Bully Fucks My Mom
GENERAL DISCUSSION => Fapping Materials => Topic started by: bluvelvet99 on November 14, 2023, 04:39:05 AM
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Hey guys, this one was supposed to be out for Halloween, but something came up before i could finish it. It stars Lexi Belle. As usual, you can find my site and the new story linked in my signature below, or just search my username up on any search engine and you'll find it.
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First time reading one of your stories, and I'm pretty impressed. The usage of descriptions for body parts, the inclusion of characters, the pace of the story, the motifs; All of it feels very well thought out and intentional, which is something I can't say about a lot of other stories written with this genre, as they tend to get to the point as quick as possible so they can go down the checklist of every impulsive and indulgent fantasy. It's inspiring, as I'd like to have a bit more sophistication in my writing like this as well. Good job!
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First time reading one of your stories, and I'm pretty impressed. The usage of descriptions for body parts, the inclusion of characters, the pace of the story, the motifs; All of it feels very well thought out and intentional, which is something I can't say about a lot of other stories written with this genre, as they tend to get to the point as quick as possible so they can go down the checklist of every impulsive and indulgent fantasy. It's inspiring, as I'd like to have a bit more sophistication in my writing like this as well. Good job!
Thanks so much man. Yeah, I try to make it so that the story works to be arousing, but it also has elements which stick with the reader afterwards. Also, for me, the sex itself is obviously great, but it works better when there's an accumulating dread which builds itself on the way there. So I always write with pacing and build up in mind. I'm very glad you noticed these things and appreciate them.
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nicemoms stop sucking his small white cock his stories are just like his country a failing state
I like that they're different, lol. If your goal is to nut, there's definitely better stories for that, and while I don't agree with his philosophy entirely, I respect the artistic approach. He's doing his own thing
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ASSHOLE JUST QUIT WRITING THERE ARE MUCH BETTER WRITERS PURSUING THIS GENRE U ARE NO LONGER NEEDED KEEP THIS BLUE PILL AMERICAN PIPSQUEEK WOKE CRAP TO URSELF
Man take a fucking chill pill? are you retarded or something? Its the 2nd time i see you ranting to one of bluvelvets posts. He is the whole fucking reason this forum here exists. Have a little respect and if you dont like his content dont read it. There is enough of this content for everybody to enjoy.
keep your dipshit-commentary for yourself man. it only shows how small your brain is.. god damn.
To the story mr blu. :
Thanks for sharing. im not through yet but i really appreciate every contribution in this niche !
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Thanks for the backup guys. I don't really get offended by his comments too much. He seems to be mad at me no matter what I do. I think I probably offended him once in the distant past without trying to and he's been holding a grudge ever since. Otherwise, I'm not sure why he would even care to comment on stories he doesn't seem to enjoy anyways.