Author Topic: Clueless/Oblivious Son  (Read 36381 times)

breakmysoul

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on: December 06, 2020, 09:35:05 PM
I am trying to collect stories where the son is oblivious to his mom getting fucked by bully. Basically, lots of scenarios where mom looking sweaty and disheveled after meeting with bully, cum dripping through legs, mom getting fingered under covers, mom getting fucked in bedroom, but innocent son thinks it is the bully and mom doing random stuff. Maybe there are signs such as used condoms, cum drenched sheets/panties but the son brushes it aside thinking of it as anything else.

The closest I could find was this:https://www.hentai-foundry.com/stories/user/something1234/15184/Soccer-Mom-and-Bully

Just the fact that the son is clueless makes it quite hot. It's ok if the son eventually finds out later or is shown by the bully later. But don't want the mom to show herself off to the son, for some reason that seems like a turn-off. Basically, the mom is cheating and trying to hide as much as possible.






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Reply #1 on: December 06, 2020, 11:58:25 PM
Actually thats a way hotter aproach than the mom on all fours in front of the son getting railed. For me with any story perhaps the most important thing is suspending disbelief. The more outrages the plot the more unreal the whole things seems. Even with the son oblivious it has to be beliavable. If the mom walks out of the closet with the bully behind her with her skirt pulled up the son has to be an idiot not to get it. I guess the more real it seems the better.



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Reply #2 on: December 07, 2020, 02:43:35 AM
Actually thats a way hotter aproach than the mom on all fours in front of the son getting railed. For me with any story perhaps the most important thing is suspending disbelief. The more outrages the plot the more unreal the whole things seems. Even with the son oblivious it has to be beliavable. If the mom walks out of the closet with the bully behind her with her skirt pulled up the son has to be an idiot not to get it. I guess the more real it seems the better.

I agree 1000%. I like it when the mom sneaks around behind the sons back.



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Reply #3 on: December 07, 2020, 03:32:40 AM

it's hotter if the mom hide it from clueless son.



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Reply #4 on: December 07, 2020, 09:17:49 AM
https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=4815738&page=submissions

This link probably has the best content in terms of 'oblivious son's.

Looks like mom-son versions of Oblivious -Cuckold. One of the best cuckold writers on the net.

https://www.obliviouscuckold.com/



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Reply #5 on: December 08, 2020, 04:24:32 PM
I love this. It’s much more realistic than son watching bully bang mom in front of them. I also like it starts out like this then a big reveal happens and mom ends up telling son that he and his bully are just having fun with each other.

Another thing is real good. Is son suspects then finds out his mom has been banging the school thug (white or black) that has been in trouble with the law. Maybe there was light bulling between son and thug but nothing big. Just the shock and jealousy that this thug is smashing your smoking hot mom and driving her Mercedes around.



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Reply #6 on: December 08, 2020, 07:30:09 PM
A True Performance by Cuckoldson on literotica is probably the best in this genre (mystery NTR)

https://www.literotica.com/s/a-true-performance
« Last Edit: December 08, 2020, 07:31:42 PM by jjtenes »



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Reply #7 on: December 09, 2020, 06:23:10 AM
Ah man this is just my type of fetish.
* Friends keep son distracted while one by one fucks mom
* Mom saying its just yogurt splashed on her face
* Kissing son after giving a blowjob to his bully



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Reply #8 on: December 09, 2020, 07:39:12 AM
Big favorite of mine, as well. So here are some. Honestly, mostly friends rather than bullies.
https://www.asstr.org/~Kristen/21/mother.txt

It's interspersed throughout this writer's work.
https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=4668&page=submissions
Return to the Womb has a nice one. 2 Moms, 2 Sons, 1 Hot Night starts with a pair of cousins being 'educated' by their sexy moms. The protagonist's cousin, however, is more mature and has a bigger dick, and she's a size queen.

