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Plot for next story?

Feisty tomboy gym teacher loses bet with rival school gym teacher
2 (2.6%)
Innocent mother possesed by demon, slowly corrupting her morals
11 (14.3%)
Mom is the chaperone for a group of nasty kids at camp
48 (62.3%)
Followup Chapter 2 to Local MILF belongs to bully
16 (20.8%)

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nicemoms

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on: October 31, 2023, 08:04:59 AM
Previously, I'd written a few "Prompts" for AI. These were starting scenarios for the beginning of a story that users could finish their own way, using AI. There was one prompt in which I posted a fully written version I'd made (Local MILF gets clowned) https://rentry.org/ga2zx, which actually got a pretty positive reception. I decided, what the hell, and gave fully writing a story another shot, and came up with this new piece "Local MILF belongs to bully".

Fair warning, this happened to be possibly the most hardcore story I've written yet. Subjects contain extreme depictions of interracial, humiliation, corruption, mindbreak, etc.

Strangely enough, this isn't even usually the type of stuff I put in my stories. When my stories do venture into extremely hardcore territory, I tend to use comedy to balance it out, but the AI threw in so many unexpected crazy hardcore twists that I decided to roll with it and make as fucked up a story I could. You can read it right here: https://rentry.org/yhwppi

Let me know what you think about the story  :P If this picks up, I may try my hand at writing a few more or posting some on literotica.



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Reply #1 on: November 01, 2023, 02:33:26 AM
Damn.  AI generate that image too?   Definitely do more.



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Reply #2 on: November 01, 2023, 01:10:31 PM
Definitely write more



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Reply #3 on: November 02, 2023, 11:56:08 AM
YES U SHOULD



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Reply #4 on: November 05, 2023, 05:36:02 AM
good one !
would love to read more stories written by you :)



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Reply #5 on: November 09, 2023, 07:15:40 PM
Thanks guys, I'll be writing another story soon, and next time, I think I'll take more effort to improve the writing style. One where you enjoy that it's taking its time.

Have a few ideas for what to start with next, so I made a poll where people can toss in what they'd like to see next. But if anyone has an idea that isn't up there, feel free to shoot it to me anyway.
« Last Edit: November 09, 2023, 07:23:02 PM by nicemoms »



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Reply #6 on: November 09, 2023, 09:46:19 PM
I really love the mom chaperone idea. I would enjoy it more if the MC was the son instead of one of the bullies but that's just my opinion, or at least have multiple povs. And if you'd like we can sticky your thread if you were gonna keep updating frequently. Let me know. Thanks!



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Reply #7 on: November 15, 2023, 02:14:18 AM
I really love the mom chaperone idea. I would enjoy it more if the MC was the son instead of one of the bullies but that's just my opinion, or at least have multiple povs. And if you'd like we can sticky your thread if you were gonna keep updating frequently. Let me know. Thanks!

Yup, same idea here, it'll mostly be from the perspective of the son. Definitely a big amount of votes for it, so that'll be my next one. And thanks, I actually didn't think this far ahead, but I think I'll make a new thread when the story is ready to be posted, since this thread is titled after a single story. The new thread will just be titled "nicemoms Story Collection" or something like that. I'd appreciate it if that thread could be stickied when it's up :P