Hey Guys, I started another story. "My Mexican Mom Became My Bully's Slave".
https://chyoa.com/chapter/Introduction.1534986Now with a little more experience writing. I tried to take into consideration your comments, how not to get too quick to group sex with the mother and see things a little more from the mother's perspective.
This time I went more than one route, with sissyfication, BBC, White Supremacy, hypnotism, blackmail and one where the son dominates the mother. The work is in progress, I will add more chapters in the future and I would love to hear your comments again, whether they are suggestions or constructive criticism. I hope you like it!