Author Topic: Mom's Judo  (Read 20714 times)

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Reply #30 on: June 22, 2022, 06:27:10 AM
Awesome to hear.



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Reply #31 on: June 26, 2022, 01:24:42 PM
Hello everyone!

You don't have to read this, the link to the new chapters will be at the very bottom of this post. I just want to explain why I disappeared and that was basically because I got very sick from covid. My entire family got it but I was the only one that ended up in the ICU. I still have not fully recovered even now but I decided to visit this site randomly and got inspired again by crazyboy's story and pictures of his mom.

I was also heavily inspired by uglyfucker's stories in which the guys are not the typical Greek God looking guys that could get any girl they want but were more of the loser types. This is why I decided to make the characters the way they are.

This story is actually my first time ever trying to write anything, I hated writing in school but I thought there was so much potential in crazyboy's story so I tried my hand at it. It is a slow corruption story and no sex has happened yet so please be patient. It actually ramps up in chapter 6 and will ramp up even more every chapter after 6 until it reaches the climax so if you want you can just wait it out till it gets there and read it in one go.

I know I'm not very good and also I write very slow so I cannot tell you when the next update is going to be. It will come out when I'm finished writing it but I'm trying my best.

And so, without further adieu, here are chapters 4-6 of Mom's Judo: https://archiveofourown.org/works/39789522



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Reply #32 on: June 26, 2022, 04:05:00 PM
I love this story, slow burn.
(this is how I imagine Jennifer to be)



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Reply #33 on: June 26, 2022, 04:35:56 PM
Can't wait to read it Barron! I hope you get better Brother!  ;)



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Reply #34 on: June 26, 2022, 10:24:42 PM
It was incredible. It's more similar to my commissions than any other story that's recently come out.

Really reminds me of Cool Mom, except the mom in your story is much more realistic than the loose panty whore that Shanie was. Like Sam, Martin is inadvertently driving his mom into the arms of Milton, it's just taking longer. Also Kyle is a wild card, I thought he was gonna be on the sidelines but it looks like he'll get a taste of Martin's mom too.  :P

Really good job brother ;D Can't wait for the next chapter!
« Last Edit: June 26, 2022, 10:31:26 PM by uglyfucker »



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Reply #35 on: June 27, 2022, 04:42:27 AM
Idk if you have it all planned out already but you should have a part with Jennifer wearing a tiny bikini by their pool. Great stuff btw.



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Reply #36 on: June 27, 2022, 05:22:22 AM
It was incredible. It's more similar to my commissions than any other story that's recently come out.


Yes it was also inspired by your stories. The typical good looking guy gets girl didn't appeal to me as much as your stories where the ugly loser gets her. It adds a degrading aspect and a kind of sick twist where the love of your life is stolen by the worst person in terms of looks and attitude but they somehow like it. That feeling of betrayal is what I was going for.



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Reply #37 on: June 28, 2022, 09:21:15 PM
It feels great to know you were inspired by my stories; hopefully, that can happen with others because I hate the cliche 6'3 muscular chad stealing the moms, more into either socially awkward ugly white neckbeard types or skinny twink bratty white boys with thick ass/tit latina moms  ;D Keep up the great work ;)



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Reply #38 on: June 30, 2022, 09:24:53 PM
Great work, a huge number of things can be realized within this story.
Get well, man, health is very important.



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Reply #39 on: July 01, 2022, 06:05:01 PM
Fantastic story, I really like how the son jumps to conclusions in his paranoia, blaming his (mostly so far) innocent mom. It's a great, slow burn and I'm eager to see more.



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Reply #40 on: July 02, 2022, 12:48:44 AM
Do you think one of the fat perverts will do something with her ass?



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Reply #41 on: July 02, 2022, 12:52:54 AM
Do you think one of the fat perverts will do something with her ass?

Yes I definitely think they will  ;D



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Reply #42 on: July 02, 2022, 07:49:17 PM
I love this story, slow burn.
(this is how I imagine Jennifer to be)
A great model for this story, I like her protruding nipples..  :P