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Fearless Wretch

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on: May 25, 2023, 11:34:17 AM
Recently finished a new story, "Something in Red." Hopefully you know where to find it.

Thank you guys for reading my work and thank you to the generous patron who commissioned it.

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Reply #1 on: May 26, 2023, 03:42:23 PM
Another gem! Congrats
Some spoilers bellow



Sammy managed to get lucky with his mom. You can think this like a happy ending? Idk, but I enjoyed...I wish the part revealing Duncan x Mom was longer...
Anyway, glad to see you back.


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Reply #2 on: May 26, 2023, 04:49:01 PM
very hot, god job :P


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Reply #3 on: May 27, 2023, 07:44:25 PM
This just became a top 5 of all time story for me. Thank you for the amazing work!


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Reply #4 on: May 30, 2023, 04:18:26 PM
I'm not typically into non-consent Mom NTR (I'm more into the mom eventually enjoying the cheating), but dived into this anyway since I've enjoyed your other work. This is wonderfully dour for those into that kind of thing, and one could argue that the way things ended for Sam and Pamela was more depressing than the other stories. As well, I've always appreciated that these stories start off with the mom and son way more intimate than is usually seen, which leads to some unique scenarios of betrayal not found elsewhere.


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Reply #5 on: June 05, 2023, 09:33:29 PM
One of the best stories


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Reply #6 on: June 07, 2023, 06:10:11 PM
“Something in Red” was probably the best story I have ever read!  This is exactly the type of erotica I keep searching for and you have nailed every single spot!!! Please write more. Your talent in writing, descriptions, settings, are truly something you don’t see in eroticas.  I do wish there was a part 2 or more descriptions for those “eighteen years, ten months, and a handful of days” as Scott was using Pamela to turn tricks and do adult films.

Please more of this. the build up was crazy, just wow! But would love more scenes where he is whoring her out like with the neighbor! Gangbangs and more!! Please this needs a part 2 with flashbacks for those 18yrs.


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Reply #7 on: June 21, 2023, 07:43:02 AM
This was by far you greatest story yet!

I love the little implications and foreshadowing how "they always go upstairs", I just wish we would have seen more of her and the boys.
Big plus that the mother is not suddenly loving everything but instead had to endure and try keeping her son out of it.

In hindsight it would have been nice to have scenes where she tries to "convince" people to leave her son alone but they still bully him regardless just to show that the whole situation is out of control for the mom as well.

I would love to see more stories like this, where the mother has to whore herself out while she and her son have to deal with the consequences.

I am a huge fan of your work and can't wait to see what you will do next!


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Reply #8 on: July 11, 2023, 10:32:07 AM
I really enjoyed it


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