Oh yeah that was my script, actually glad someone else was able to post it because I don't have it anymore haha. But yeah, I originally had planned to make it a multi-parter, but around that time, the subreddit started cracking down on that sort of content and I lost a bit of motivation afterward. I remember starting a script for a second chapter but that unfortunately is gone now due to the drive holding it getting junked.
I might see about trying a new chapter relatively soon, have to see if Jaye would be interested in pursuing a sequel.