless of quality though  :P There are people who love it. Haunted House was meant to be more comedy focused with the twist being the nerd got the mom while Booty ghost was a straight-up cliché white brat prick steals big booty latina mom; like I said before I want a diverse set of stories here so there will be tales that float your boat and some that don't. For example the cucked commercial one won't have sex at all and instead will have the rival pulling pranks on the mom during the commercial, so it probably won't be as "good" and that's fine.

I have the Mom's a Beach one done but the quality on that one is admittedly a little low as it was done by another writer; I haven't decided if I want to post it yet or get it rewritten. I think I'll post it as I don't really want to respend money on the same story but I probably won't use that same writer again.
Waiting for it buddy


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