Bully Fucks My Mom

GENERAL DISCUSSION => Fapping Materials => Topic started by: Fearless Wretch on May 06, 2022, 08:38:27 AM

Title: Castle Whorehouse (Story)
Post by: Fearless Wretch on May 06, 2022, 08:38:27 AM
Check the link. That's all I can say. Thanks.

https://linktr.ee/fearlesswretch
Title: Re: Castle Whorehouse
Post by: uglyfucker on May 06, 2022, 03:57:20 PM
Good to hear from you Wretch! I'm guessing this is your original work instead of a commission. Wow it's a long one can't wait to read it! :D
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Post by: Zack_O_o on May 06, 2022, 05:01:56 PM
thanks for the material
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Post by: uglyfucker on May 06, 2022, 10:24:33 PM
Read about halfway so far and it's excellent. Imagine if Stephen King wrote a haunted house themed mom ntr. The best thing about your writing is the sense of dread and paranoia of the son, as well as your great descriptions of the mom's body. You also do a great job at simultaneously making the son both an alpha and a beta in your stories. At first I thought it was just gonna be Arthur worming his way into the mom's bedroom like in "Cool Mom" but things really took a different direction early on.  ;D Not gonna spoil anymore you guys gotta read this!
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Post by: Tarcio456 on May 07, 2022, 01:44:38 PM
Sublime as always
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Post by: uglyfucker on May 10, 2022, 09:21:09 PM
So far this is mom ntr story of the year for me. 95% 10/10 apart from the ending which was a bit convoluted and dragged on too much. Still it's epic and every mom ntr fan must read it. 8)
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Post by: bobbyk2 on May 11, 2022, 05:46:54 AM
I can't seem to find it. Does anyone have a link?
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Post by: crazyboy2022 on May 11, 2022, 06:14:29 PM
It's a good story, I liked it, I recommend everyone to read it.
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Post by: uglyfucker on May 12, 2022, 01:00:39 AM
I can't seem to find it. Does anyone have a link?

https://mega.nz/folder/oNY2EZyQ#W-7Qf55RORG86NGA2sgmEw/folder/0ZZUUZQS
Title: Re: Castle Whorehouse
Post by: devetak on May 12, 2022, 07:59:56 AM
Huge fan of your work, it's been posted here before and I've been consistently amazed.

It really made my day to find out that you were still out there writing, let alone have a new story to share. I'll read it tonight.
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Post by: swagger383 on May 12, 2022, 06:33:42 PM
I am a huge fan too !
I already read your new story and it was great like always !
glad your still around <3
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Post by: shifttabctrl on May 13, 2022, 12:12:42 PM
Still hopping the Cool Mom gets a sequel.
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Post by: uglyfucker on May 14, 2022, 01:14:02 AM
Still hopping the Cool Mom gets a sequel.

hey man that's actually on me I commissioned Cool Mom from Wretch and as of now I have no plans of continuing it. I'm using the same mom son duo from that story in the Good Son though.https://bullyfucksmymom.com/fapping-materials/the-good-son/
Title: Re: Castle Whorehouse
Post by: boop1234567 on July 08, 2022, 11:45:38 AM
Check the signature. That's all I can say. Thanks.

Any chance of a sequel? What happens to mom after the son escapes
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Post by: mazerunner on July 09, 2022, 12:15:11 PM
Great story, would love to read more. PM me if you need any ideas ;)
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Post by: SnowStorm on July 09, 2022, 07:04:16 PM
Read it last night and liked it quite a bit. I was a bit worried at the beginning from some of the flowery language, but I either got used to it or it wasn't as prevalent as the story went on. I appreciated the constant attention the son had towards his mother's figure, which kept up the sexual energy even when there wasn't a lot happening on set. The payoff around the 3/4 mark (after the cellar) was satisfying, and overall I felt the take on this haunted house reminded me quite a bit of American Horror Story S1 and Haunting of Hill House, both of which I love.

As an erotic story, I do wish the ending had more of a sexual focus than it did, though if the intent was more to create a cohesive story with erotic elements then it more or less succeeded. Will definitely consider going through your other stories as well now to get a better sense of your style.
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Post by: uglyfucker on July 09, 2022, 08:58:34 PM
@Snowstorm love your avi  ;D

I think this is a one and done from Wretch, I know's he really busy with art and much prefers it to writing. Still we should appreciate any bit of work we get from him, he's such a good writer.

And also I have a short commission coming up that is influenced quite a bit by Castle Whorehouse, albeit in its own right different. It won't be anywhere as epic, dark, or spooky as CW but from what I've read from my writer it's shaping up rather nicely.
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Post by: SnowStorm on July 10, 2022, 12:07:38 AM
@Snowstorm love your avi  ;D

Thanks! Brittany O'Connell here is close to what my mom looks like in her prime, so it makes me want to show off what a lucky son I was  :P

And that makes sense for Wretch. It's not often you have creators that dabble in both the craft of writing and art, much less be competent in both. I will look into their other works soon, I'm sure.
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Post by: Whocarez on July 14, 2022, 08:56:08 PM
Please please please continue birthday cake! Man that story is straight fire! Maybe eventually the son will get his slice too!