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xWrit

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on: May 07, 2021, 09:24:36 PM
Hello BFMM!

In recent months I've become fascinated by the dynamic of mothers and bullies (maybe it was being cooped up indoors for a year) and while I admit I don't have the same fantasies about anyone I know in real life, I've loved exploring the kink through stories and discussions here and on erotic fiction sites.

However, none of the stories I found quite scratched the itch I was looking for, not that they aren't good too.  I decided to try my hand at writing my own erotic story involving a mother submitting to her son's bully, and while it isn't necessarily wildly different from some of the others, I hope that it's distinct enough to be of interest to some folks here.

It's quite long, and this is only a draft of the first chapter, so I don't blame anyone who wants to skip around to the action, though I tried to make the buildup with the son and the bullies somewhat engaging as well. 

To give a brief summary: a high school senior with a single mother suffers daily from a gang of bullies.  One day he is assaulted and held down, and forced to listen by phone as one of the bullies goes to his house to "return a book".  He hears his mother seduced and taken by the bully while he is humiliated and mocked.

This is a first draft and I'm just eager to see how it's received, so I'm sharing it here without much editing or proof-reading.

Story link here, I hope you enjoy it!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1jWhPfA6IgoNnwYuSW4HoVpA3_56m931_yg99vTmG9CE/edit?usp=sharing



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Reply #1 on: May 09, 2021, 01:01:00 AM
Very nice. I like the fact that there is a long sex scene. Very clever use of the phone  ;)
I'm waiting impatiently for the next chapter.



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Reply #2 on: May 09, 2021, 09:27:09 AM
that was really good!



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Reply #3 on: May 09, 2021, 09:20:26 PM
Very good

Keep it up!



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Reply #4 on: May 12, 2021, 08:40:15 PM
That was an enjoyable read, thank you!  :)

Looking forward to the next chapter(s).



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Reply #5 on: May 16, 2021, 01:00:43 AM
like waiting for the continuation  ;)



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Reply #6 on: May 21, 2021, 02:55:28 PM
good start ...  but it will be a shame if you didn't write the rest of the story



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Reply #7 on: May 23, 2021, 04:25:00 PM
Don't worry, chapter 2 is in production!