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Fuckerboy

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on: July 31, 2022, 05:13:40 AM
The cuckson's mom marries his school bullies father, who dies soon after, leaving everything to his biological son, the bully. The mom seduces the stepson for the inheritance and eventually becomes his whore, essentially fucking everywhere they can with no regard for the cuckson, she ends up marrying him and losing all her dignity. The cuck is bullied everywhere, his stepbro/dad fucks his mom and teases him while doing so and he gets nothing
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Al_Anon

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Reply #1 on: July 31, 2022, 06:11:22 AM
Setup seems a touch convoluted. Maybe skip the dating/marrying of bullies dad? Bully gets inheritance & straight up uses that to buy/manipulate/control/degrade the mother of the guy he bullied -which just hurts the cuckson more. I'm thinking he offers her cash to do this or that. $150 to suck him off. $400 to fuck in her sons bed. A months worth of mortgage payments to kick her son in the nuts. Marrying the bully gives her a life time of financial security, at the cost of absolute misery for her son.


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Reply #2 on: July 31, 2022, 06:41:09 AM
Quote from: Al_Anon on July 31, 2022, 06:11:22 AM
Setup seems a touch convoluted. Maybe skip the dating/marrying of bullies dad? Bully gets inheritance & straight up uses that to buy/manipulate/control/degrade the mother of the guy he bullied -which just hurts the cuckson more. I'm thinking he offers her cash to do this or that. $150 to suck him off. $400 to fuck in her sons bed. A months worth of mortgage payments to kick her son in the nuts. Marrying the bully gives her a life time of financial security, at the cost of absolute misery for her son.
that's kinda what I want, the boy has to refer to him as his dad, the bully stepbro turned dad thing is what I want to see, the sex and intimacy can be discrete at first, with some signs like the mom and stepbrother being awkward when the son comes. The mom can sometimes kiss him on the cheek and he feels the stickyness of cum on her face but can't determine what it is
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Reply #3 on: July 31, 2022, 08:51:42 AM
I love the story idea, i would try to write a story, only that i write in spanish but it can be translated <3


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Reply #4 on: July 31, 2022, 10:10:19 AM
Quote from: SissyJ on July 31, 2022, 08:51:42 AM
I love the story idea, i would try to write a story, only that i write in spanish but it can be translated <3
post a link on this thread if you end up writing it


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Reply #5 on: February 20, 2023, 05:02:57 AM
Quote from: Fuckerboy on July 31, 2022, 05:13:40 AM
The cuckson's mom marries his school bullies father, who dies soon after, leaving everything to his biological son, the bully. The mom seduces the stepson for the inheritance and eventually becomes his whore, essentially fucking everywhere they can with no regard for the cuckson, she ends up marrying him and losing all her dignity. The cuck is bullied everywhere, his stepbro/dad fucks his mom and teases him while doing so and he gets nothing

https://chyoa.com/chapter/Osi.1183264

I am starting the story, i don't post it because i write a little and in diferent stories so until now y have the time to continue this story, hope You like it


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