Author Topic: Stories links (Moms vs Bullies)  (Read 746665 times)

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Reply #450 on: March 17, 2023, 01:53:07 AM
I do not know if you guys know this or not. But Thecsm has new stories on storiesonline 5 of them that are not available on his Literotica page.



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Reply #451 on: March 19, 2023, 05:05:13 AM
I do not know if you guys know this or not. But Thecsm has new stories on storiesonline 5 of them that are not available on his Literotica page.

Thanks I apparently read three of them but he had five. I've put them all on the mega.
https://mega.nz/folder/BwdX2KTA#QNe2-XvwpiuLXLDvgVpAzg



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Reply #452 on: March 19, 2023, 12:01:28 PM
Alright I think this should be it.
It has the stories mentioned and a few other relevant ones, they're all zipped.
https://mega.nz/folder/BwdX2KTA#QNe2-XvwpiuLXLDvgVpAzg
If you see others within the next 30 days let me know I'll try and add them.

any chance you can add these 2 please?
https://storiesonline.net/s/16245/mom-becky-and
https://storiesonline.net/s/59163/the-towns-slave

Thanks either way!



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Reply #453 on: March 20, 2023, 06:21:43 AM
any chance you can add these 2 please?
No problem, they're up. I probably won't respond if others have requests, but I'll do it as long as the subscription lasts so just check the mega after the request.



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Reply #454 on: March 20, 2023, 11:56:48 AM
No problem, they're up. I probably won't respond if others have requests, but I'll do it as long as the subscription lasts so just check the mega after the request.

Absolute legend mate!



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Reply #455 on: March 25, 2023, 04:59:38 AM
I am glad you liked my story am almost finished with Chapter 3.

please canít wait for chapter 3!



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Reply #456 on: March 28, 2023, 05:51:20 AM
Hey guys, I just made my first story. I would like to know your opinions. The main theme is raceplay, white/mexican. So, if you don't feel comfortable with it, just ignore this

https://chyoa.com/story/My-White-Bully-Dominated-my-Mom.52393



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Reply #457 on: March 28, 2023, 08:10:32 AM


Chapter two of Tiffany goes to back to college has been posted by uspmn on hentai foundry. I can't link to it though. It thinks it is spam



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Reply #458 on: March 28, 2023, 03:00:08 PM
Hey guys, I just made my first story. I would like to know your opinions. The main theme is raceplay, white/mexican. So, if you don't feel comfortable with it, just ignore this

https://chyoa.com/story/My-White-Bully-Dominated-my-Mom.52393
Nice story. But for me you were too quick with public group sex for chapter one, unless you wanted to finish story right their. And it was I only 2nd session. Better make it long serious with corruption, parent's bed peeping son and etc...
Also, her height is not high at all (173cm) she could not "tower" above guys or you should have made her taller.
You do not have "numbers" of her assets measurements (at least, some) or you wanted us to imagine ourselves.



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Reply #459 on: March 29, 2023, 04:16:00 AM
Hey guys, I just made my first story. I would like to know your opinions. The main theme is raceplay, white/mexican. So, if you don't feel comfortable with it, just ignore this

https://chyoa.com/story/My-White-Bully-Dominated-my-Mom.52393

You posted this on the momntr reddit. I can't wait to read it!



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Reply #460 on: March 29, 2023, 09:55:53 PM
Hey guys, I just made my first story. I would like to know your opinions. The main theme is raceplay, white/mexican. So, if you don't feel comfortable with it, just ignore this

https://chyoa.com/story/My-White-Bully-Dominated-my-Mom.52393

Got a suggestion for you.  Since your work is pretty hot and you asked for comments on reddit.  Here's one way to turn up the heat IMHO.

To some extent you've already played off the contrast between how mommy dominates son -- versus how she gets dominated by antagonist.  But the more you focus on this contrast from HER perspective -- instead of only how humiliated son is feeling, the more heat will get generated.

She's used to dominating smaller boys -- especially her son.  And since antagonist is just another smaller boy, she can't begin to conceive, initially, that she might not be able to dominate him too.  But, to her horror, she can't.  It's not just the blackmail.  He overpowers her physically, emotionally and sexually.  She is shattered by how helpless she is against him in every way.  This, of course, contributes to her extreme arousal. The utter humiliation of being not even man-handled -- but boy-handled.  She struggles against this with all her might, with every ounce and fiber of her outraged motherhood.  She is proud.  She genuinely loves her son.  She desperately wants to protect him.  And yet, the more antagonist dominates her, the more she quivers and drips with arousal.  She mewls and whimpers when he takes her, but, even when he's not present, it eventually gets to the point when the mere thought of her helplessness in his grasp causes her to involuntarily moan -- and her son to ask if she's feeling alright.

The hot consequence of all this, for her, is that she starts getting used to the idea of getting boy-handled.  Used to and stimulated by it.  Because of that, when alone with son, the interaction often starts with her acting subtly submissive.  Enticing, flirting, provoking.  But son is nowhere near alpha enough to take advantage.  He is gentle, worshipful, solicitous.  He's the same simp he's always been.  And, at least subconsciously, that's frustrating for her.  She doesn't wind up resenting her son, exactly -- but she certainly starts holding him in extreme contempt.  It makes her feel powerful, to dominate, cuck and humiliate him.  The contrasts and transitions between her helplessness with antagonist and her power over son, if handled vividly, can produce explosive heat.  Way more than by focusing attention primarily on how humiliated son feels.  The way she gets confused sometimes and acts submissive with son.  The way she gets confused other times and tries to throw her weight around with antagonist.  The way antagonist reminds her where and to whom she belongs.

There's potential for a lot more plot richness than you'll find elsewhere in the bully / mommy genre.  For example, say son eventually snaps.  Mom goes from being in powerful charge to submitting completely to son -- and part of her loves it.  Son is a real man after all!  Son also truly loves her.  But can son possess mom like antagonist can?  Can he stand against antagonist?  Maybe he thinks he can.  Maybe mom wishes he could.  But can he really make her his private property the way antagonist does?
Does he even want to do that?  Will she try to help son -- or will she prove unable to withstand antagonist's domination and betray son?  Will their budding romance then be shattered?  Hell -- this book will sell.  Or get you lynched. 



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Reply #461 on: Today at 01:29:09 AM
Do you guys know good stories that focused on ''mom having a big ass'' moment? I think describing the fat cheeked milfs in the stories is so much turn on



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Reply #462 on: Today at 04:34:34 AM
Do you guys know good stories that focused on ''mom having a big ass'' moment? I think describing the fat cheeked milfs in the stories is so much turn on
Almost all of them.
You should just check all stories and find mom's appearance (usually somewhere in the beginning).