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Fapping Materials / Re: The Last High School Bullying - STORY
« on: June 01, 2022, 05:38:57 AM »hey,
the story is pretty amazing . I love that it's long enough story unlike many other stories which is only one page. Mom was fantastic. If I may add my opinion I think I would have liked if son's and mother's emotional states and feelings were mentioned.
Anyway amazing story. Hope this will be the first chapter of a few more chapters yet to come.
Hey, thank you for your kind words! Especially the part about the mom being 'fantastic'! I don't know why but that makes me really happy
Is there any specific part/scene of the story where you would have liked to read more about the emotional state of mother or son?
Tbh I don't think I'll be writing a continuation do this story any time soon. For now, this very much feels like a finished and concluded short story to me. But I have ideas for other stories which I hope to write soon!
Hi. Very cool short story. Very good that you will work on others. I liked the first one very much. I think you should also try to write some longer one with a more complex story someday. Good luck to you.