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A couple months ago, I was in a very similar boat. Then I got playing around with AI writers. They're a great bridge. You still need to guide and edit them. But they can come up with some interesting plot points and scenes. And they're better than I am at describing things. Dialog is often pretty decent too.

One thing I have found though is that you usually have to advance the plot yourself. The AI likes to keep going with whatever its been doing. Also, the closer you get to the end of the story, the more writing/editing you're probably going to have to do.

Just this afternoon I used Inferkit to generate about half a complete story (it has a limit of 10,000 generated characters per week). I've also been very impressed with SudoWrite. It is super powerful, has up to a 6 day trial period per email account. But there are others out there. Bloox likes to use NovelAi.

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Fapping Materials / Re: Support Andibob69 on Literotica
« on: May 15, 2022, 06:31:20 AM »
I love the storys, if the pague is vainilla there could be another page? They delete the 2nd story, some one have it?

https://pornxx.cc/art/search/tag/andibob69.html

Parts 1-2 are posted there.
thank you

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Fapping Materials / Re: Stories links (Moms vs Bullies)
« on: May 10, 2022, 09:05:41 PM »
The myth, the legend returns with a new chapter after 10 months.

I'm a Slut for My Son's Bully Ch. 03


https://literotica.com/s/im-a-slut-for-my-sons-bully-ch-03

Enjoy!
Glad I read that when I did. Chapter 3 seems to have disappeared at some point in the last few days, along with ch1. Weird.  I enjoyed that series, particularly because of the fact that it features a sadist for a mom. Few things are as screwed up as a mom who enjoys seeing her son get tormented. Its great.

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Fapping Materials / Re: Ntr master lover.
« on: May 08, 2022, 07:42:06 AM »
Bushido, it looks like NTR Master does accept commissions. Look around on his Unrelenting Cruelty site to find his contact details.
I don't really understand what a master lover is, but Fiverr has writers who will write anything you wish. Fiverr.com
I think you've got a slight misread. NTR Master, aka Unrelenting Cruelty, is a writer. https://unrelentingcruelty.wordpress.com/

Generally, his stories involve the main character not only getting cucked by his wife (and his often daughter too), but the women will completely betray him. Oh, and the women will typically leave the MC for the bully (hence, NTR Master as a pen name). Think Nebic, without the snuff and you won't be too far off.

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Fapping Materials / Re: Stories links (Moms vs Bullies)
« on: May 08, 2022, 07:23:53 AM »
^ Thanks Zod. Really good so far, albeit a bit cliche for my taste with the standard 6'2 huge bully and weak manlet son. Would have been more funny to have a beta lanklet get his mom stolen away by a mean short brat. But I always enjoy a first person son pov story, there's not enough of them. I messaged the guy on Lit and told him about our forum.
I like the cliche. Big, strong, alpha-males bullying those who are smaller & weaker. The shota-brats are just too annoying for me to read through. Yes, I get that it could be more humiliating or whatever to lose your mom to them.

I think its a difference in how the bully character 'steals' the mom from the son. With the alpha, the mom falls off her pedestal. She almost ceases to be a mom in the son's eyes. The brat sort of becomes a 'new son', replacing the real son. The first has more impact for me, the latter surely does for others.

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Punch your bully in the neck that should work.
? What does that have to do with anything posted here? The link to the story is dead, because it was posted 3 and a half years ago. Be a bit more cognizant of necroing threads.

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I want to write big cock bully stories but my writing is poor maybe one day when I improve.
These AI writers are a good entry point, I think. They aren't perfect, and you'll probably want to re-write most of what the bot comes up with. But they can do a decent enough job. And the one I tried, Sudowrite, has functions to rewrite paragraphs to be more descriptive or flow better or whatever.

Biggest flaw is that it gets very confused with relationships & can get fixated on singular plot points. It would be nice if there were a way to give these AI writers hard-coded character traits and relationships. It would save a lot of re-writing of generated text.

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Fapping Materials / Re: Anthology Series:
« on: April 25, 2022, 06:59:36 AM »
The videos are a great idea but the way the mom is acting is a bit hard to believe.
The way I approach things like that is accepting that characters can behave in ways that most people wouldn't. Plus, this is just a snapshot from the middle of things.

A bigger sticking point for me was the 3 hour sex marathons.

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About Site, Test Posts, Bugs etc. / Editors?
« on: April 23, 2022, 06:04:20 AM »
I have something written, but the last piece of creative writing that I've ever done was in high school 20ish years ago. Are there any editors on the site that can give some pre-posting critique?

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This is somewhat inspired by authors (like BluVelvet) who include a picture or description saying 'I based the mom off of ___'. Basically, when left to your own devices, who do you picture as the mom (aside from your own)?

Personally, my go to is usually Ava Addams. Can't figure out how to get pictures to embed without getting flagged as spam. Sorry.

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Looking for... / Re: (RP needed!) Looking for someone to play the mom!
« on: April 10, 2022, 04:38:13 AM »
not sure what RP but open to chatting about it. I am on discord nickie#1423
On forums, I usually assume re-post. But I'm gunna go with 'role-play' here.

