Author Topic: Winter Nightmare  (Read 3715 times)

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on: July 18, 2021, 05:00:33 PM
Hey guys it's uglyfucker if you remember me, here's a mom ntr story I've been working on with another writer.
https://archiveofourown.org/works/32660548?view_full_work=true
There will be more to come, at least 15 chapters, hope you like it!



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Reply #1 on: July 19, 2021, 08:18:37 AM
Excellent story so far. I can't wait for the next chapters.  :)



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Reply #2 on: July 19, 2021, 03:21:44 PM
Thanks beholder I will upload chapters 6-10 throughout the week but the ending chapters may be in the further ahead future as I'm still getting it written.



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Reply #3 on: July 19, 2021, 07:00:41 PM
Great. I like realistic stories with a slow-moving plot.  :)



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Reply #4 on: July 20, 2021, 11:49:54 AM
This is Awesome! I can't wait for the next chapters!



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Reply #5 on: July 20, 2021, 04:36:08 PM
Thanks guy I"m also posting all commissions I've had done on my archiveofourown page so you can check them out, some won't be posted here so you can read them there.



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Reply #6 on: July 21, 2021, 06:00:35 PM
Nice to see more writers giving this genre a go and giving their own spin on it, theres certainly a lack of regular new erotica in this genre once you burn through the good stuff. I hope you keep making more great stuff.

Feel free to message me if you want to talk, I am on Kik as well if you send me your username.


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Reply #7 on: July 22, 2021, 12:38:46 PM
Thanks guy I"m also posting all commissions I've had done on my archiveofourown page so you can check them out, some won't be posted here so you can read them there.

Some minor spoilers if you havent read the story yet so dont read.

I got some free time last night to read the story, might be one of the best ones ive read for quite some time for this genre, loved the pacing of the whole story and the build up to the event. You did fool me a bit with the first sex part thinking it was real and I was so confused how it went from 0 to 100 so quickly until I finish that part. Im personally into more realistic stories and overall id say you did a good job at achieving that, looking forward to seeing more from you. Nice to finally find a lengthy story instead of a short one for once, I think longer stories are far superior, gives more time to build everything up and makes the plot way better, overall id give it a 9/10.

Feel free to message me if you want to talk, I am on Kik as well if you send me your username.


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Reply #8 on: July 22, 2021, 01:08:20 PM
Ill check out Winter Nightmare tonight bro, but i already know its gonna be gem !

Im really grateful for all the big ass mom stories you already comissioned uglyfucker, always awesome plots and hot ideas in your story comissions.

Your Plots and Ideas and fearlesswretchs stories are the best what could ever happen to this community imo and im very thankful for it <3

soo keep it up bro ;D !
peace!






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Reply #9 on: July 22, 2021, 03:31:09 PM
thanks so much for the feedback guys. I'll have yet more stories posted soon. Yeah Milflover most of my comissions from now on will be longer. The next one which won't be started until Fall most likely will be another Sam/Shanie NTR story. Going through a few scenarios to figure out which one I like. Might make a thread about it in the future.

We are now up to chapter 9. Stay posted as more chapters will be added in due time. As you wait check out my other stories, especially the other McKay Family Chronicles tales as they are all very similar in tone.
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Reply #10 on: July 22, 2021, 08:45:41 PM
Awesome cant wait to read more of that story.

Great to hear you're making everything longer, improves the quality of stories so much. I dont know how some people that write erotica for literotica for example publish these 1 page stories and think they are long enough, they never have enough build up for the plot but thats just me of course.

Looking forward to more from you.

Feel free to message me if you want to talk, I am on Kik as well if you send me your username.