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thecuckson

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Reply #15 on: February 01, 2022, 01:09:22 PM
I'm happy to hear you've been inspired by the story to write for yourself, but I don't give permission for others to continue my stories.

At the very least, within the PDF you should have a disclaimer saying its not a continuation by the original author.

I didnt read the whole thing, just skimmed it, but it doesn't follow along at all the idea I had for the next chapters - and do note it's "chapter 1" so a "chapter 2" regardless of how long between release dates there is, it isn't a sequel, it's all part of the same story.

You've written  quite a lot there so I'd say rejig some of the story to make it your own and publish it as your own work, and keep up the writing, but keep it to your stories, please. If you wish to write something as a spin-off from my stories, fair enough, but again, there should be a clear disclaimer its not my work and it's something you've done without my oversight or commission.


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Reply #16 on: February 03, 2022, 04:20:00 AM
Wow! Easily the best story out there on this topic! Realistic, desctiptive, just absolutely amazing! Thank you so much for sharing this and giving it an ending! So many stories on this topic are so sloppily written or outlandish they make you laugh more than they make you horny but this was beyond good. Have to say it does kind of end very abruptly but I understand you wanted to finish the story.


thecuckson

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Reply #17 on: February 04, 2022, 11:32:05 AM
Well, some prick went and shared the PDF, so it's deleted from this thread. It's still on Literotica, where I'll post any future work exclusively now.

Whomever you are, you ruined it for the rest of the group.


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Reply #18 on: February 05, 2022, 02:32:10 PM
i do not see the story. nor the attachment to download.


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Reply #19 on: February 05, 2022, 07:20:22 PM


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Reply #20 on: February 05, 2022, 09:55:18 PM
Quote from: nooneknosme on February 05, 2022, 02:32:10 PM
i do not see the story. nor the attachment to download.
He literally said in the post above yours that some asshole posted the story somewhere else without permission and thus removed the attachment.

Sorry to hear that, Cuckson. A shame they couldn't respect your wishes. Still looking forward to anything you might release in the future, Literotica or otherwise.


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Reply #21 on: February 09, 2022, 01:25:59 PM


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Reply #22 on: March 14, 2022, 09:12:44 AM
hey cuckoldson!!

I've been reading this story for years. I remember the first times when I read some chapters I was in shock. because it all felt real. And I couldn't imagine a mother could do those things to her child. But after reading your re-reading your story for years I think I can't separate the fantasy and the reality any more. That's the effect your story has had on me.

Anyway about the last last chapter, I think the way Leslie left her kid is delicious. But the ending overall feel very rushed. I wish Leslie and Staurt would have actually bullied Lewis inside his own home and room.
I wish she would have done more damage to Lewis. Anyway thanks for this chapter and the whole story.

I hope you'll keep writing those amazing stories in the future.


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