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Fapping Materials / Re: Mother and Bully Original Story Chapter Three
« on: October 12, 2021, 12:40:54 PM »
I like your story. You have a real good thing going.
The way you made the son know about the sex and you added blackmail to make things continue.
I'm looking forward to the rest of the story.
If only you could write 10 chapters a day  ;D

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Fapping Materials / John's story
« on: August 28, 2021, 12:04:22 PM »
I read this story about a bully who steals hiw victim's GF.

https://archiveofourown.org/works/24580276

But the story is incomplete, we pass from middle of chapter 5 to middle of chapter 7. There are many skipped part in the story so it's unreadable. Does anyone have the complete story?

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Fapping Materials / Re: Mother and Bully original story Chapter Two
« on: June 20, 2021, 03:39:08 PM »
Honestly, the story is very good so far. Maybe you could rework on the seduction but I liked it fine. She doesn't know he is a bully so it's not like she has to resist the seduction and with her character, it is realistic that she does succumb easily.

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Fapping Materials / Re: Mother and Bully original story Chapter Two
« on: June 02, 2021, 02:18:07 PM »
So hot. I don't know how you'll continue but it's one of the best bully/mother story I've read.

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Fapping Materials / Re: Mother and bully original story
« on: May 09, 2021, 01:01:00 AM »
Very nice. I like the fact that there is a long sex scene. Very clever use of the phone  ;)
I'm waiting impatiently for the next chapter.

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here is the continuation of the story! It starts from the beginning. I hope you guys are able to see it.
You have to login, to see files and be able to open them!

Writer: Fearless Wretch

Thank YOU

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Fapping Materials / Re: Feedback for story
« on: January 08, 2021, 04:26:08 PM »
I read the 5 chapters and so far it's good. I'm looking forward to more sex in future chapters because it's a little lacking right now.
I don't know where you want to go but I would personally like real sex scenes at some point. Maybe from a different point of view so that the son still stays clueless or maybe he sees things.

It would have been hot if katy licked he "protein shake" on coach's desk. Put more visual in the story instead of always noises.

PS: it's not practical to read your story in one go. You have to scroll down to read but the newest chapters are up.

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Fapping Materials / Re: Stories links (Moms vs Bullies)
« on: August 06, 2020, 05:54:18 PM »
Found a new story https://www.literotica.com/s/bully-impregnates-mom

It's just awful. If he spent more than 5 minutes writing it I'd be surprised.

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Fapping Materials / Re: Mother and Son Fall
« on: December 09, 2019, 11:42:05 PM »
I'm not reading it if you don't structure your story. It has paragraphs but they are big blocks of everything. Separate your narration from your dialogs. It hurts my eyes to read in this format. I read your plot and it could be interesting and I'll tell you what I think once you make easier to read.

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Fapping Materials / Re: What would be your ideal plot for a bully story?
« on: November 27, 2019, 04:22:06 PM »
I have plenty of ideas but there is one which I like most. When I read erotic stories, I want hot sex and with bullies' stories, if it's from the son's POV, the sex is indirect. It's hearing through the walls or from a phone.

So my idea is to have a son read his mother's diary. At the start, we learn the mother is gone with a message "I'm not coming back" left on the kitchen table. Parents are divorced (or the father is dead) so it was just the mother and son in the house. The son wants to know what happened to his mother. He noticed the changes from the past six months. She dressed more sexily, she was gone more often and the previous well kept house wasn't anymore. He goes through his mother's belonging and finds her diary.
At first it's all about the stress from work, raising a child on her own and her inability to find a good man. Then it changes. He reads how his mother scheduled an appointment with his bully's parents after her son came home with a bruise. The parents were there but the bully was. He talks to her how he is better than her son, how much of a real man he is and how hot she is. He half seduced and half forced himself into her. The son is shocked by this revelation and more shocked when he reads that his mother came duing the rough sexual encounter. She is horrified by the fact that her body enjoyed being brutally fucked while her mind denied the pleasure.
After that the diary goes about how she couldn't stop thinking about the bully and how she slowly submitted to him. The sex becomes nastier and nastier as she lost herself in the relationship. She even quitted her job to spend more time with the bully and used her savings and her son's college founds to pay for everything the bully wanted. As the son reads the diary, he also remembers some events of the diary from his POV. Like a discussion between his bully and his friends about his new bitch and the new watch she bought him. Or when his mother missed his birthday because of work but the diary read she was gangbanged by his bully and his friends.

With this setup, you have both POVs to have the best experience. The hot sex and the degradation thanks to the mother's POV and the son's humiliation thanks to his POVs.

You can even have the son read the diaries for weeks and jack off to it. You see how he is changing from this as he begins to imagine his crush and bullies fucking until he reads that it actually happened.

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Fapping Materials / Re: Brad The Bully Story
« on: November 26, 2019, 10:57:20 PM »
Yes clearly the reason for the lack of "quality” content is because everyone is stealing each other’s material.

I just want everyone to know that I  thought about it and weighed my opinions on this for a very long time before I decided go out of my way to “STEAL” every last chapter of this retarded story and share it here. I don’t know if anyone remembers when Bottom originally posted the first book on literotica, but everything was there and it was FREE. He took it off and started a patreon where he would start posting chapters 1 or 2 at a time, when I asked him why he said it was to motivate him to keep writing the story. Sick. Since then not much has changed only I have to pay for it now and the content is released a whole lot less frequently and the QUALITY of the content is significantly disappointing after what I’ve come to expect of authors in this genre especially bottom. His patrons are writing the story for him at this point and if you call that quality then by all means keep paying for it. The ONLY reason I "stole” it to share here is because if the lack of content, it’s dry as hell out there for this genre especially if you guys don’t know where to look. I’ve been with this community for a long time; Since before this forum, before the forum before this one, and even before the forum that Bluvelvet started before that. I saw a frequently asked question in the topics and I saw something that I could provide for the community I care about. If you ask me, the reason for the lack of quality content isn’t because people are stealing or people don’t know how to make it. It’s because people take something good and then turn it into bullshit and want to charge you for it.

@Volkona and if you had a guts to speak up on this then why don’t you have the guts to create your own "quality content”. My response to you is fuck the system, fuck your equal lack of effort, and fuck your dumbass waste of a reply to this topic.

*furthermore I want everyone who reads this to know that for the reasons listed above and before, That I don’t like this story anymore and am no longer supporting it and as such will no longer be able to "steal” this “quality” content for you.

I hate Patreon. I find the concept of having to pay a subscription to some unknown guy who doesn't have any obligation to actually go through his promises aberrant. A lot of people creating their patreon do it to have a monthly pay check doing half assed work. I understand Bottom, he wants to make money of his work. He should sell his books when they are finished just like he did when he wrote book 1. It's amazing how you can buy a book for 20$ with everything edited nice and clean but with patreon you'll pay twice as much (if not more) for less content and it might never be finished.

So thank you for sharing this story. I like parts of it but I honestly skip 80% of it. I don't care for Pissmoap's humiliations and it's becoming harsher and harsher. I wonder how long it took for book 1 to be finished and since when book 2 began. I feel like book 1 was done quickly but it's been forever since book 2 started.

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Fapping Materials / Re: Brad The Bully Story
« on: June 02, 2019, 08:44:08 PM »
Is there anybody who has book 2 after chapter 14?
I don't like the story enough to support the author's patreon (I skip everything about the son's humiliation so I skip a lot of the story) but I would like to read the rest.

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