Author Topic: Clueless/Oblivious Son  (Read 36362 times)

breakmysoul

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Reply #15 on: January 07, 2021, 06:08:45 AM
Thanks !! I am trying to think of different scenarios and trying to keep the setting as realisitc as possible.



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Reply #16 on: February 16, 2021, 02:08:48 AM
Hey guys, so I just got free from my semester. And I thought what if I try to write a story myself based on this fantasy setting of oblivious son. Hence, I created a post on https://bdsmlr.com/blog/breakmysoul.
I am writing it slowly based on a chapter by chapter basis. A couple of reasons I wanted to do this:
1) In most of the stories the bully is quite aggressive and humiliating. Of course this are erotic stories but too much humiliation and it kind of becomes a turn-off, at least for me. Maybe not for others, but that's my perspective.
2) The mom openly has sex in front of son. As sexy and hot as it sounds, I think this makes it a little unrealistic. Of course, we are not here to deal with reality. But in my opinion a mom who has two sides, a loving mother side and a horny cheating side seems more interesting.
3) I wanted to use other mediums such as images, gifs and audio for a better story experience. And a text story just doesn't allow that. I agree that text stories leave a lot to our imagination, but I think with proper effort the story along with images, gifs and audio can be construed so that the reader is still in control of imagination while being guided by the writer.

Here is the link again: https://bdsmlr.com/blog/breakmysoul
Title is Oblivious Son
I would be happy if you have any feedback. Also you can suggest your fetish or let me know through message.

Thanks

how do you read the story? from top to bottom or the other way? because when I click the link it says chapter 7 at the top and it goes down from there.



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Reply #17 on: May 09, 2022, 11:10:15 AM
Really hope we see more stories like this, much more enjoyable than the copy/paste bully dribble we've been getting.



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Reply #18 on: February 08, 2023, 11:39:50 AM
This topic is Fantastic! Please keep it coming. The only two that come to my mind are games. Both by NTRMAN. The first being Mother's Lesson, and the second being one of the routes in Camp With Mom.



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Reply #19 on: August 03, 2023, 02:50:23 AM
Anyone know of anymore stories in this category?



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Reply #20 on: August 03, 2023, 10:50:32 AM
Ashley Jones' "My Mother" stories on Smashwords.
https://www.smashwords.com/books/1063074

Breakmysoul, if you're here, loved your story but it looks like your page has been closed down. Did you publish anywhere else? Are you planning to?



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Reply #21 on: August 04, 2023, 02:27:00 AM
Ashley Jones' "My Mother" stories on Smashwords.
https://www.smashwords.com/books/1063074

Breakmysoul, if you're here, loved your story but it looks like your page has been closed down. Did you publish anywhere else? Are you planning to?

Yo Devetak its not closed down. you got 500 server error ? this is some fuckshit of bdsmlr with cookies or something like that. try https://breakmysoul.bdsmlr.com/ on another browser without logging in or just without logging in and it should show you his page :)



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Reply #22 on: August 04, 2023, 09:04:24 AM
Yo Devetak its not closed down. you got 500 server error ? this is some fuckshit of bdsmlr with cookies or something like that. try https://breakmysoul.bdsmlr.com/ on another browser without logging in or just without logging in and it should show you his page :)

Thanks, man, tried it again and it worked. Unfortunately looks like he hasn't been around for two years. Oblivious Son was great, gotta admit.