This one starts with that idea, heavy. It's a long, long story and I haven't read it all.
https://www.literotica.com/s/cougar-house-ch-01-milf-money

Purplemonkeydishwash does this a lot, as well. https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=1029823&page=submissions
Primarily in
https://www.literotica.com/s/betrayed-pt-01
https://www.literotica.com/s/feeding-mom
https://www.literotica.com/s/party-mom-ch-01 - Just this chapter, the rest gets a little weird
https://www.literotica.com/s/the-basketball-team-ch-01 - This has a girl who acts as the distraction

Literotica's thehumpman does this a bit too
https://www.literotica.com/s/katies-craving - long series but most of it fits
https://www.literotica.com/s/reporter-mom-ch-01

Last but not least, a girlfriend one
https://web.archive.org/web/20190421082905/https://gustavjorgensonauthor.wordpress.com/2019/04/14/girlfriend-sat-bullys-lap/

Love True Performance, and Obliviouscuckold is great too, wish he fully jumped on board the bully train.
« Last Edit: December 09, 2020, 08:09:23 AM by devetak »



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Reply #9 on: December 31, 2020, 11:50:04 PM
Hey guys, so I just got free from my semester. And I thought what if I try to write a story myself based on this fantasy setting of oblivious son. Hence, I created a post on https://bdsmlr.com/blog/breakmysoul.
I am writing it slowly based on a chapter by chapter basis. A couple of reasons I wanted to do this:
1) In most of the stories the bully is quite aggressive and humiliating. Of course this are erotic stories but too much humiliation and it kind of becomes a turn-off, at least for me. Maybe not for others, but that's my perspective.
2) The mom openly has sex in front of son. As sexy and hot as it sounds, I think this makes it a little unrealistic. Of course, we are not here to deal with reality. But in my opinion a mom who has two sides, a loving mother side and a horny cheating side seems more interesting.
3) I wanted to use other mediums such as images, gifs and audio for a better story experience. And a text story just doesn't allow that. I agree that text stories leave a lot to our imagination, but I think with proper effort the story along with images, gifs and audio can be construed so that the reader is still in control of imagination while being guided by the writer.

Here is the link again: https://bdsmlr.com/blog/breakmysoul
Title is Oblivious Son
I would be happy if you have any feedback. Also you can suggest your fetish or let me know through message.

Thanks



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Reply #10 on: January 01, 2021, 05:48:22 AM
I too enjoy when stories follow the oblivious son direction. So far your story is great



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Reply #11 on: January 01, 2021, 07:31:17 AM
Man there was a story I thought was from here but I couldn't find it. It mostly revolves around a kid's party, where his friends are being very close with his mom and his sister and he seems oblivious to it. There's even a sleepover aspect. At one point they send him out to the store to get things that will keep him out longer so they can all fuck at his house. Anyone remember the name?

Mighta found it here
https://www.literotica.com/s/lucian-comes-home
Nevermind it's way more on voyeurism, though it's implied to the character didn't know for a while before then..
« Last Edit: January 02, 2021, 03:47:33 AM by devetak »



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Reply #12 on: January 01, 2021, 10:11:07 AM
If the mom walks out of the closet with the bully behind her with her skirt pulled up the son has to be an idiot not to get it. I guess the more real it seems the better.

To be fair, some people are pretty fucking stupid about that. They have a blind-spot.

When I was in my late teens, I had been  with my first real girlfriend for about a year and suddenly I had a sexually transmitted infection. I was like "WTF? how could this happen  if I haven't had sex with anyone other than my girlfriend?" , goddamn I want to travel back in time and punch myself in the face, repeatedly.  Anyway, I had such absolute trust in her that it was an impossibility in my mind that she would cheat on me even if it was completely obvious.

Suspension of disbelief is important, but people do stupid shit all the time so some situations are not as farfetched as you might think.



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Reply #13 on: January 01, 2021, 06:48:24 PM
I mean yes the more the realistic the better it is. But if we tried to stick to reality there would basically be no spicyness in the erotica. There has to be some level of, unrealistic interactions. For example, most of the mom-bully stories are based on the premise that mom has sex either in front of the son or is aware that the son is watching. Like to me that is unrealistic, but if you take that away, there is no way a writer can then depict the acts of sex itself which is the one of the core phases of most erotica.
Hence, I think there has to be some level of unreality, or in this thread's case obliviousness, to make the scenes, situations as hot and spicy as possible.



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Reply #14 on: January 02, 2021, 03:11:39 AM
stingraytjm nice bdsmlr story so far man!
theres lack on bdsmler pages with good captioned stories around this fetisch
so i really appreciate it and cant wait to read more  :)