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TheStinger

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on: October 11, 2020, 03:52:47 AM
Hi There

i was wondering if someone would help me create a story i had this idea where

There is this nerdy kid who gets bullied by this kid at school maybe there is a group of three of them so eventually this bully invites the kid and his mom to a backyard party where his hot mom thinks it will help him out at school and there is another two next door milfs, anyway basically my idea is that the bully has some sort of power over the moms and one by one it makes them want to make him edge and turn him on maybe to make him last longer or something by using their bodies and doing different things, anyway the nerdy kid is sitting inside and only sees partial bits of things going on. can't understand why his mom is doing things and can't get an answer out of her, or the other two milfs.
maybe they go down the garden and then come back slightly different. maybe they have like a perfectly reasonable excuse for their husbands.
then the story is just about this kids developing horror at his bully controlling his mom.



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Reply #1 on: April 26, 2022, 03:51:25 AM
Sounds great.



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Reply #2 on: April 26, 2022, 07:26:25 AM
Love the idea of the unawareness. There's a story on CHYOA called My Oblivious Mother (and a few others there, or on Literotica from CraptainPlanet and Captain_Ron) that banks on it, you might look to for inspiration for scenes the son might notice but not appreciate for what they are, or some mind trick the bully can pull off on them, making them oblivious regarding shame or embarrassment when he's involved, or the always-favorite, power that makes people really gullible and naive regarding what you're saying, "Oh man I got bit by a snake on my dick, can you suck it out? If you don't get the venom out, I'll die!" Though I appreciate edging would last much longer. Maybe the MILFs are in a hot tub and the son sees one of them sitting higher than the others, figures there's some sort of raised seat. Next time he looks it's another mom sitting on it. And then another. And then all three moms are just lounging in there while bully sits back where the 'rise' was, seemingly no higher than the others.