Author Topic: The Last High School Bullying - STORY  (Read 17120 times)

Deprivedone

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Reply #15 on: August 11, 2022, 08:03:39 PM
This story is so good that it actually got me to create an account on literotica and this site.
Really hope there is a prequel or sequel or another story with similar darkness.
The only thing I would hope for is in addition to the blatant open and direct humiliation to also have secretive bullying. One that I'm always looking for is the mother secretly having the bully cum in his food or drink but never telling the son. Things that the son never learns about but is being done to him that gets the mom off by doing it to him.
Of course the mother always having some reluctance in doing it but can't control her body's response.
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Reply #16 on: June 21, 2023, 11:06:22 AM
Huge thanks an much kudos to you, NNGH! I juat discovered this story on Lit yesterday, and have been reading and reading it ever since. Easily the best BFMM story I have read.

If you could be persuaded to consider a second chapter, I feel there's lots of ground that can be explored. Like Mom and Jake having their adventures at home, Jake and Lennard going to the same college, Mom dealing with dad when he discovers what's going on, making sure she and Jake can carry on, etc. etc.

Whatever you decide, any new stories from you will be greatly appreciated.



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Reply #17 on: June 22, 2023, 10:54:41 AM
I just wanted to mention something clever and very sexy in the story.

It's when Lennard is trying to decide on a dress for his mother, and she tells him: "Well, you know what? Too bad for him, because my baby boy gets to decide today! That'll show him who's the most important to me, won't it?"

Not only is she calling him her baby boy, but saying that his choice will show Jake who is most important to her is left open. Lennard will think it's him, of course. He's her son, after all. But she's really saying that Jake will see that he, Jake, is most important to her, more important than her own son.

A very very nice little gem in a truly excellent story.

Edited to explain: This hot little detail is only in the Literotica posting. In the version posted here Lennard is most important.




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Reply #18 on: September 24, 2023, 06:41:57 PM
Hey. I love your story. But we really need more) Pleeeease) write more about Andrea and Lenny) I think we can continue this story at least for one more episode. In literotica you just need to remove incst and add something like cuckold-son) they you will definetely get more positive comments)