Author Topic: Castle Whorehouse  (Read 6574 times)

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Reply #15 on: July 09, 2022, 07:04:16 PM
Read it last night and liked it quite a bit. I was a bit worried at the beginning from some of the flowery language, but I either got used to it or it wasn't as prevalent as the story went on. I appreciated the constant attention the son had towards his mother's figure, which kept up the sexual energy even when there wasn't a lot happening on set. The payoff around the 3/4 mark (after the cellar) was satisfying, and overall I felt the take on this haunted house reminded me quite a bit of American Horror Story S1 and Haunting of Hill House, both of which I love.

As an erotic story, I do wish the ending had more of a sexual focus than it did, though if the intent was more to create a cohesive story with erotic elements then it more or less succeeded. Will definitely consider going through your other stories as well now to get a better sense of your style.



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Reply #16 on: July 09, 2022, 08:58:34 PM
@Snowstorm love your avi  ;D

I think this is a one and done from Wretch, I know's he really busy with art and much prefers it to writing. Still we should appreciate any bit of work we get from him, he's such a good writer.

And also I have a short commission coming up that is influenced quite a bit by Castle Whorehouse, albeit in its own right different. It won't be anywhere as epic, dark, or spooky as CW but from what I've read from my writer it's shaping up rather nicely.



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Reply #17 on: July 10, 2022, 12:07:38 AM
@Snowstorm love your avi  ;D

Thanks! Brittany O'Connell here is close to what my mom looks like in her prime, so it makes me want to show off what a lucky son I was  :P

And that makes sense for Wretch. It's not often you have creators that dabble in both the craft of writing and art, much less be competent in both. I will look into their other works soon, I'm sure.



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Reply #18 on: July 14, 2022, 08:56:08 PM
Please please please continue birthday cake! Man that story is straight fire! Maybe eventually the son will get his slice too!