Secondsamuel has posted a new chapter in 'Mommys Bi Cuckold': https://www.literotica.com/s/mommys-bi-cuckold-caged

Compared to the first chapter, this one ('Caged') focuses way more on the bullying. The main character will do anything just to see more of his mommy, sacrificing what little dignity he may have had. Best of all, the mom admits that she wants the bulling to continue because it turns her on & her son needs to learn his place. Hopefully future chapters exploit that feedback loop, it could lead to some wonderfully fucked up places.

I'm pretty sure I saw something like that on Lit. It was a passing reference at the end of the story if I remember correctly, an 'oh by the way ...' instead of a major plot point. But I have no idea what the rest of the story was, could even have been a different one than what you're thinking of.

And 'Slut for Sons Bully ch2' is back up on Lit https://literotica.com/s/im-a-slut-for-my-sons-bully-ch-02

Hasn't be re-submitted, merely undeleted. Posting date says July 2020 and it has 100+ comments dating back that far. I guess someone at Lit actually read the thing and realized that it didn't break any rules.

Are other genres on lit as bad with this crap as cuckold style stories, where there are idiotic crusaders in the comments of stories they were never going to like? I don't really read much else on there so I have no idea what its like over in Historical or Non-human or whatever.

A couple months ago, I was in a very similar boat. Then I got playing around with AI writers. They're a great bridge. You still need to guide and edit them. But they can come up with some interesting plot points and scenes. And they're better than I am at describing things. Dialog is often pretty decent too.

One thing I have found though is that you usually have to advance the plot yourself. The AI likes to keep going with whatever its been doing. Also, the closer you get to the end of the story, the more writing/editing you're probably going to have to do.

Just this afternoon I used Inferkit to generate about half a complete story (it has a limit of 10,000 generated characters per week). I've also been very impressed with SudoWrite. It is super powerful, has up to a 6 day trial period per email account. But there are others out there. Bloox likes to use NovelAi.

The myth, the legend returns with a new chapter after 10 months.

I'm a Slut for My Son's Bully Ch. 03


https://literotica.com/s/im-a-slut-for-my-sons-bully-ch-03

Enjoy!

Glad I read that when I did. Chapter 3 seems to have disappeared at some point in the last few days, along with ch1. Weird.  I enjoyed that series, particularly because of the fact that it features a sadist for a mom. Few things are as screwed up as a mom who enjoys seeing her son get tormented. Its great.

^ Thanks Zod. Really good so far, albeit a bit cliche for my taste with the standard 6'2 huge bully and weak manlet son. Would have been more funny to have a beta lanklet get his mom stolen away by a mean short brat. But I always enjoy a first person son pov story, there's not enough of them. I messaged the guy on Lit and told him about our forum.

I like the cliche. Big, strong, alpha-males bullying those who are smaller & weaker. The shota-brats are just too annoying for me to read through. Yes, I get that it could be more humiliating or whatever to lose your mom to them.

I think its a difference in how the bully character 'steals' the mom from the son. With the alpha, the mom falls off her pedestal. She almost ceases to be a mom in the son's eyes. The brat sort of becomes a 'new son', replacing the real son. The first has more impact for me, the latter surely does for others.

I want to write big cock bully stories but my writing is poor maybe one day when I improve.

These AI writers are a good entry point, I think. They aren't perfect, and you'll probably want to re-write most of what the bot comes up with. But they can do a decent enough job. And the one I tried, Sudowrite, has functions to rewrite paragraphs to be more descriptive or flow better or whatever.

Biggest flaw is that it gets very confused with relationships & can get fixated on singular plot points. It would be nice if there were a way to give these AI writers hard-coded character traits and relationships. It would save a lot of re-writing of generated text.

I have something written, but the last piece of creative writing that I've ever done was in high school 20ish years ago. Are there any editors on the site that can give some pre-posting critique?