Hey everyone.
After a year and a half wait. I've finally returned out of my writers block with this story and have many idea's for chapter 17 and onwards. I've decided to name this chapter 'Next Level'. This is because there is a heavy tonal shift in my story.
There is only so much I can drag about a son masturbating and doing nothing while his friend secretly has sex with his mother behind his back (More words than 'The Wizard of Oz' book mind you). I love this sort of thing. I love a slow build to dread like a good Japanese horror film. But after 16 chapters of holding back and mystery, with a lot of things happening off page, I think I've accomplished that goal well enough. I don't know if I'm going to release one big encapsulating chapter or a string of chapters ; depending on how long it takes. This isn't just me saying I will anymore. I'm literally in the middle of writing the chapter at this very moment.
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The crux of everything going out of control for Scott started on a very specific occasion when he was nearly 14-years-old. The moment he actually witnessed it. Not mere speculation, dreams or fantasies he would masturbate to; no. He actually got to see it with his own eyes. His mother and his 13-year-old bratty friend actually having sex. It wasn't just 'wam-bam-thankyou-ma'am' stuff either. It was passionate love making and foreplay that outdid even his own fantasies. As wonderful and magical that moment was for all three of them; for the the unwitting performers and the perverse viewer; it was spoilt by the aftermath and realization of Scott's presence. Therefore landing Scott into the local teenage mental institution where he remained for a number of weeks.
The morning it happened started with Scott opening his eyes and letting out a gasp for fresh air. He was merely laying on my bed with my covers under him. He didn't understand what all the fuss was about. Why the hell was I breathing heavily and sweating like I was coming out of some cold flush? He was jittery and shaky and was still wearing the same attire he wore yesterday. He remembered that Ryan, Justin, Josh and Andrew all laughed at him and tricked him about watching the sort of pornography he liked. How the fuck did they all know I liked that stuff to begin with? Mum saw it; but she would never console in Ryan's father or worse Ryan himself; would she? What was going on?
Scott hopped up from his bed and landed firmly on his feet. His bare feet felt sensitive on the carpet. His toes curled when he felt the ticklish material under his skin. He slowly put his hand out towards the door knob; it felt cold as ice as he turned it. He heard the latch on the door undo and the door slowly swung open for itself. He was so tired he simply let the door open before him; revealing the painting on the wall way wall in front of his room. He slowly walked forward and then to his right; down the hallway and towards the suite that was connected to mum's room to go to use the toilet. He was prepared to use the hallway entrance when he heard strange erotic noises. The sound of a woman moaning. His beautiful mother moaning.
"Ryan! Oh baby boy! Fuck mummy! Yeah! Right there!!" He heard while sitting on the toilet seat; followed by a very pleasurable squeal.
Scott whimpered when he heard that. Was I going crazy? I get so caught up thinking about my mother having sex with my classmate that I'm actually hearing things now?! He squeezed out a hard turd and made a grimace when he made an embarrassing fart which he hoped they didn't hear. He tilted and wiped his bum with some toilet paper; got up and flushed. He waited in the bathroom a little longer to see if any more sounds were being conjured up; there was only silence. He couldn't hear moaning and squealing anymore. He left the suit through the hallway door and began to walk back to his room. Until he noticed his mother's bedroom door was slightly ajar.
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Many idea's could prove controversial.
-There will be ONE homoerotic scene between Ryan and Scott. This scene is actually based on a real life event where I sexually served him and humiliated myself for him during the after hours of a party when I was 16-years-old. This scene is very important to me, as it serves to humiliate me as a writer more, as its actually based on reality, dialogue and all (The guy is actually straight and married with a kid now, but I deify him and will never forget how he humiliated me at school and sexualized my mother with his conniving brat boy ways. If he only know I wrote this stuff about him 'sigh')
-The cuckolding will become more blatant. Penny whipping Scott etc. Scott humping her leg. Her torturing Scott's cock and balls with a split-personality 'Happy' then 'Angry' game (Its very scary, trust me). Leading him around like a dog and is her submissive slave while Ryan is gone. But Ryan is returning.
-While Ryan was gone, Penny had brief sexual encounters with his other friends Justin, Andrew and Josh. A showing off of different humorous personalities
-There will be more of the 'Clips-4-Sale' plotline. Using Scott as her Balaclava Sub. This becomes her main Job.
-Several twists in the plotline between Ryan and his father. This plot will shake up the main story to such a degree it will explain the reason why Ryan leaves Penny and Scott to seek a more 'Vanilla' life. Only to later regret it and seek returning after he gets his wife pregnant (As stated in the prior chapter)
-There will be also a sort of meta twist that I won't spoil for you guys until it's complete.
Hope you look forward to it all. It's great to be back.
-Mathew Elizabeth
