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Fapping Materials / Re: Stories links (Moms vs Bullies)
« on: July 03, 2022, 06:16:30 PM »
Secondsamuel has posted a new chapter in 'Mommys Bi Cuckold':

Compared to the first chapter, this one ('Caged') focuses way more on the bullying. The main character will do anything just to see more of his mommy, sacrificing what little dignity he may have had. Best of all, the mom admits that she wants the bulling to continue because it turns her on & her son needs to learn his place. Hopefully future chapters exploit that feedback loop, it could lead to some wonderfully fucked up places.

Fapping Materials / Re: Stories links (Moms vs Bullies)
« on: June 29, 2022, 12:34:27 AM »
Here is a new one called

A Moms Symbol.
Son finds out what his mother would do for his bully's cock.

Two parts so far. Enjoy!
foogo beat you to it by 2 weeks (see post 338 in this thread)

I'm pretty sure I saw something like that on Lit. It was a passing reference at the end of the story if I remember correctly, an 'oh by the way ...' instead of a major plot point. But I have no idea what the rest of the story was, could even have been a different one than what you're thinking of.

Nebic Update:

Looks like about a month ago, he posted up a new chapter for a story on his site. Not for 'Bully From Hell' but Julia's Descent (up to ch 11 now). While there was 1 little scene between the bully and the cuck's mom in this chapter, that isn't the focus of the story. Mainly, it's about a loser boyfriend and his increasingly depraved girlfriend. Still, new Nebic is new Nebic. Thought I'd pass it along for those that might be interested.

Fapping Materials / Re: Support Andibob69 on Literotica
« on: June 09, 2022, 05:49:13 PM »
And 'Slut for Sons Bully ch2' is back up on Lit

Hasn't be re-submitted, merely undeleted. Posting date says July 2020 and it has 100+ comments dating back that far. I guess someone at Lit actually read the thing and realized that it didn't break any rules.

Are other genres on lit as bad with this crap as cuckold style stories, where there are idiotic crusaders in the comments of stories they were never going to like? I don't really read much else on there so I have no idea what its like over in Historical or Non-human or whatever.

Chapter 9 is actually out. But can only be viewed after paying nebic's patreon. I'm kind of a online friend of his, so i wont give a free link. Its worth paying.

Warning, chapter 9 is very Gay. But if I see where it's leading for the final chapter 10 correctly, the finale is going to be exquisite.
Do you know if uses his patreon as an 'early access' where in a week/month/whenever it will get posted on his site, or is it a 'secret stash' with a bunch of stuff that will only ever be viewable on Patreon?

A couple months ago, I was in a very similar boat. Then I got playing around with AI writers. They're a great bridge. You still need to guide and edit them. But they can come up with some interesting plot points and scenes. And they're better than I am at describing things. Dialog is often pretty decent too.

One thing I have found though is that you usually have to advance the plot yourself. The AI likes to keep going with whatever its been doing. Also, the closer you get to the end of the story, the more writing/editing you're probably going to have to do.

Just this afternoon I used Inferkit to generate about half a complete story (it has a limit of 10,000 generated characters per week). I've also been very impressed with SudoWrite. It is super powerful, has up to a 6 day trial period per email account. But there are others out there. Bloox likes to use NovelAi.

Fapping Materials / Re: Support Andibob69 on Literotica
« on: May 15, 2022, 06:31:20 AM »
I love the storys, if the pague is vainilla there could be another page? They delete the 2nd story, some one have it?

Parts 1-2 are posted there.
thank you

Fapping Materials / Re: Stories links (Moms vs Bullies)
« on: May 10, 2022, 09:05:41 PM »
The myth, the legend returns with a new chapter after 10 months.

I'm a Slut for My Son's Bully Ch. 03

Glad I read that when I did. Chapter 3 seems to have disappeared at some point in the last few days, along with ch1. Weird.  I enjoyed that series, particularly because of the fact that it features a sadist for a mom. Few things are as screwed up as a mom who enjoys seeing her son get tormented. Its great.

Fapping Materials / Re: Ntr master lover.
« on: May 08, 2022, 07:42:06 AM »
Bushido, it looks like NTR Master does accept commissions. Look around on his Unrelenting Cruelty site to find his contact details.
I don't really understand what a master lover is, but Fiverr has writers who will write anything you wish.
I think you've got a slight misread. NTR Master, aka Unrelenting Cruelty, is a writer.

Generally, his stories involve the main character not only getting cucked by his wife (and his often daughter too), but the women will completely betray him. Oh, and the women will typically leave the MC for the bully (hence, NTR Master as a pen name). Think Nebic, without the snuff and you won't be too far off.

Fapping Materials / Re: Stories links (Moms vs Bullies)
« on: May 08, 2022, 07:23:53 AM »
^ Thanks Zod. Really good so far, albeit a bit cliche for my taste with the standard 6'2 huge bully and weak manlet son. Would have been more funny to have a beta lanklet get his mom stolen away by a mean short brat. But I always enjoy a first person son pov story, there's not enough of them. I messaged the guy on Lit and told him about our forum.
I like the cliche. Big, strong, alpha-males bullying those who are smaller & weaker. The shota-brats are just too annoying for me to read through. Yes, I get that it could be more humiliating or whatever to lose your mom to them.

I think its a difference in how the bully character 'steals' the mom from the son. With the alpha, the mom falls off her pedestal. She almost ceases to be a mom in the son's eyes. The brat sort of becomes a 'new son', replacing the real son. The first has more impact for me, the latter surely does for others.

Punch your bully in the neck that should work.
? What does that have to do with anything posted here? The link to the story is dead, because it was posted 3 and a half years ago. Be a bit more cognizant of necroing threads.

I want to write big cock bully stories but my writing is poor maybe one day when I improve.
These AI writers are a good entry point, I think. They aren't perfect, and you'll probably want to re-write most of what the bot comes up with. But they can do a decent enough job. And the one I tried, Sudowrite, has functions to rewrite paragraphs to be more descriptive or flow better or whatever.

Biggest flaw is that it gets very confused with relationships & can get fixated on singular plot points. It would be nice if there were a way to give these AI writers hard-coded character traits and relationships. It would save a lot of re-writing of generated text.

Fapping Materials / Re: Anthology Series:
« on: April 25, 2022, 06:59:36 AM »
The videos are a great idea but the way the mom is acting is a bit hard to believe.
The way I approach things like that is accepting that characters can behave in ways that most people wouldn't. Plus, this is just a snapshot from the middle of things.

A bigger sticking point for me was the 3 hour sex marathons.

About Site, Test Posts, Bugs etc. / Editors?
« on: April 23, 2022, 06:04:20 AM »
I have something written, but the last piece of creative writing that I've ever done was in high school 20ish years ago. Are there any editors on the site that can give some pre-posting critique?

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