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cuckson123

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on: March 08, 2024, 01:45:53 PM
This is a story that I created with dreampress AI

Anyone want the next chapter?
« Last Edit: March 08, 2024, 10:32:07 PM by cuckson123 »



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Reply #1 on: March 08, 2024, 02:49:28 PM
The first chapter doesn't make sense. It skips from the mother being out to her son hearing them having sex "again" but there was never a fisrt time he hears them. And the last paragraph talks about tne same thing as the previous one.

You should edit the first chapter before generating a second one.



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Reply #2 on: March 08, 2024, 10:25:38 PM
wait sorry haha i didn't even notice. I dont know why it has downloaded it like this. its not suppose to go after he falls asleep



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Reply #3 on: March 08, 2024, 10:31:48 PM
Now I haven't really proof read it so its mostly just done with AI



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Reply #4 on: March 13, 2024, 01:35:41 PM
I'm also using dreamAi to write a story but it's awkward at times and I have to rewrite entire paragraphs. But using a free account, it will take some time to finish. I'll post it once it's done.



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Reply #5 on: March 13, 2024, 03:48:45 PM
It can be very awkward at times indeed.

I just said fuck it and payd for 1 month.

I should start a new story honestly lol



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Reply #6 on: March 14, 2024, 07:13:17 PM
I created another account to write another story and I really described what I wanted in each chapter but the AI gave me crappy choices and I burned my diamond without writing anything.
I prefer writing myself even if I never finish my stories so far  :-[
I'll keep testing the AI but it's not my thing.



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Reply #7 on: March 14, 2024, 08:25:26 PM
Yeah its easier to control with infinite diamonds thats for sure

Im just busy atm so havent started again. But one thing I want and I think its hard for the AI is the mother becoming more cold towards her son and then letting the bull make the rules, also having the son end up in chastity because of it



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Reply #8 on: March 17, 2024, 03:54:53 PM
I'm quitting my story. I have a warning about underage sex (while I have 20 paragraphs of sex with those same characters) and I can't continue. I didn't put age in the characters description and now, even if I write they are 18 years old, the warning still appears. All I wanted was give a try and now this? I hope your story will look like what you want



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Reply #9 on: March 19, 2024, 11:20:39 PM
Wow. Looks very interesting. Can't wait for a new chapter



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Reply #10 on: March 20, 2024, 07:40:49 PM
I'm quitting my story. I have a warning about underage sex (while I have 20 paragraphs of sex with those same characters) and I can't continue. I didn't put age in the characters description and now, even if I write they are 18 years old, the warning still appears. All I wanted was give a try and now this? I hope your story will look like what you want
Use novel ai, no other ai service will be good for explicit mom ntr



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Reply #11 on: March 21, 2024, 05:36:04 AM
I'm having a lot of fun using Perchance's AI Character Chat for story writing. https://perchance.org/ai-character-chat. I actually like it far more than their actual story writer.

Pluses:
Free
Unlimited (both generations and content)
Has a memory editor (so you can put the AI back on track ones it eventually loses its mind)
Has lore entries (for adding background info)
reasonably coherent
all content gets saved automatically

Minuses:
Doesn't do well with any more than 3 characters
doesn't have any advanced re-write options, like expand/describe/summerize
the ai behind it feels mediocre

Interesting:
Since it is character based, you can create a character that is a 'world class erotic fiction writer'. Define the writer to your tastes, they can like what you like -and hate what you hate. Alternatively, you can put a few characters from your story as AI chat characters & have them interact to create the story. I've also made a brainstormer. She generates ideas and asks questions about the story. Good for turning a premise into a rough outline.



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Reply #12 on: March 21, 2024, 01:28:10 PM
Use novel ai, no other ai service will be good for explicit mom ntr

But it is a paid service. To be honest, I just want to test things. You're right and it's much better with things going as I imagined or close. But once you're finished your free trial, there is no more possibilities? You have to pay or the free writings regenerate at some point?
I prefer writing myself (and with novel ai I write about half the story) so I'm not willing to pay because I feel that I'll end up writing all my story ideas with AI if I pay the service  :-\