Hey Bluvelvet99,

As usual, absolutely legendary.

I always like your stories with the spy cameras. But this one had an interesting twist with a satisfactory ending to it.

You literally created a 'world' with that holiday resort/motel location. This is an absolute testament to your writing. The side characters and everything just made it work so well. Just the 'water web' thing alone was fantastic.

Keep up the great work Bluvelvet99, you are one of the greatest among us in this community. I can only hope one day my writing can live up to your written works magnitude and subtle social and psychological cues, which is unrivaled.

Awesome as always mate, take care!

-Mathew Elizabeth

Wow, what you just wrote is an absolute honor man. For real? You think/heard I inspired a lot of sons to jerk off to 'Watching My Mom Go Black'? (Classic series by the way)

Yeah, I was one of the 'earlier' ones to write it down. Particularly in a multi chapter format. But there were a few one-shots before me. My first story being 'Younger Bully Owns Joey' series in 2008, I was a very young and naive teenager writing that then. It was full of bisexual sex. It exists in many versions with different names like 'Joey and his Bullies'; 'Chad gets Joey's Mother' and a really nice guy released a purely heterosexual re-imagining named 'Owned by a Younger Bully' (I'm ashamed to say I forgot the author's name)

I did write a one-shot called 'My Friends and My Mom' in 2010 as well.

My next series was 'My Moms Young Stud' in 2012. It lasted up to 5 instalments before me canning it, once again got a bit 'gay', not that there's anything wrong with that. Plus, it sorts of ended on a poetic yet open ended note. Bittersweet feminine servitude alongside his mother?

Finally, there is 'Mommy's Love Denied' series, which is my biggest and best work, I think. Nothing gay in it at all. 16 chapters/episodes so far.

We've discussed before that I tend to write things in long series format, but God I wish I could churn out the quantity of quality one-shots like you do Bluvelvet99.

There was one earlier one you wrote that's not very famous, but I love, called 'The Straw that Broke the Camel's Back' (the spy-cam stuff is so great!)  There were a few others like that as well. I forgot the names. But otherwise, I'll just say your 'world building', character depth and intricate metaphors squashed into each of your 'one-shots' are truly evidence of your talent.

We will both try to keep up the good work. 

"Wow, what you just wrote is an absolute honor man. For real? You think/heard I inspired a lot of sons to jerk off to 'Watching My Mom Go Black'? (Classic series by the way)"

Oh no, I do think that's true as well. But what I was saying was that the way those videos themselves are shot was changed thanks to writers like you who helped make this stuff popular. I was talking about the sons jerking off in the videos themselves. I don't know if any of the producers have ever read your stories, mine, or any other writers, but the awareness popping up in our culture that some sons are aroused by the idea of their moms being fucked is thanks to you and a lot of the other writers on literotica who made this genre popular. You guys have opened up an entirely new form of human sexuality, and you did so years before tumblr writers like me ever started. You should be extremely proud of yourself. I am too for the part I played in that. But my story started long after yours.


And thank you so much treegod! I'm glad you read my stuff. It's because of people like you reading it that i write it in the first place.

That was really good. Glad you're getting commissions!

Thank you devetak, I'm glad you liked it!