Hey guys, I just made my first story. I would like to know your opinions. The main theme is raceplay, white/mexican. So, if you don't feel comfortable with it, just ignore this
https://chyoa.com/story/My-White-Bully-Dominated-my-Mom.52393
Nice story. But for me you were too quick with public group sex for chapter one, unless you wanted to finish story right their. And it was I only 2nd session. Better make it long serious with corruption, parent's bed peeping son and etc...
Also, her height is not high at all (173cm) she could not "tower" above guys or you should have made her taller.
You do not have "numbers" of her assets measurements (at least, some) or you wanted us to imagine ourselves.