I loved the horror ideas. Voted for Catching the Booty Monster, seemed a little more fun. Mom's Appetite was good concept too but not a vore fan. I'm sure the Good Son will turn out hot.

It's a good story, well done. The descriptions are great. I do like the current, camping thread. Very horror movie-like.

Plotwise I think maybe things happened too fast, sometimes it can be good to draw things out. And otherwise the protagonist was fairly empty, just a fat horny guy. As you can see from the name of the forum there's more intimate relationships that can be taken advantage of. Not all bullies have to be huge tough jocks, after all, some can just be huge fatasses. Doesn't have to be a bully, of course, could be a detested cousin, a teacher Jason got fired, doesn't have to be an enemy, either, maybe just some fat friend of Jason's that never really liked him but always wanted to pound his mom. Either way, someone with a connection and background. Having a back and forth where Jason sees his hot, successful mom falling for Richard but not -bam- instantly a bimboslut could be a good way to build it. Maybe Dick can only make small changes, one a day or something. Jason has to find ways to interfere (until Dick uses some of his days to keep Jason distracted, could be even turning him into a girl, or making him go try and have sex with all his friends, or Dicks friends).

Really loved the stories.

You might check the stories thread there's a bunch in there. Otherwise here.

This guy has a bunch.
http://www.hentai-foundry.com/stories/user/Blackseed

SlutWriter has done a few
https://archiveofourown.org/works/21040073
https://archiveofourown.org/works/23077072
https://archiveofourown.org/works/21216662

And a personal favorite
http://www.hentai-foundry.com/stories/user/Contingency/40867/Amira-Finds-God

Never knew my mother, and when I imagine these situations I am more of a third party observer. I like the son being hurt, I like the mom being very sexual with someone she shouldn't be sexual with (due to age, and rivalry with her son). Basically I've been reading erotica since the 90s now and there's just...so much mom/son incest porn, and it's so basic. "My mom is really hot, I never really noticed over the summer, but she (describes ridiculously hot woman). I'm just an average guy, 6'1", captain of the football team. My dick is nothing special, 8 inches soft. I've lusted over her but know it's just a wet dream. Next scene: OMG my mom saw me jerking off. Next scene: Well she doesn't care that she's wiped my ass and is married to my dad, turns out all she needed to see was a big cock so now I have sex with my mom all the time." I've read so many I've kinda grown to hate them. A lot of these stories, the bully/son stories, at least have some turmoil in them. Even if it's not from the mom, it's from the son. There's some depth there, and wild ideas. I get that some people like to pretend its their mom, or want it to happen to their mom, I don't really understand it, I imagine they're younger perhaps still living with their mom and dealing with bullies and it's just some experiment, the downing of an important figure in their life.

No not real people, just fantasies. I'd like to write some stories, I had ideas too, but they're not based on anyone real.

I'd probably feel like that was fucked up.

No but I'm the possessive sort.

There's some brutal ones out there. The most extreme one that pops to mind is the Nebic one where the mom and three "friends" blind the son then spend time tormenting and humiliating him until they kill him.

https://storieswithnebic.wordpress.com/2016/07/08/lights-out/

It's here
https://www.darkwanderer.net/threads/mum-falls-off-her-pedestal.11330/
And here
https://storiesonline.net/s/61398/mum-falls-off-her-pedestal