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Reply #30 on: September 12, 2021, 05:29:15 PM
It's a really good story. I've thoroughly enjoyed them. But I am not satisfied with the last chapter. It took you 12 episodes to build up this whole thing it's still not enough? I was expecting more fro this
chapter especially since it takes you more than two weeks for you to post a chapter. 
chapter 13 posted!



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Reply #31 on: September 13, 2021, 10:55:09 AM
I hope these will not be the last chapters and that you will continue the adventures of our characters. :)

How is the work going with another story - The Good Son? Can we count on the first chapter?



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Reply #32 on: September 13, 2021, 06:13:10 PM
Good plot development! Keep up the good work dude! :) Here's a Fun drawing I made using my
pilot custom 823 fountain pen using iroshizuku tsuki yo ink and
One made with my Montblanc 146 with rose burgundy ink.
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Reply #33 on: September 19, 2021, 06:48:17 AM
Big fan dude keep up the good work! XD  :)



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Reply #34 on: October 04, 2021, 10:35:02 PM
whens chapter 14?



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Reply #35 on: October 05, 2021, 12:56:14 AM
The longer he takes the hotter it'll be. Just give him time.



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Reply #36 on: October 06, 2021, 03:28:12 PM
It's a great story, love this kids angst and the mom is so easy.



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Reply #37 on: October 06, 2021, 11:29:12 PM
Sorry guys I didn't mean to leave this story hanging but I just had a block on where to go next with it. Seems like there was a bit of a negative response to the last few chapters so I wanted to give it a little break. No matter what I promise there will still be two new chapters left. If you want to give ideas you're more than welcome to but I can't promise I'll work them in, I mean it is my story.  Hope you guys can understand.

I'll also be posting chapter one of the Good Son due time and also a new series called Brutal Bites, very short stories to complement these long +20,000 word epics. Very similar to Nebic's sinister shorts, they'll be very short (1500-5000 word) mom ntr one shots that focus more on tension, humiliation, and teasing than explicit sex so it may not be everyone's cup of tea but I'm sure there will be an audience for it.

Of course, I will still be doing long stories as well so don't worry.

I won't bump this thread again until chapter 14 is ready.
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