Thanks guy I"m also posting all commissions I've had done on my archiveofourown page so you can check them out, some won't be posted here so you can read them there.
Some minor spoilers if you havent read the story yet so dont read.
I got some free time last night to read the story, might be one of the best ones ive read for quite some time for this genre, loved the pacing of the whole story and the build up to the event. You did fool me a bit with the first sex part thinking it was real and I was so confused how it went from 0 to 100 so quickly until I finish that part. Im personally into more realistic stories and overall id say you did a good job at achieving that, looking forward to seeing more from you. Nice to finally find a lengthy story instead of a short one for once, I think longer stories are far superior, gives more time to build everything up and makes the plot way better, overall id give it a 9/10.