Author Topic: Story idea/concept for Writers who speak Spanish (or other foreign language)  (Read 590 times)

nngh

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Iím sure this must have been done before in some form, but at least I havenít read any mommy bully-stories involving this: The basic idea is that the mom speaks a foreign language that her son/family doesnít.

So for example: A typical housewife soccer mom takes Spanish lessons (just out of interest or maybe because she thinks itís important for social/racial equality or something) and then goes on a family vacation with her husband and son in a Spanish speaking country. There she will flirt and talk shit about her son and husband with local men right in front of them, without them understanding whatís happening. Scheduling hook-ups, exchanging information where to meet up and fuck later on etc. Getting instructions from the men on how to translate their conversation to her son and husband and come up with a excuse to go fuck right away. You get the idea, there are many ways to go with this.

Of course this could be done with any foreign language but I feel like Spanish might be the best since itís probably the most common second language among English speakers. Also if Iím not mistaken there are some Spanish speaking writers on this very forum. But you could also consider adding translations of the Spanish dialogue in parenthesis or something, to make it more accessible for non-Spanish-speakers. But maybe that will ruin the experience, idk, guess it depends on how you do it.

Anyway, I hope this might inspire some writer to try this concept out! I would love to read a story like that. The idea of the son (and the husband) being cut out of the conversation like that while the mom has the freedom to pretty much talk the sexiest and nastiest shit in front of them, making fun of them, receiving filthy compliments etc. sounds very promising to me.



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This is amazing. I love the idea! +1!



nngh

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There could also be a scene where the mom calls the son (while fucking) to make up an excuse and ask him to tell his father that she won't be able to make it back in time for dinner at the hotel restaurant tonight or maybe won't even make it back to the hotel at all. While she is explaining this to her son there's a guy or multiple local men talking dirty in the background, calling her degrading names and insulting the son (and husband). She giggles and replies to them in Spanish, again without the son being able to understand any of it.

There could also be a play on cultural differences, for example the mom explaining to her son and husband that a certain (secretly sexual) act is just a local custom, making up reasons why they can't come to certain spots because they are only allowed for women or something. Maybe there are even some actual regional/cultural traditions that can be incorporated in this way somehow.

Again, I think there is a lot of potential in this concept!



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I love the idea, i Will try to do it, but idk ir i Will do it both language or only in spanish and translate for English speakers, but i like the idea that the son study spanish in secret and understead everything but not days nothing, and in some point the bull Will know it or something like that



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Seems like a nice idea but you might be over-thinking it or over-selling the concept.

This is what is referred to as "Bilingual bonus" and only bilingual people would 'get it'. The level of effort required would be high and the payoff would be very low. That's why it's not common.  I speak spanish and can see what you mean but it doesn't do anything for me. The language barrier isn't as mysterious or exciting as you might think.