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Fapping Materials / Re: Castle Whorehouse
« on: May 12, 2022, 07:59:56 AM »
Huge fan of your work, it's been posted here before and I've been consistently amazed.

It really made my day to find out that you were still out there writing, let alone have a new story to share. I'll read it tonight.

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Fapping Materials / Re: My once friend [ friend fucks my mom ]
« on: April 29, 2022, 06:00:27 PM »
It's a good one, could use some editing but it's hot.

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Fapping Materials / Re: Mrs Heartless.
« on: April 29, 2022, 06:21:37 AM »
Short but sweet. I always like the bully/teacher dynamic, especially when the bullied has a crush on the teacher too.

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Fapping Materials / Re: Stories links (Moms vs Bullies)
« on: April 29, 2022, 06:15:32 AM »
Those're some great ones, man.

I'm hoping people branch out more. The CHYOA one, "Being An Adventurer is Not Always the Best" only really gets into it as a side story. But it would be easy to put into a sci-fi or fantasy setting. There are some Naruto-esque stories about this already. Like these.

http://www.hentai-foundry.com/stories/user/ThatFutaGuy/48340/Narutos-Mom-doesnt-care-about-him-anymore
http://www.hentai-foundry.com/stories/user/naru1993/33660/Best-Friend-Mother
http://www.hentai-foundry.com/stories/user/BigE2955/32000/Cougar

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Fapping Materials / Re: Story Commison
« on: April 26, 2022, 07:26:25 AM »
Love the idea of the unawareness. There's a story on CHYOA called My Oblivious Mother (and a few others there, or on Literotica from CraptainPlanet and Captain_Ron) that banks on it, you might look to for inspiration for scenes the son might notice but not appreciate for what they are, or some mind trick the bully can pull off on them, making them oblivious regarding shame or embarrassment when he's involved, or the always-favorite, power that makes people really gullible and naive regarding what you're saying, "Oh man I got bit by a snake on my dick, can you suck it out? If you don't get the venom out, I'll die!" Though I appreciate edging would last much longer. Maybe the MILFs are in a hot tub and the son sees one of them sitting higher than the others, figures there's some sort of raised seat. Next time he looks it's another mom sitting on it. And then another. And then all three moms are just lounging in there while bully sits back where the 'rise' was, seemingly no higher than the others.

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I don't really imagine a porn star, I have a vague image in my head of a blonde MILF. I routinely jack off to Tara Tainton and Bettie Bondage, or hentai. But if I'm imagining a situation on my own it's just this ambiguous blonde MILF. If I'm reading a story I usually ignore the pictures with it and imagine whatever's been described.

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Fapping Materials / Re: DevilOfIndia’s Stories on Literotica
« on: March 11, 2022, 07:58:12 AM »
Yeah they're great stories, and you wrote them really well.

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Fapping Materials / Re: Stories links (Moms vs Bullies)
« on: January 16, 2022, 05:18:16 PM »
I think the thing is this is basically just incest. And there's already tons of sites devoted to incest of different types and the genre takes up massive portions of erotic story sites (and other kinds) already, there's even tons of published books and porn about it. While the founders of this forum and the past one are trying to focus on a specific, non-incest fetish that, frankly, doesn't have nearly the showing.

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That's great, I've been really liking the shorts, especially the Zombie apocalypse and science class "experiment" but love the longer stories.

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Fapping Materials / Re: bluvelvet99's new stories
« on: December 21, 2021, 08:32:18 PM »
Body of Knowledge was well done. Dr Pretorious was a nice touch as sort of an arc character.

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Wow those are all such good prompts.

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Fapping Materials / Re: Mom's Judo
« on: October 07, 2021, 01:36:26 AM »
It's really good, great amount of buildup and descriptions.

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Fapping Materials / Re: Winter Nightmare
« on: October 06, 2021, 03:28:12 PM »
It's a great story, love this kids angst and the mom is so easy.

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Fapping Materials / Re: Stories links (Moms vs Bullies)
« on: October 04, 2021, 09:23:36 PM »

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