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After searching around for some other AI generators, I found a pretty cool one. Sudowrite https://www.sudowrite.com

Signing up (no credit card) gives a 1 week trial (if you fill out a little feedback card). Looks like it used Literotica and ASSTR as training data based on some curiously credited 'suggested' results. With the trial, there is no limit on how much you can generate (my stories have collectively exceeded 20,000 words in ~5 days).

Sometimes the results are spot on, sometimes they're WTF.  For example, I had this in one of my stories (and this part was largely AI generated as well):

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"Well, I'm sure he's just a bully, he probably isn't thinking anything beyond that."

"Oh, he's way more than that. He gets really nasty Mom. Like, this one time he-." Tanner stopped himself, he wasn't sure if he should tell his mom this story. It was incredibly humiliating. Tanner was already flushing with embarrassment.

"Go on son, tell me. I'm sure it was nothing. You can tell mommy." Madalyn encouraged. She loved hearing about Tanner getting humiliated.

"Well, when I was showering after gym class Branden
and it offered up this gem:
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was there. He had a big, black dildo in his hand, I thought it was a broom handle or something." Tanner said, hesitantly.

"A dildo?" Madalyn asked, her eyebrow raised.

"Yeah, you know, a dildo. It's an adult sex toy, mom. Yeah, and he was pointing it at me and laughing at me. Then he grabbed it and shoved it in my butt. I screamed and covered my face."

"My God Tanner. It must have hurt." Madalyn said, her hand cupping his cheek. Tanner turned away, embarrassed.

"What did he do?" Madalyn asked, curiosity getting the better of her.

"Well, he laughed at me and pushed the dildo in and out of my butt, it was painful but I didn't let him know that. Then he shoved it in my mouth. I gagged, it tasted nasty."

Up until that point, I didn't even have anything sexual in the story. The AI just went 'Yeah, the wimp should get a dildo up the ass here'

Then again, the AI can get very, very stupid:
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"Oh my God Tanner, that sounds so nasty." Madalyn was afraid that her son was going to be hurt by Branden.

"Well, it was worse than that. One time he came over to my house. You know our house?"

Usually they're in the ball park though. One thing I like about this over the other one is that it gives you a set of generated options rather than just one. I think its normally 5, but I've seen as few as 2. I've often found myself merging 2 or 3 results into a single piece of generated story. I have noticed that the AI is terrible at keeping character relations straight. It has a character detail page but it seems to mostly ignore whatever is in there. I even tried to 'remind' the generator about who was what to whom at every other opportunity and it was still hit and miss. Oh well.

It also has some neat functions, like a brainstormer for plot points, characters, settings, whatever. Tell it what you're looking for (ways a bully can humiliate a wimp), some optional context (characters are teenage boys) and a couple examples (have sex with his mom; pants him in class; beats him up) and it will offer up a bunch of suggestions that you accept or reject. Each time you yay/nay a choice another pops up until the AI can't think of anything else. So, from my example, the AI suggested "destroys all his possessions"; "steals his girlfriend"; "pisses in his shoes"; "ties him to a tree naked" and so on.

Another function is highlighting some text and asking the AI to do some editing. It can rephrase things, be more descriptive, more concise, show more inner conflict, or 'custom'. It also has a separate tool to generate a detailed description of specific words or terms.

The 'generate' button (they call it 'wormhole') has a few options (neutral, ominous, extraordinary, and funny) but I haven't found much use for the variations. At least not for what I'm after.

I will have to go back and tidy up the stories I've got once my trial expires, maybe post one or two of them here. The one with Madalyn, Tanner, and Brenden is a wonderfully fucked up story. Mom slowly gets corrupted by her own thoughts until she teams up with Brenden where she gets even more depraved.

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I burned about half my freebie actions when the story I had randomly kept trying to go into fantasy land with dragons and magical crystals and some witch named Galena. Only after I went through everything did I notice the story settings over on the right-hand side.

The prompt I used was "Billy was feeling sad. He found out today that his bratty sister had started dating his bully Andrew";

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Fapping Materials / Re: Ranking The Epics
« on: March 23, 2022, 04:03:41 AM »
All of those have at least one thing that I actively dislike (as opposed to simply not caring for). Sometimes its content (particularly true with Nebic); sometimes its characters; sometimes its as dumb & petty as perspective (for me, a story needs to either be from the cuck's POV or 3rd person). So I can't really say that I have a favourite among them. I've tried to think of a longer story story within the genre that I loved. But none come to mind.

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Fantasy Discussion / Ex 'turns' mom against son
« on: March 18, 2022, 12:01:58 AM »
Hey, does anybody know of stories where the girlfriend cheats on & breaks up with the main character -only to go on and share her new man with ex's mom? Oh, and I've already read the 'Chelsea' series by CandyCigars. All versions. More than once.

Reversing the order works too. Mom fucks bully (pseudo-cucking son) then convinces sons gf to cheat.

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