Author Topic: New Story - Cheek Fever  (Read 1793 times)

bluvelvet99

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on: May 20, 2022, 10:01:04 PM
I have another new one guys. Just click the link in my signature to read it. Or if you're here on mobile and can't see my signature, just google my username and you'll find my site. This one is sort of an adventure story that takes place over a single night. It stars Jada Stevens and it has multiple bully characters of various ages, cultures, and backgrounds.

I'm still writing new stories at https://bluvelvet99.wixsite.com/website


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Reply #1 on: May 24, 2022, 06:51:29 PM
Very well done and nice idea ;D
Loved it <3



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Reply #2 on: May 24, 2022, 10:08:10 PM
Hot, like a more depraved Benny Hill sketch.



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Reply #3 on: May 25, 2022, 02:10:37 AM
Thanks guys. And yeah, that's what I was going for. I had It's a Mad, Mad, Mad, Mad World in my head while writing it, as well as the old Japanese movie Stray Dog, where a gun  used in a crime gets passed around from person to person.

I'm still writing new stories at https://bluvelvet99.wixsite.com/website