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ukgeeza

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Reply #45 on: October 11, 2022, 07:53:57 PM
one that doesnt follow the same narrative where the mom becomes a slut all of a sudden and totally disregards the sons wellbeing on the second page. its the same shit all the time and gets boring af

the best ones are where the scenario is forced upon them and they dont want it to happen, or the mother doesnt instantly become a cum guzzling sex fiend who starts screaming 'yes im your property, yes im your slut, i hate my son just cum in my ass' all of a sudden

its degenerate and not in an impressive way


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Reply #46 on: February 11, 2023, 11:00:02 PM
Quote from: dizzy91 on September 29, 2022, 02:33:56 AM
My ideal plot would be a story from the point of view of the son's friend: you could tell it in a way that describes every step from flirting into the fucking of his friend's mom, in first person. The kinky thing for me would be that this lucky guy would feel guilty and think about his friendship every time he puts his penis inside this friend's mom holes (mouth would be so hot). You could write about his reflections on betrayal and loyalty, yet he won't hesitate on giving a facial to his friend's mom.

The mom could be separated or divorced, very scorned and open to new experiences, and adventurous woman. Beautiful, but not a supermodel.

For me it would be really hot if the son's friend becomes more evil every time, forgets about his friendship and even plots a threesome with his friend's worse enemy (or cousin, or another friend...)

The cuckold-son must be naive, a guy who believes in loyalty, pretty normal kind of guy. Clueless, completely, about whats happening to his mom. 

The story could escalate by developing a kind of cuckold-hotwife relationship between this lucky guy and his friend's mom, sharing her with classmates, immigrants, neighbors, soccer/basketball teammates, etc.

I leave the scenarios to you, but there are several: birthdays, trips, graduations, and so on.

If you like, we can chat on email about this, and other plots. I hope this helps

That is the friend I seek. I want a friend BULL like that. Perfect story. But my mommy is married. My daddy can't know anything.


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Reply #47 on: February 13, 2023, 03:50:56 AM
Quote from: son of brazilian MILF on February 11, 2023, 11:00:02 PM
That is the friend I seek. I want a friend BULL like that. Perfect story. But my mommy is married. My daddy can't know anything.

Yes, makes lot of sense, instead of having divorced mom, its better to have cheating mom.... the element of cheating gives more fun


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Reply #48 on: February 13, 2023, 04:30:43 AM
Quote from: veenaimo on February 13, 2023, 03:50:56 AM
Yes, makes lot of sense, instead of having divorced mom, its better to have cheating mom.... the element of cheating gives more fun

Yes...


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Reply #49 on: February 13, 2023, 06:16:47 AM
The story Conflicted is a very good start. Good corruption without the need for blackmail, drugs, lying or other dubious consent stuff. Compared to it though, I'd have a slower start with more seduction. There'd be more emphasis on the bullying, but it wouldn't go to ridiculous extremes (I feel Conflicted kinda jumped the shark right at the end on that front). The mom would eventually see the bullying and betrayal as a guilty pleasure, as long as it doesn't go too far. As in that story it would be based on the mom trying to get the bully to stop being physically abusive and start messing with him in other ways, that she would also join in on eventually. Also, I don't really care if there's a husband in the picture or not. I'd also make it first-person narration (the mom) for sure, I think it could really add to the corruption aspect.
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Reply #50 on: February 13, 2023, 06:45:07 AM
Quote from: veenaimo on February 13, 2023, 03:50:56 AM
Yes, makes lot of sense, instead of having divorced mom, its better to have cheating mom.... the element of cheating gives more fun
I'm in the other camp. The way I see it, the mom is 'cheating' on the son in these stories. So it works a bit better if the mom is single.


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Reply #51 on: February 14, 2023, 01:13:14 AM
Seems like the cheating mom and husband strays from the mother bully angle and towards the cheating and cuckolding angle? I think the reason Mother and Son only is so common is it makes it clear that this is about the Son's bully getting his victims mother. Maybe if the father was actually into seeing his wife fucked and son humiliated, double dipping in the parental department?


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Reply #52 on: February 14, 2023, 04:47:50 AM
Quote from: Al_Anon on February 13, 2023, 06:45:07 AM
I'm in the other camp. The way I see it, the mom is 'cheating' on the son in these stories. So it works a bit better if the mom is single.

Agreed. Having the husband usually only distracts from the mother - son relationship. It's good to flesh the story out, but adding too many complications bogs the story down more often than not.


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Reply #53 on: February 15, 2023, 12:41:58 AM
I'm planning to write a story where some kind of "teen god" comes to dominate them all, for example the "main character" has the typical American bimbo mom (cute, blonde, blue eyes and big ass) and her stalker is very mean with the protagonist, but he never gets anywhere with his mother... some time later this teenage god arrives and everyone loves him, he ends up fucking both the protagonist's mother and the stalker's mother


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