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Fapping Materials / Re: Any stories that are longer, with good pacing?
« on: January 23, 2023, 09:15:51 PM »As much as I love this fantasy, I find a lot of the stories in it are very rushed. It's only a slight exaggeration to say that, in half of these stories, it feels like the mother and son has a perfect, flawless relationship in paragraph one, then by paragraph three or four she's deepthroating his bully and doesn't care if her son lives or dies. I know everybody's in a rush to get to the good part, but this always feels so unrealistic and rushed to me that I don't find it hot. I'm not trying to be a hater, I realize these stories are being written for free, and I'm grateful to anyone who takes the time to publish, but I wonder if there are any stories out there that are slower, and take the time to focus on the psychological torment rather than just racing to the sex.
For me, the gold standard of the genre is still Soccer Mom and a Bully (https://www.hentai-foundry.com/stories/user/something1234/15184/Soccer-Mom-and-Bully.) which I think is basically a flawless story. Very well written, great pacing, very hot, and still packs a punch even after reading it many times. Cuckoldson's Conflicted and Watching My Mum Go Jack are up there too. If any of you guys were into those, and have similar recommendations, I'd love to hear them. Thanks!
You should check out this story I just commissioned from Usurpman.... https://www.hentai-foundry.com/stories/user/uspmn/62512/Tiffany-Goes-Back-To-College
It's over 12k words at the moment and just the beginning.