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Fapping Materials / Mother and Son Fall
« on: December 09, 2019, 12:24:50 AM »
Hi all, I'm currently writing a story based on my answer in the plot thread. http://bullyfucksmymom.com/fapping-materials/what-would-be-your-ideal-plot-for-a-bully-story/
This is the first story I've ever written and though it isn't finished I feel like it's at a good enough point to show. It is currently 5574 words so it's pretty lengthy. Please keep in mind that this is a very rough draft and thus you should expect a few grammatical errors and other things. I would love some feedback from you all to see how it is. I hope you all enjoy!
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1XwPjslJKMmY4P-lbtE8vKsDdrOKW5g1FEuKKEk_dW9o/edit?usp=sharing
This is the first story I've ever written and though it isn't finished I feel like it's at a good enough point to show. It is currently 5574 words so it's pretty lengthy. Please keep in mind that this is a very rough draft and thus you should expect a few grammatical errors and other things. I would love some feedback from you all to see how it is. I hope you all enjoy!
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1XwPjslJKMmY4P-lbtE8vKsDdrOKW5g1FEuKKEk_dW9o/edit?usp=sharing